Date: 11/13/08 01:02 am Title: Calamity Fair
yum yum YUM
First review, but I've read some of your other stuff..
absolutely delicious xo
Date: 09/16/08 05:47 pm Title: Calamity Fair
I think you should do a sequel. Tom's reaction to the picture being on the front page. That would be fun *giggles*.
Date: 09/16/08 05:46 pm Title: Calamity Fair
I think you should do a sequel. Tom's reaction to the picture being on the front page. That would be fun *giggles*.
Date: 09/07/08 03:40 pm Title: Calamity Fair
*___________*
*bows* awesome! hot hot hot hot hot!!!
oh, and
“Um.” Bill looked away. He’d seen the mock up for the magazine the day before; he knew exactly where that photo was going. “I don’t think they’re putting it in the magazine…”
^ that made me lol xD
Date: 09/05/08 10:36 am Title: Calamity Fair
*grins* I think the last line is my favorite- I mean, I would adore seeing a tiny, bitty little sequel with Tom's reaction, lol-
Magazine?; $4.50
Guitar?; $249.99
Baby Brother, splashed in pose over Vanity Fair?; Priceless.
Date: 09/02/08 02:07 pm Title: Calamity Fair
*bursts out laughing at the end* That was a wonderful idea, posting that picture at the end. I was just about to run off to my own Tokio Hotel picture folder to find it, but you made it so that wasn't necessary. :D
And... and Tom's "...Can you make sure nothing happens to my guitar either?" just... melted my little heart. And then how Bill got all flustered afterward... Aww! ^___^
Date: 09/01/08 01:08 pm Title: Calamity Fair
Lol the chapter end notes made me giggle. And the mac and cheese and.. what was the quote, oh. The precious baby bit hehe. ♥
And omg, that was so hot. I loved it just as much as I thought I would. :3
Date: 09/01/08 12:10 pm Title: Calamity Fair
wow, this is so smexy and naughty. A perfect piece for the twinnie's birthday.
And the ending is simply genius.
Date: 09/01/08 07:45 am Title: Calamity Fair
Haha, the ending made me giggle, and when the picture came I laughed xD Yeah, that pic is really... mmmh.
I think I died and went to heaven. Gibson AND car-smut *_*
Date: 09/01/08 06:48 am Title: Calamity Fair
Lol. Great story. Loved it. The Vanity Fair pic is one of the hottest pics of Bill EVER!
Date: 09/01/08 06:48 am Title: Calamity Fair
Nope you missed letters in words, like when you meant to write 'this' you missed the T and wrote 'his', so that's why MSword wouldn't have picked that up.
Author's Response: Hmm sorry, I see a couple of typos as always, but nothing I would consider a lot of spelling mistakes. :)
Date: 09/01/08 06:23 am Title: Calamity Fair
xD hahah bill always gets tom to do anything for him eh? ^^
hot story!
Date: 09/01/08 05:57 am Title: Calamity Fair
;D
There were a lot of spelling mistakes but the story was excellent!!
Author's Response: lol not according to Microsoft Word spell check, and I think it knows what it's doing ;)
Date: 09/01/08 05:01 am Title: Calamity Fair
I think this was the best thing I could read before bed. The twins are adorable and the whole thing was so hot. Fantastic as always.
Date: 09/01/08 01:46 am Title: Calamity Fair
haylz writes the hottest stories
Date: 09/01/08 01:37 am Title: Calamity Fair
Seriously hot car sex. You did a great job with defining their characters, the personalities, in this one-shot, as well. Nice. :)
Date: 09/01/08 12:24 am Title: Calamity Fair
*rolls over and dies*
That was beyond amazing... and so incredibly sexy.
:DD
Date: 08/31/08 11:49 pm Title: Calamity Fair
HOT!
-Wipes drool off corner of mouth and favorites-
Date: 08/31/08 11:47 pm Title: Calamity Fair
As always, no one does it better than you. When it comes to one shots, you never cheat them and they're always so completely thorough. I loved it and then some. :)
Date: 08/31/08 11:46 pm Title: Calamity Fair
nom nom nom