Date: 09/03/08 05:53 pm Title: The escape.
wat happened to jeremy's mom?????
Author's Response: You'll know soon ;) thanks for reading ^^
Date: 09/03/08 04:25 pm Title: The escape.
adorable
Author's Response: Aww thank you ^^
Date: 09/02/08 02:36 pm Title: The rescue.
I love it! :D
Please, you have to update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ I will :P
Date: 09/02/08 08:16 am Title: The rescue.
I'm definitely going to follow this story until the end ;-)
How long do you think it will be ^^
I'm so glad that Bill get up the courage to walk out of it and that Tom agrees to take him all though who could leave someone alone in the desert with a kid.
I want to know what's going to happen know. I want to know more about Bill and Jeremy.
you go on, can't wait ^^
Author's Response: Ohh, a fan! *O* *drool* thank you babe :D more about the two will be revealed soon, as well as about Tom ;) the story itself won't be very long, I presume there are three chapters left ^^ aaand keep reading! ;D
Date: 09/01/08 10:47 pm Title: The rescue.
Good Tomi doing the right thing *patpat* I'm excited for what's to come!! MORE!! SOON!! ^_^
Author's Response: Aww thank you darling :) more will come surely ;)
Date: 09/01/08 07:41 pm Title: The rescue.
Actually assuming I'm not super tired my reviews take more than twenty seconds to write. Anywho,
Did Bill leave the same night as Tom? It seemed like it did but it made it sound as if the time lapse between them seeing each other was a lot longer than a few hours.
Otherwise I'm happy. It was more of an escape that a rescue though. Tom was just helpful.
I want Bill's story eventually. And maybe Tom's too if there is one.
Author's Response: I used the 'rescue' as a title just because it was convenient- actually I've named the next 'the escape' ;) again, you always seem to read my mind ;) their stories will come in time, about that you can be sure. And yes, just some hours have passed from when Tom had left to when Bill had found him- from sunset to almost sunrise ;) thank you for your lovely review ^^
Date: 09/01/08 05:49 pm Title: The rescue.
This is so cute weeee. Your awesome :D
Author's Response: Thank you *blushes and grins* ^^
Date: 09/01/08 05:44 pm Title: The rescue.
WHEEEEEEEE.
I love this fic.
:)
Author's Response: Aww thank you :) keep reading ;)
Date: 09/01/08 05:15 pm Title: The rescue.
This sort of reminds me of the Indian romance novels I used to be addicted to....only better, of course! *lol* I love it! I like how Tom's a few years older than Bill. That makes it cuter to me =) Tom's such a sweetheart, haha. And I can't wait for the details about Bill's son.
I want pictures of sexy Tomi in cowboy get-up. That'd be so fucking hot, lol.
Author's Response: Lol, the best I could do was that manip of him with a cowboy cap XD which, may I say, had already been a great pain in the ass :P but it looks cool doesn't it 8D as for the story, THANK YOU for your sweet compliments! :D you'll see more soon for sure ;)
Date: 09/01/08 04:53 pm Title: The rescue.
I think this will take more than just twenty seconds XD
Wheeps, Tomi is a knight in shining armour and white horse, hurrying to save princess Billarina.
Or, a man in f*cking hot cowboy boots (funny, boots are usually Bill's thing xD), dusty clothes and a black horse (wasn't it?). Anygays, saving done. Almost. Kinda. Yeah.
Dammit, I don't know what I'm saying anymore. Nothing coherent, I see. My mind flew to...elsewhere xP
In any case, me likes. It and you. Haha. Keep the sugar up, hun :)
Author's Response: Aww <3 yes, he's a fucking gangsta with dusty dreads and a horse to save the princess ;) just dirty how we like him X3 thanks for passing by ^^
Date: 09/01/08 04:49 pm Title: The rescue.
Yay!!! keep it going!
Author's Response: I will surely ;) thanks for reading ^^
Date: 09/01/08 04:49 pm Title: The rescue.
So Good!!
I love cowboy Tom! *_*
And Daddy Bill is just oh my!
moarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*
Author's Response: Thank you darling ^^ yarr cowboy!Tom is HOT ;)
Date: 09/01/08 04:40 pm Title: The rescue.
aww... :33 i am soo glad Bill ran away! he is free!! sort of!! hahha and i am so glad tom agreed to help him.. :33 maybe they could live happily together later! XDD but i have a feeling that this is where the real adventure begins!! :DD so yay!! :DD can't wait for an update~~ :DD *gives cookies*
Author's Response: Thank you ;) yes, now the adventure begins! :D
Date: 09/01/08 04:31 pm Title: The rescue.
really amazing story so far. Wonderful. I loved it and can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Ohh *blushes* thank you very much for the kind compliments :) and for passing by ^^
Date: 09/01/08 04:27 pm Title: The rescue.
I was supposed to do my homework.. but I'm not, I'm reading this story D:
What are you doing to me mommy? xD
Btw, that guy I was talking about, date on Friday =D
Author's Response: :O d-date? Omg wtf talk to me about it on msn XD aaand thank you ;)
Date: 09/01/08 03:51 pm Title: The rescue.
Ok, it wasn't exactly a knight in shining armour act, lol, but bless cowboy Tom for helping Bill and Jeremy. I like this alot. x
Author's Response: Lol, no knight but still a hell of a kind man ;) thank you for reading, commenting and liking ^^
Date: 08/31/08 01:14 pm Title: The meeting.
I'm really beginning to like this story ^^ I mostly wait till the story is a bit longer before I can tell if I'm going to like it but this first got my attention because it's original ^^
and I like your writing, so your stuck with me for the rest of the story definitely =D
Omg poor Bill. The way they treat him *hit them*.
Bill is 19 wow that pretty young to be a father already.
I don't know if you said how old his son is but I didn't see it anywhere actually so if I go from his behavior I would say he is about 5 or 6 years old, I guess so Bill would be 14 or 13 years old, seems very young but not impossible of course ^^ (I did know someone who was that young)
I'm so curious to know what's going to happen next ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter =D
Author's Response: *___* *blows kiss* DANKESCHON! You're a good observer, as almost no one had noticed that particoular about the kid, and I can tell- yes, he's around 6, and I'll tell everything about him and Bill in a further chapter ;) I'm afraid to say though this story isn't planned to be very long, :O I hope you'll read it to the end though ;) thanksss <3
Date: 08/30/08 08:55 pm Title: The life.
Oh! Very original story line. I'm intrigued. Can't wait for the rest.
Author's Response: *_* thank you very much! <3 the second chapter has already been posted, keep reading ;)
Date: 08/30/08 08:34 pm Title: The meeting.
oh yay. Tom is so nice.
Author's Response: Thank you :) you bet he is! ;D
Date: 08/30/08 08:21 pm Title: The meeting.
GOOD but it kinda fells weird when tom's older than Bill... no offence
Author's Response: Uh, em... Tom IS actually older than Bill XD lol, no worries it won't be remarked anyway. thank you ;)