Date: 03/04/09 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
damn this was unexpected
Author's Response: I want to make this story more unpredictable than the whole "Bill and Tom walk into the sunset holding hands", kind of thing! Thanks for your review, xxx *hug*
Date: 03/04/09 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
omg i cant believe he did that to his son!
Author's Response: I can't believe it either, but Gordon is such a bastard and unfortunately, Tom is the one he takes his anger out on. Thanks for your review, xxx *hug*
Date: 03/04/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
this chapter broke my heart-it was so sad :(. but the plot is getting interesting. when i was reading this, my face just flared up and smoke puffs came out of my ears. im so mad at gordon. i hope bill can make it better for tom :(. and thanks for updating. im really really really into ur story now.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry that this chapter broke your heart, but thanks so much for saying that the plot is getting interesting, because nothing is always so happy like it has been in the previous chapters. rnrn And an even bigger thank you for saying that your into my story, that means so much to me! xxx *hug*
Date: 03/04/09 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
Poor Tom I hope his father doesn't try that again.
Author's Response: Yes, poor Tom indeed. Only time will tell if he tries to do it again. Thanks for your review. xxx *hug*
Date: 02/21/09 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
awww i hope simones okk , ty its vveryy goood xx
Author's Response: I'm sure Simone will be fine! Thanks very much for your review! *gives hot chocolate with marshmallows!* xxx
Date: 02/05/09 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
*Sweet, hot coco and everything :)
*I like how Bill gets all defensive about Tom :)
*Bill has a point, a father that's always away, what about his family?
*She didn't hear from him for 3 months? :O Some thing's not right...
*Don't worry to much, Bill, every thing's going to be okay eventually. *gives him a night kiss on his forehead*
It was a filler chapter, but I still liked it :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Yes, that is bad not hearing from someone for 3 months, but hopefully everything will be ok! And thank you for saying you liked it, means a lot to me! *gives hot chocolate with marshmallows!* xxx
Date: 02/04/09 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
I think you should write a chapter after the whole car crash incident in Tom's p.o.v., considering he WAS kicked out. I think it'd be interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks for your idea, I really appreciate it, and will consider writing it. xxx *gives hot chocolate with marshmallows!!*
Date: 02/03/09 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
im kinda worry about their father, it would be devastating if he actually had an affair. and LOVE DA CHAPTER!!!!
and i would like mine with those colorful marshmallows please =^.^=
Author's Response: It would be so devastating if he was, but hopefully he isn't! And thanks so much for saying that you loved the chapter. I thought it was really boring! And of course you can have the colourful marshmallows! *gives hot chocolate with lots and lots of colourful marshmallows!* xxx
Date: 02/03/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
yay you finally updated, i really missed this story a lot, but now you're back or at least i hope so!!!
thank you so much for updating.
awwwe the last part was so sweet!!!
i feel bad cos bill's mom is back, tom has to leave=((i hope his dad isn't in a mood=S
Author's Response: Awww thanks! You missed it? Thats such a compliment! I'm afraid Tom had to leave, but who knows, he might be able to stay soon. Thanks so much for your review! (:P
Date: 02/03/09 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
update soon plz thx=]
Author's Response: I will! Don't worry. Thanks for your review! *gives hot chocolate with marshmallows!* xxx
Date: 02/03/09 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hey, its a sweet story hopefully Bill gets the courage to tell his mom about him & Tom..Love the story.
Author's Response: Hey. Thanks so much for you review. And Bills courage will appear soon...maybe! *gives hot chocolate with marshmallows!* xxx
Date: 02/03/09 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
aww that sucks that his dad isn't around much! For Simone's sake i really hope he IS indeed on a business trip.
Author's Response: Yeah, it really does suck that he's away. And I also hope that he's just on a buisness trip as well. It would lead to so much hurt. Thanks so much for your review. xxx *gives hot chocolate with marshmallows!*
Date: 02/03/09 11:31 am Title: Chapter 8
Awesome! And I love hot chocolate!(with marshmallows on top, of course) XP And i love "Only 24 hours ago he had just had sex with Tom" hahaha!
Author's Response: Lol!! Thanks so much for your review! *gives hot chocolate with marshmallows!* xxx
Date: 01/29/09 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I love you darling.
Thank you so so so much for this update.
Im honored for it to be dedicated to me :).
Its time for a new update come on on on.
get MOTE-T-VATED. :)
Author's Response: Awwww! I love you too! You deserved for the chapter to be dedicated to you. You honestly helped me finish the chapter and post it! And I'm going to start work on the next chapter tonight, so it will be up shortly. It definitely won't be a really long wait! Thanks so much for the review! xxx (:P (gangsta smiley as promised!)
Date: 01/19/09 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
poor billa....
Author's Response: Yes, poor Billa, but he is okay now! Thanks for your review! (:P xxx
Date: 01/18/09 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
So I wonder who's gonna be giving Bill's lessons? -sly smile-
Author's Response: Lol! Yes I wonder who...! Thanks for your review!(:P xxx
Date: 01/18/09 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
this is an amazing story
Author's Response: Thanks so much! xxx (:P
Date: 01/18/09 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
thank you for updating
*sends you a cup of inspiration*
love your story (:
Author's Response: Thanks so much! With your cup of inspirtation, I can do anything!! (:P xxx
Date: 01/18/09 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 7
*“I love it when you take control of me.”
-> I bet he does. *eyebrow wiggle*
*A blushing Tom is adorable!
*Oh God, I have to go through all that too, probably this summer. Help me!
I think I'd be shaking too. You did a good job, Bill, now calm down.
*Really brave of Bill, to insist on driving himself, it's the best thing to do.
*Awww, they're such a sweet couple.
Thank you for the update!
Lovely chapter.
(:P
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much for your review! (:P xxx
Date: 01/18/09 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
awwww, where's is that "NEXT" button thingy. i was so dissapointed when i realize i have to wait for the next chapter, me sad *sniffles*. and i love this story, u make bill and tom's relationship so cute. and i hope they don't get in a car accident, because i have a funny feeling that they will..
Author's Response: Awww, I'm sorry, the "NEXT" button will be up soon hopefully! Don't cry! Will a gangsta smiley cheer you up?! (:P I have no idea about the car crash, I'll see where this story takes me! Thanks for your lovely review! xxx