Date: 09/17/08 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
That was sweet. But are we ever gonna know what Tom's dad was pissed off about, cause I'm kinda curious.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm not to sure at the moment. I'll see how it all plans out. Maybe you will, maybe you wont! xxx
Date: 09/17/08 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
Thanks for well fixing it ^^
Man his dad totally crossed the line! I'm not sure what I would do, but he wouldn't have made it out there in one piece ^^
continue when you can. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! xxx
Date: 09/16/08 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hottest sex I have ever read.
No joke.
That was hot yet romantic.
I love you!
Keep going.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I've never written a sex scene before, so I'm glad people like it! Love you too! xxx
Date: 09/16/08 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow... yup, u moved things fast.
but who cares?! xD
sex is always good in a story! xD (Im a big pervert)
Author's Response: Lol!! I thought why not make them have sex already, nothings holding me back! The whole chapter is up now, sorry if it didn't make much sense at the beginning. xxx
Date: 09/16/08 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hey, what was up with Tom's dad slapping him I got confused about that....Is it that he caught Tom telling Bill things? Please get back to me thanks....
Author's Response: I did something stupid while I was uploading the chapter, I think I cut half of it without realising. Sorry. Its now fixed though. xxx
Date: 09/16/08 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
I too think it was rushed, but ja.
Umm what happened in the beginning of this chappy? it's like there's a piece missing...
Tom had begun counting down the hours for when he would next see Bill, and his stomach always dropped when he realised that only a minute had passed since he last YTHING ABOUT IT!" Tom finished his yelling and looked at him, with an evil look on his face.
or is it suppose to be like that?
Author's Response: No its not supposed to be like that. Im very sorry. I did something stupid with the chapter. xxx
Date: 09/16/08 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
okay. y he get kicked out of the house? love it. can't wait for next chappie.
Author's Response: The whole chapter is now up, so you can find out why he got kicked out. Thanks for your review xxx
Date: 09/16/08 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
Something is messed up in the first chapter?
But other than that - LOVED it :)Tom and Bill are so cute together. Oh, and just for the record, Gordon is an arsehole, lol.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! The whole chapter is now up, I did something stupid, but anyway. xxx
Date: 09/16/08 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
awwwh they finally did it=DDDD
it was a good chapter!!
thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Yeah they did! Thanks for your review! xxx
Date: 09/16/08 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
I think you have to recheck the html, it seems that a part of the chapter is missing. (look at the first part, it's suddenly interrupted)
Author's Response: yeah, I realised that I cut out half of the story by mistake. xxx
Date: 09/13/08 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh I love it!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! xxx
Date: 09/11/08 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
loved it. as simple as that (:
update soon (;
Author's Response: Thank you very much! xxx
Date: 09/11/08 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
*I like how rational they're both being.
Now they have to make it 'till Friday :)
*Haha, Tom woke up with a little problem :P
*Wahah, crazy Georg xD
*Yes, he said HE :D
*Gustav, you're just being weird :P
*So funny when Georg bursts out in a fit of laughter xD However it wasn't an appropriate time to start laughing.
*Yay! Bill is getting a car :D
And he's getting a driving lesson today :)
*It's just a little too early to drive that car by yourself, Bill.
*They're always so happy to see each other again :)
*Mr Trümper sounds kinky? :P xD
*Simone is so such a sweet mother, and Tom's dad is such an ass, not fair!
That guy has lots of money and Tom didn't even get a car, while Simone isn't wealthy and she does buy a car for her son. Unbelieveble!
*That were some awkward moments when none of them spoke. Glad everything is okay between them already :)
*A driving lesson is over way to quick.
*5 more days and they'll see each other again :)
Nice chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I love hearing your comments! xxx
Date: 09/11/08 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
*He just has to tell Andreas :D
*Andreas is so right, if Bill never makes a move, give hints or something, he will always regret it afterwards.
*Coolio? wahaha xD
*Nice night :) think It was fun :)
*Wahah, funny how Simone found them :P
*Clean up boys! :P
*I like how hey both think the same way about each other :)
*Hehe, they're both blushing and feeling emberrassed :P
*Yay! :D Bill told Tom how he feels! :D
*Yay² Tom kissed Bill! :D
*Tom likes him too :D
*Awwww, I so love this! They're in LOVE !
I can imagine that big smile Bill is wearing :D
Lovely chapter!
Author's Response: I sometimes use the word coolio, and I thought that when Bills excited he sounds like he would use that word! Thank you so much for your lovely review! xxxx
Date: 09/11/08 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
*Come on, Simone, he'll be ready on time. Don't worry, and don't get angry.
*Bill had to do quite a lot to get driving lessons :P
*Aww, Simone is crying. My mom says things like her too, sometimes, that I and my brother are growing up so fast. :)
*Mmm, seems to be a hottie, that driving instructor :P
*Relax Bill, breath in and out, in and out, you'll be okay, and you'll do fine.
*Poor Tom, having a father like that. Glad he could say all those things to someone :)
*Yay, his first driving lesson went well :D
*Both fell asleep that night, dreaming about each other.
-> I just love the end of this chapter :)
Lovely chapter!!
Author's Response: My mum says that to me all the time! 'Your not my baby anymore!' Gets annoying after a while! Thank you very much! xxx
Date: 09/11/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
*Hehe, I can hear Bill whining for driving lessons :P
*I can't get driving lessons either, also because we don't have money for it :(
*'Oh god,' Bill thought, ' What have i done?'
-> Yes indeed, what have you done? :P
Nice prologue!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I can't wait till I can drive, so Bill whining for lessons, it is exactly what Im going to do! xxx
Date: 09/09/08 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww, the chapter keep on getting better and better.
Lol, Bill? Annoying?
No way!
Not true lol lol lol
Author's Response: Lol! Bill can never be annoying! Thanks for your review! xxx
Date: 09/08/08 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hey, that was cute can't wait for more... I just hope Tom's dad ain't going to be all mean to Tom if he finds out he is gay!!!!! Keep up the good work..Bye
Author's Response: Aaah, you'll have to wait and see for that one! Thanks for your review! xxx
Date: 09/08/08 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
aaaaawww cuteee ^///^
more soon? ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter will be up soon! xxx
Date: 09/08/08 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
whahaah Gustav has such imagination :P lol! and Bill's mom is really nice getting him a car:)
Author's Response: lol! Thank you! xxx