Date: 08/14/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
well I just finishede this and I must say it is very interesting. I started planning on just giving it a chapter or 2 to get me intersted and then It was like...well ok one more chapter...ok one more....and i couldnt stop. it was very good. I'm going to go read the next one now...oh ps...is it too late to get in on one of the Bill and Tom plushies?
Date: 07/11/10 01:38 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
this was amazing.... I need more :P
Date: 06/30/10 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Sooo wow. I'm confused lol but I love it good work
Date: 05/17/10 02:06 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I really liked this story, but I don't think that it was... whattayacallit, thourough. The "Gustav" personality wasn't in it at all, and it seemed kind of choppy-- not very discriptive, and the ending had me at a loss.
I just don't get why you'd end the story here and start a sequal, because really the story isn't finished. There was a beginning and a middle and that was it. The plot was just introduced and BAM the stories over.
IMO, the sequal shouldn't of started here. You should of just continued with the story cuz there's no ending.
Besides all that, it was a very interesting and different story and I really liked it. I just wished it was ended properly.
Author's Response: The sequel will be the end. It explains more of everything. thanks for the review.
Date: 05/16/09 10:11 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
oh my!!!!!!!! i love it!!! i just wow this stry was awsome and i also the movie sybil lol just thought id say tht
Date: 04/23/09 03:12 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Wow. Seriously this was amazing. It is so different from anything I ever read on here. Really well done.
Date: 04/23/09 03:12 am Title: Chapter Eleven
OMG! God I absolutely love your story to death. You are an amazing author and your story did a complete 180, I love the way you turned it though and I am going to read the sequel now :)
Date: 04/14/09 01:23 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
ooooohhhhhh. i can NOT wait for the sequel
Date: 04/10/09 06:20 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I'm so confused! 0.o
Can't wait for the sequel so I'm not anymore! xD
Date: 04/09/09 09:27 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
YAY! i was reviewer 150???!!!! it's the second time this happns to mee! LOL
i do love this storie! its so amazing now i kinda got it but i just dont know how u gonna solve this!! its like?! okay his own system got a personal doc that's helping him to go back to his life n in the real life i guess bill will make him go to a doc n from both sides he will have a psycologist lol!
...n yup! i will read Becoming Trapped!!!!
Date: 04/09/09 08:33 pm Title: Prologue
Woah ! This story was so interesting and kind of confusing. It was really well written ! *claps*
I can't wait for the sequel !
Date: 04/09/09 04:53 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I KNEw it!!!
Man I can't wait for the sequel!:D
The story is totally awesome so far!
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews! I am glad you liked it.
Date: 04/09/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter Ten
hmmmmmm, I'm really starting to think where TH is IS the real tom!
Date: 04/09/09 04:23 pm Title: Chapter Nine
ohhh I see how Bill became in his mind. Coolness! Oh, you have a book!, I'm gonna check that out too^^
Date: 04/09/09 04:17 pm Title: Chapter Eight
oh jeej a sequel^_^ This Chappy was very entertaining too:D GOsh, I love you fro writing this:D
Date: 04/09/09 04:11 pm Title: Chapter Seven
hmmm...or Tom is having some serious nightmare and this whole 9 personalities thing is the nightmare OR the story is just as it is and the part where he was in the hotel room was just a dream.
Very fascinating story!
Date: 04/09/09 03:52 pm Title: Chapter Six
awwwwwwwwwwwww this one was loads of fun! xD
Date: 04/09/09 03:47 pm Title: Chapter Five
Okay, so Bill wasn't tom's lil bro in real? That's all imagination of Rosie?
And was that his mom?
Date: 04/09/09 03:41 pm Title: Chapter Four
xD lol Vicky makes the doc sooooo nervous! Weird that she sees herself when looking in the mirror.
I wonder if these people have really existed in the world or are totally created by Tom's mind.