Date: 07/10/11 12:28 pm Title: The life.
Lovely story.
Thanks for sharing!
Date: 02/13/11 12:46 am Title: The life.
wow...you were only 15 when you wrote this? that is so freaking amazing! That really surprised me. Believe you me I have read a lot of fic, and have seen much worse from people a good deal older than that. You did an amazing job here. Keep up the beautiful work with your writing.
Date: 01/16/11 10:53 pm Title: The life.
Oh lord, I just absolutely adored this! Truly, it was an adorable story!
Date: 09/11/09 06:08 pm Title: The life.
I really liked this a lot. And I giggled at the thought of a cowboy Tom lol. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Aww thank you! :) He wanted to become one when he was little, you know? XD I don't know what made him want to be a pirate then, though, lol. But still! Thanks!
Date: 12/06/08 04:55 pm Title: The life.
Awww that was adorable!!! I loved it XD
Author's Response: Aww thank you so very much <3
Date: 11/29/08 12:28 am Title: The rescue.
I like the plot, and the writing is ok, but there's grammar problems, and what kind of people had white slaves in America?
Author's Response: Mmm, since I couldn't make Bill suddenly black, maybe? ;P
Date: 09/12/08 06:28 pm Title: The life.
Your welcome! Powerpuff girls was a cartoon in the early 2000's I think...
Author's Response: XD I don't think I can even remember what I looked like in 2000's XD you must have a good memory @_@ this means you read the story with attention ;)
Date: 09/11/08 03:15 pm Title: The life.
BUON COMPLEANNO!!! E ti congratulo anche per il tuo talento!!!
Author's Response: Grazie infinite <3
Date: 09/09/08 11:08 pm Title: The life.
Cute ending, though I wish they had taken their relationship to the next level, though I understand your decision not too. Also, you should hav mentioned Jeremy in this chapter. But otherwise, good job.
And Happy Birth Day!
Author's Response: I did mention him ;) -> [...] the diner, for which Bill cooked each day personally with the help of Jeremy and some of his friends [...] AND I did say about their relationship too -> [...] they had felt the need to crown their ‘friendly’ relationship and take it to the next level. What was affection had turned into respect, and what was passion had turned into love. Really girl, you should read this with more attention XD thanks ^^
Date: 09/09/08 08:13 pm Title: The life.
aww... this story was super sweet!! i am glad they got a happy ending!! :333
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! :DDD i hope you had a great sweet 16!! :DDD only 2 more years 'till you can go clubbing and buy porn~~ ;DDD [legally!!] *gives cookies shaped like Tokio Hotel!!* :33
Author's Response: Exactly... LEGALLY! XD thank you :D
Date: 09/09/08 07:38 pm Title: The escape.
This is a great story!
P.S. Wasn't Townsville the name of the town on the Powerpuff Girls? Lol!
Author's Response: Aww thank you! :D I'm glad you like it ;) but... what's the Powerwhat girls?? XD
Date: 09/09/08 07:18 pm Title: The life.
!!! loved this so much. :D Your awesome
Author's Response: You're awesome :D thanks ^^
Date: 09/09/08 05:58 pm Title: The life.
Aww, I'm such a sucker for a happy ending! I've loved this story from the begining and I always hoped that they would have this kind of an ending. Bill and Jeremy were so lucky to meet Tom :)
*is happy*
Author's Response: *is happy too* ^^
Date: 09/09/08 05:42 pm Title: The life.
Happy birthday to you then hun^^D
I would just tell you, I love happy endings^-^
I look forward to read more of your stories hun^.^)
Author's Response: Oh thank you :D they're all posted on this site if you want to check them out btw X3
Date: 09/09/08 04:22 pm Title: The life.
OMG this was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
It was so cute and a really good idea!!!
P.S HAPPPPPPYYYYYYYY BIIIIIRRRRTTTHHHHDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sweet 16!!!!
Author's Response: Thanksss I'm glad you've enjoyed my fic X3
Date: 09/09/08 03:55 pm Title: The life.
Oooh what a sweet ending. It's much like a fairytale were they live happy ever after. =)It was really sweet, the way that Tom got everything he wanted and more ;-)
Great and sweet story, I would love some more cowboy's ;-)
And HAPPY BIRTHDAY girl! *throw candy*^^
XXX
Author's Response: Thaaank you! for all, really :D
Date: 09/09/08 03:51 pm Title: The future.
Ooh forgot to review this chapter =D
Lets do that fast then ;-)
This was just sooo sweet =)
Author's Response: Oww I found this so sweet of you <3 thank you, I really appreciate it!
Date: 09/09/08 03:35 pm Title: The life.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU
Iloveyoumommy=]
Author's Response: Thank you! >.< I love you too <3
Date: 09/09/08 03:24 pm Title: The life.
Awww! That was lovely.
More cowboys to come?! Really?! *excited* Whoooo!
Oh, and HAPPY FREAKING BIRTHDAY, SWEETIE!!
Author's Response: Yes, more cowboys to come! :D thank you so much for everything <3
Date: 09/08/08 05:08 pm Title: The future.
I'm sure that the people that ownes Bill are in that big city, I just know it!
Tom, you no longer need to search for your true love. You got Bill now, and kind of a son^^)
Please update soon, okay hun??(=^.^=)
I really begin to enjoy this story^-^
Author's Response: Aww I'm glad you really like it, it means a lot to me <3 and don't worry, no more drama to come ;)