Date: 10/17/08 01:13 am Title: Chapter 8
but why david do it?
Author's Response: Well, that will be made clear in the next chapter lol ;) X
Date: 10/17/08 01:11 am Title: Chapter 7
YEA!!!!! d:)LOVE!!!
Author's Response: LOL! This was my favourite chapter to write :)) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. X
Date: 10/17/08 01:08 am Title: Chapter 6
get her back tomi!!!!!d:)
Author's Response: Thanks for review each chapter! Great that you're enjoying it :) X
Date: 10/17/08 01:06 am Title: Chapter 5
oh oh!! who is it?
Author's Response: LOL ... read on, read on ... X
Date: 10/17/08 01:02 am Title: Chapter 4
poor guys....tommi did a very stupid thing.....
Author's Response: He did. But he didn't mean too :( Lol. X
Date: 10/17/08 12:58 am Title: Chapter 3
O.O poor billa.....
Author's Response: Yeah, I felt kinda mean writing it lol. Thanks for your review. X
Date: 10/17/08 12:56 am Title: Chapter 2
stupid tomi.....
Author's Response: Yup. He blew it :(
Date: 10/17/08 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1
O.O
Author's Response: Lol. x
Date: 10/11/08 06:12 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG, this is so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!
I love this, just so cute and sad and lovely and i'm addicted!! Keep going, i SO wanna know what will happen next!! ;DD
Author's Response: I am definately back in writing mode and you won't have to wait long for the next chapter, I promise :) Thank you for your review! X
Date: 10/11/08 05:48 am Title: Chapter 7
beautiful!!
I'm reading the last sentence over and over again!
You HAVE to read the next chapter ASAP!
you can't leave us waiting for it!!!!!
best chapter!! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter will be up over the weekend at some point. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)) X
Date: 10/11/08 05:19 am Title: Chapter 7
oh, i love it! Tom the knight :D
Author's Response: I could picture the scene so well in my head when I was writing it. Tom makes a great hero, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing :) X
Date: 10/10/08 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aww, this story is so sweet. I love how Tom gets the "hero" moment, coming through the door with Melodie in his arms. :) :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I really loved writing this chapter. Even though Bill has been harsh on Tom, I really wanted to give him, like you said, a 'hero' moment. Not just so Bill forgives him, but so he can forgive himself :) Thanks so much for the review. X
Date: 10/10/08 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
ohhh this story is so sweet, i really like it!!!!!and yay melodie is back!!!!
i hope you update soon???!!!!
Author's Response: I will :) Because this chapter took so long, I will post the new one over the weekend. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review! X
Date: 10/10/08 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 7
awwwwwwwwwwww!!
this was definately worth the wait!
wonderful!
epilogue?
Author's Response: Aww thank you :) There will be one more chapter after this, and then a short epilogue to follow. Then we're all done! Thanks for your review. X
Date: 10/07/08 03:31 am Title: Chapter 6
Aw! :(
Tom has to hurry up and find her soon!
Great update! :3
Author's Response: The update is taking much longer than I planned :( But I promise it will be up this week :)) Thanks for reading! x
Date: 09/25/08 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
AAAAA!!
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) x
Date: 09/24/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
did not see that coming.
more soon pleasE?
Author's Response: Lol. I'll update in the next couple of days. Thanks for reading and reviewing :) x
Date: 09/24/08 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
I enjoyed this a lot(:
More please_?
Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'll be updating this real soon :) X
Date: 09/24/08 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
AH!!!!!!! Bad Jost! Naughty, naughty, naughty Jost! *whispers* don't make Jost mean because I like david.
Author's Response: I promise to post the next chapter soon. I don't think you'll hate me too much, lol. Thanks for the review :) X
Date: 09/24/08 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow! 0.0
Mad Tomi!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I like mad Tomi lol. Thanks for reading / reviewing. I'll post the next chapter soon. X