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Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/07 03:14 am Title: Breathing For Two

He smiled to himself as his chest rose and fell in perfect rhythm with Tom's beneath him, and he drifted off to sleep with the knowledge that he and Tom fit together perfectly, both inside and out.

*dies* that was too beautiful.

Reviewer: kaulitzxlovee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/15/07 02:03 am Title: Breathing For Two

He knew Tom was used to Bill sitting all over him now, used to his personal space being a thing of the past. Tom had even told him - Bill was his personal space.

^ Cutest line ever.
God Haylz, you & your stories make me cuhreem.

Reviewer: LilllyRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 10:34 am Title: Breathing For Two

ouu! it is so long!!! too good!!!! thannnns for nice reading ;)

Reviewer: xEmoPenguinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/07 03:35 pm Title: Breathing For Two

lurrrve it! =D x

Reviewer: Scarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/07 01:10 pm Title: Breathing For Two

Really HOT! and soooo sweeet! Maybe a sequel?
THAAANKS!

Reviewer: Nightingale Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/07 12:50 pm Title: Breathing For Two

THANK YOU

Author's Response: Anything for you *hugs* :)

Reviewer: Razzle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/04/07 04:43 am Title: Breathing For Two

i think...

you might have killed me.

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/07 01:06 am Title: Breathing For Two

awwwww PERFECT
u write AWESOME,with all the deatils...
love it

Reviewer: Chatonne Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/07 11:50 pm Title: Breathing For Two

GUH
It's been toooo long since you've posted anything. Whenever I see that you've updated, I get so giddy, and this is the perfect example of why.

Reviewer: in grayscale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/03/07 10:30 pm Title: Breathing For Two

Aw that was amazing! :)

Reviewer: deepshadows87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/07 10:23 pm Title: Breathing For Two

awesome story Haylzee as always :D
keep it, i love your stories!

Reviewer: RcA Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/07 10:12 pm Title: Breathing For Two

:O It was PERFECT! Well-- the sex was not so perfect, actually (lol), but that's what made the fic so lovely and real and tender and... guhhh. Each of them was trying so hard to make it work for the other. I loved that! Hooray for Haylzee and for first time twins! :DD

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