Date: 09/21/08 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
WHO??!!!! Who is it?? Man this is good!! Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: I got an idea for a one shot over the weekend, which I just had to write! But I promise to do the next chapter of this VERY soon! Thanks for reading / reviewing. X
Date: 09/19/08 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh my god i love it ^___^ pretty pleaseee carry on. you cant keep me haging like that :P
Author's Response: Aww thank you. The new chapter will be up over the weekend. Thanks for reading and reviewing :) x
Date: 09/17/08 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
oy vey!
more soon please?
Author's Response: I promise it's on it's way :) Thank you for the review and for reading. x
Date: 09/17/08 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
uh oh, Tomi's gonna go looking for the killer! D:
SICK 'EM, TOMI! ATTA BOY!
please update soon! O_O I must know what happens
Author's Response: Yup, Daddy's very angry! Lol. Thanks for the review, update coming soon! x
Date: 09/17/08 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
What a killer Cliffhanger!
You're killing me D:
UPDATE
Author's Response: Lol.It's on it's way! Thanks for reading :) x
Date: 09/17/08 10:46 am Title: Chapter 3
i wonder how bill will react...
nice plot btw!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting - glad you like it :) x
Date: 09/17/08 10:13 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm not great with reviews but lets just say when I read the last line I squealed out loud :D
Author's Response: LOL. It was actually a new twist to the plot that I hadn't originally planned. I guess I just wanted to make Tom a hero :)) Thanks for the review! X
Date: 09/17/08 07:38 am Title: Chapter 5
Don't stop it there! *scrolls back up to see if more chapter has appeared* BAH! LOL.
Author's Response: I'm going to start on the next chapter tonight, so I hope it will be up really soon. Thanks for reading / reviewing :) X
Date: 09/17/08 07:11 am Title: Chapter 5
eek!!! who is it!?!?!?!?!?! thats going to kill me allllll day!!!!! i shouldnt have read the update b4 school!!!! now i really wont pay attention :P...but thats okay its worth it ^^
xoxoxoxoxo thankx for the update!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I promise all will be revealed in the next chapter, and I'll get it up asap :) Thanks for reading and the review. X
Date: 09/17/08 04:49 am Title: Chapter 5
Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! The drama! TOMI SAVE HER! And what the fuck is going on anyway?
Author's Response: LOL. All will be revealed in the next chapter!
Date: 09/16/08 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww poor twins. That was way harsh of Bill to keep Tom away from 3 years of his daughters life. I look forward to the next chapter and you maybe fixing the twins? Huh huh?
Author's Response: Yeah, Bill was mean. But I have a feeling he'll think of a great way to make it up to him ;)
Date: 09/16/08 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh my god.
my heart is in my throat.
the amazingness of this story cannot even be made into a comment.
i love it. like whoa!
but you have to promise that everything works out in the end okay?
more soon please?
Author's Response: Aww thankyou so much! There two more chapters I think, and an epilogue. And yes, by the end of the next chapter, things will be looking a little better for them :)Thanks for reading. X
Date: 09/16/08 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
I feel the worst for Tom. No matter how badly he might have fucked up, Bill should never have taken his daughter away.
*sigh*
This fic s depressing.... Make it happy again, soon?
Author's Response: Yeah, Bill was wrong to do it. But he knows it deep down. And this chapter does introduce a bit hope, so it's not all bad.
Date: 09/11/08 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love this so much. I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to know what Bill with say to Tom! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Aww thankyou! I've started writing the next chapter, so I hope to get it posted soon :) X
Date: 09/11/08 09:16 am Title: Chapter 3
OMG!!!!
Author's Response: Lol. Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed it :)
Date: 08/30/08 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Tom, you stupid son of a bitch! *Smacks him*
Poor Bill, and poor Melodie. D:
This is wonderful, though! I love it, already. :DD
I hope you update soon. :]
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I promise to update soon :)
Date: 08/30/08 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Ha, nice.
But sad. :[
Update again soon? :]
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I'll be updating very soon - next day or two. X