Date: 05/26/09 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 10: The End
I'd love a sequel. Tom deserves a happy ending after going through what he just did.
Author's Response: He definitely does deserve a happy ending, so thats why I am thinking of writing a sequel. xxx
Date: 05/26/09 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 10: The End
You have to write a sequel! You just have to! *gets on knees and begs*
Author's Response: Thank you so much for wanting a sequel, it means so much that people like this story. I am thinking that there will be one! xxx
Date: 05/26/09 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 10: The End
That's it!!!! Is that all your going to leave me with *crys*
Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I'm thinking there will be a sequel though, so don't cry *wipes away tears*. Thanks for all your reviews on this story. xxx
Date: 05/16/09 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Update...PLEASE?!?
Author's Response: I'm so so sorry for not updating sooner, but you have probably seen on the info box for the story that my computer had a virus and I couldn't work on it, but I've got it back and I know exactly what I want to do with it, so hopefully an update will be this week. Sorry again. xxx
Date: 04/27/09 11:01 am Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
not u...gordon...i would never call u an asshole...this is a really good story btw
Author's Response: Oh right, lol! I feel like such an idiot. Sorry for being snappy at you, I didn't mean to be horrible. Thanks so much for getting back to me and telling me that this is a good story, I really really appreciate it. *big hug* xxx Sorry again.
Date: 04/25/09 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Oh god.. Are you about to finish it?? nooo.. I really like the story!.. and I wan't more!.. Are you gonna update soon?? I hope so! Kisses!
Author's Response: I'm thinking of finishing it, BUT there will be a sequel to it cause what I'm planning on doing definitely needs to have a sequel, however I'm not entirely sure yet, so no need to worry! Thanks so much for saying you like the story, it means so much to me! An update shouldn't be to long away. xxx *hug*
Date: 04/23/09 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
asshole!
Author's Response: Why did you call me asshole? If it is about me then I really really don't appreciate that, even if it is a joke. Get back to me please.
Date: 04/23/09 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
this is a really good chapter and i realize that i am nearing the end of the story hope for more soon
Author's Response: Thanks for saying its a really good chapter, and yes this story is on its way to finishing. *hug* xxx
Date: 04/05/09 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
*That sounds like a beautiful place where Tom is now, it's good he has a place where he can clear his head. :)
*I hate Gordon! He's an ass.
And the scene where he makes Tom blow him, disgusts me! It even made my stomach turn a little.
*I feel so sorry for Tom.
Very well-written chapter.
Thanks for the hug, it's necessary after a chapter like this. :)
Author's Response: I thought that Tom deserved to have a nice place after all the awful things that are happening to him. I hate that scene to, but I'm afraid, like every story, a story needs to develop, and this had to be put in unfortunately. Thanks so much for saying it is a well written chapter, thats such a compliment! Your welcome about the hug! Heres another one! *hug* xxx
Date: 03/26/09 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
Oh no!! Poor Tom!!! That's kinda gross...
Anyway, I love this story, it's so cute :D
Date: 03/26/09 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
Oh no!! Poor Tom!!! That's kinda gross...
Anyway, I love this story, it's so cute :D
Author's Response: Poor Tom indeed, hopefully things will get better for him, you'll just have to wait and see! Thanks so much for saying you love the story, I love it when people say that! xxx *hug*
Date: 03/12/09 02:53 am Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
Jesus I just finished reading the whole story and I have to say that is amazing! I love the way u are writing this... Tom's POV was perfect.. I have no problems with the non/rape thing actually I think that it makes the story more interesting... I am agree with u when u said that this story is not going to be happy all the time ... It's good! I like it in that way... Please don't take so long 4 another update, I will be waiting :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that this story is amazing, and saying that the writing is good, I love it when people say that! Yeah, I agree that the non/rape makes the story more interesting, it makes it have more depth and I can develop characters more. Its stupid to always write that their lives are gonna be happy all the time, no ones life is perfect. I hopefully won't take to long with an update, but I'll have to see on my work. Thanks so much for your review! xxx *hug*
Date: 03/10/09 04:05 am Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
HOLY CRAP! That was a bit intense o.o
Author's Response: Yes, it was quite full on, but the story needs to change and progress in order for it to remain interesting. Hope you liked the changes. xxx *hug*
Date: 03/07/09 10:59 am Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
Fuck!fuck! I do non-conrape but Bill would be the victim! I hate seeing Tomi being fragile.. Sorry I am getting so fucking emotional..*sobs*
*switching to another personality* That was really great. I just hated his father I would kill him.
*switchs again* sorry about them..good chappie though..
Author's Response: Don't cry! *wipes away tears* Thanks for saying it was great, and I give you my permission to kill Gordon! xxx *hug*
Date: 03/07/09 04:51 am Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
Oh my god... I'm so taken aback! That is the most disgusting thing EVER! I think I'm gonna throw up myself XD How could Gordon DO that?! That is seriously disgusting! And that Tom actully swallowed made me choke on the water I was drinking xD I really lived "in" this chapter, espicially the part when Tom looks at the city. I wish I had a place like that too : D You're really good at writing! You can feel Tom's emotions throug the whole story :D That's always a good thing ;)
Btw, I'll hug you back, this chapter was intressting : D Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I can't believe I wrote about it, but I'm afraid it was necessary for the story's progress. It would be so nice to be able to go to your own special place like that, and thanks so so much for saying I'm a good writer! It means so much to me that people think that! Yay! you hugged me back! An update will hopefully be soon! xxx *hug*
Date: 03/06/09 08:10 am Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
If his īfather tries that again please warn me.. then i can read the chapter but skim through that part.. my head canīt tolerate rapescenes to good..
But except that great.. i just had to review again "giggles"
Author's Response: Ok, I'm sorry I didn't warn you this time cause I wanted to make it a surprise when people got to that part. But I will warn everyone in the future. Lol! I'm very glad you reviewed again, cause I love hearing what people have to say about this story! xxx *hug*
Date: 03/05/09 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
*.* Oh my god...
That, seriously...I'm still in shock.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so sorry I made you go into shock! Sit down and breathe in and out very slowly! Thanks for you review, xxx *hug*
Date: 03/05/09 09:39 am Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
Ooooh I loved it xxx
Author's Response: Yaaay!! Thanks so much for saying you loved it, it means so much to me! xxx *hug*
Date: 03/05/09 02:15 am Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
You.. but.. how could.. i donīt.. too much for my brain to grasp.. just read through the other capters and loved them.. But how could he do.. I WANNA STRANGLE HIM!
Author's Response: Sit down, take a deep breath and your brain will fix itself! And I don't mind if you strangle him! Its fine by me! Thanks for saying you loved the chapters as well, xxx *hug*
Date: 03/05/09 01:39 am Title: Chapter 9: Tom's P.O.V.
I do like the changes but at the same time, nooooooo! How-how could a father do that? I mean, it's, and Tom and he was just-and then his mom-and Bill! Thank God it's Bill of all people there right now. Oh please, please, please update this soon. I almost cried. I had to skim that part, I couldn't full on read it. Bill! Fix Tom!
Author's Response: Thanks for saying you liked the changes, but I'm so sorry for nearly making you cry, I had no intention of doing that to anyone! And I'm sure Bill will fix Tom in time. Thanks for your review, xxx *hug*