Date: 02/26/09 08:41 pm Title: The End
I love how he was in a coma and imagining everything! Right? And the voices were everyone visiting him in the hospita and talking to him. And when he jumped of the bridge, he finally woke up. Good job.
Date: 09/18/08 03:53 pm Title: The End
Great story :D I already got it in the second chapter ;) I loved reading this ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 08/31/08 09:31 pm Title: The End
-ZZOOMMGGZZ-
This was awesome.
Pure Awesome.
It totes makes sense now.
OMG this was so awesome.
Great job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to me;D
Date: 08/31/08 09:08 pm Title: The End
Not confusing at all, once you explained it a bit. Very good, I love the ending. It was nice because we were all expecting Tom to commit suicide and see them all that way, but then that twist, it was very good :D
Author's Response: Thank you so so so much! I've worked a lot on this fiction...it was the first one I wrote, but then I kinda forgot about it and I wanted it to be good so I stopped writing on it for a while so I could think more about it...I'm really happy with the result^^
Date: 08/31/08 05:13 pm Title: The End
Lovely story, Maddie.
I enjoyed reading it and I can assure you it wasn't confusing at all.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much^^
Author's Response: Thank you SO much^^
Date: 08/31/08 12:01 pm Title: Too much
Please continue!!!!!! Amazing chapter, I love the flashbacks :D
Author's Response: the story is already finished and I'm posting the last chapter tonight. I just have to post the chapter on my other story first^^
Date: 08/30/08 06:20 pm Title: Another day
Yeah, I'd read another chapter if you posted it. Good story so far :D