Date: 01/02/11 01:56 am Title: Andreas
i love this story so far :]
and i cant wait for the next one :]
Date: 06/28/10 07:10 pm Title: Andreas
Oh wow, I'm really liking where this is going. :]
It's so sad that they had to run away, but I hope they'll be better off now that they have some freinds to help them.
...and was it my imagination or were Tom and Bill flirting a bit in that last chapter. ;D
I hope you update to this soon. :]
Author's Response: All kinds of flirting. They're getting there...slowly, but surely. Thank you, hopefully I will.
Date: 01/22/10 10:13 am Title: Cloaked figures and men in blue jeans
This reminds me of 'The Thief Lord' for whatever reason...either way, I love it! Lol.
And I'm gonna read your baby a bit later ^_^
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it! Ohhh, please do!
Date: 07/13/09 05:20 pm Title: Cloaked figures and men in blue jeans
I just read this story from beginning to end, and it's absolutely gorgeous! I LOVE it! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That means a lot coming from you. I'm a big fan of your fanfiction(:
Date: 06/20/09 04:36 pm Title: Prologue: A Mothers Intuition
This is a really cute story. It's sad, but heartwarming. I have a feeling Tom and Bill are going to fall in love, if they haven't already. It's adorable.
I do have one tiny problem though. If Bill was stabbed, and his neck was bleeding, wouldn't he need medical attention? Just something I noticed.
I feel so bad for Tom's family, and Simone. But, somehow I get the vibe that if they knew why they ran away, they would understand. They would still be worried out of their minds, but they would understand.
Yay! for superhero Georg and Gustav! xD
Amazing story. =)
Author's Response: He wasn't /stabbed/ it was just cut. It was bleeding but not heavily enough to require medical attention (although it probably would have been best on his part if he would have cleaned it.) Imagine a cat scratch. Only...a little deeper and a lot more painful. xD.rnrn(: I think they would too.
Date: 04/11/09 11:08 pm Title: Prologue: A Mothers Intuition
So far so good. I really like the progression of the story, probably could have used a bit more on Bill's home life before they ran away but thats alright.
Sorta reminds me of the Thief Lord. Except they're not brothers and the train station isn't an old theatre. Other than that it has very similar themes.
Well, keep up the good work and I hope to see an update soon. Ciao
Author's Response: Haha. I loved that book/movie so much (:
Date: 03/18/09 12:19 am Title: Cloaked figures and men in blue jeans
this is AMAZING! PLEASE update soon!
Author's Response: Hopefully soon!!
Date: 02/11/09 12:29 pm Title: Cloaked figures and men in blue jeans
Hi!! I love this fic. Please continue soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 02/11/09 01:22 am Title: Cloaked figures and men in blue jeans
I am so glad youve updated! *wriggles happily* And im always available to beta, if you would like...
Author's Response: I may have to take you up on that, thanks!
Date: 02/11/09 12:50 am Title: Cloaked figures and men in blue jeans
I freaking love this story!!! Completely original and just soooo....idk lol. I'm not on the beta reader list but i would LOVE to volunteer to help you. If you want proof of my writing skills, check out my story "I never made fun of your fat sausage face" which was written and beta by me. Email me if you wanna talk more. madatnumbers88@yahoo.com
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and your offer! rnI'll get at you as soon as possible, whenever I get my new chapter written, haha.
Date: 02/10/09 09:44 pm Title: Cloaked figures and men in blue jeans
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Author's Response: =D.
Author's Response: =D.
Date: 02/10/09 09:31 pm Title: Prologue: A Mothers Intuition
Wow this story is back! Yay. :) I'd be glad to beta for you if you need me. :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much.rnYeah, my life got a little hectic.rnrnEee, thanks so much. I'll contact you through AIM then, sometime today or tomorrow!rn
Date: 10/08/08 03:18 am Title: "Anywhere you want it to go."
*-* LOOOVEEE xD wow Tomi is really cute! doing anything for Bill n___n waaai so lovable jijiji
--I'm paranoic too o_O nuuu I think jorg is going to cath them ¡_¡ no please!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! It made me smile when the last thing I felt like doing was smiling!
Date: 10/07/08 01:24 am Title: Sti eimt. Mi ehert.
poor billa.......d:( (sad gangsta smiley)
Author's Response: I know ;;rnThank youu!
Date: 10/07/08 12:04 am Title: "Anywhere you want it to go."
well at least..Bill and Tom are together and Bill is safe from Jorg! D: But i do feel bad for Tom's family. D: they must be so worried!! I wonder where are they going now..i hope they don't get caught.. :[ but i kind of want them to because i feel bad for Tom's family and Bill's Mom. :[
Author's Response: I know. While I'm writing this I'm trying to put myself into Corina, Alexander and Nevaeh's shoes and its really hard. I cannot even begin to imagine what it might be like for them.rnrnThank you for your review!
Date: 10/06/08 09:03 pm Title: "Anywhere you want it to go."
:) i wonder where that road will lead them :)
Author's Response: I wonder!
Date: 09/07/08 02:29 pm Title: Sti eimt. Mi ehert.
I've been reading this I just havn't had time to comment but I really really like it. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much (:
Date: 09/03/08 03:49 am Title: Sti eimt. Mi ehert.
o_o omg! nuuuuuuuuu...xD but iT's xD kind of cute and weird that they just don't show their feelig for each other ._. but they now xo I know!!!!!! ._.
xD mmm, interesting
Author's Response: Haha! Thank you.
Date: 09/03/08 03:20 am Title: "Isn't he beautiful?"
:D i LIKe it...
Author's Response: I'm glad!
Date: 09/03/08 02:18 am Title: Sti eimt. Mi ehert.
oh my!! ahh!! poor Bill!! ;________: *hugs him* i am glad Tom is with him almost 24/7 :] but now tom has to leave his family.. :[ aww.. but at least he is with Bill!! can't wait to see more!! :D
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying this as much as I am!