Date: 02/18/09 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww. It was so damn cute :)
Percect story i think. Thx!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really happy to see you're liking a lot of my stories :)
Date: 02/18/09 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
Loved this story so much! And I don't think that the twincest was pushed by the way, it was a good amount for a story like this. It wasn't to full on which was good.
And I loved that the first thing Bill said when he could see again was to do with Toms caps! *favourited*
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm happy to see people don't agree with me about the twincest being pushed.
Date: 02/18/09 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really loved this ending Ana. I'm always nervous about writing chaptered fics too, and I know I rush the twincest sometimes, but this didn't feel rushed to me. I adored that whole section where they discussed back and forth what they were doing ending with “We can do it until we think it’s wrong.” I thought that felt really real and poignant and it just made my heart ache. I also loved all the funny brotherly stuff you interspersed throughout, like Bill telling Tom his cap was terrible at the end. This was really great. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you like it and you don't think the twincest was rushed. I'm happy that you adored the discussion section, it was kinda hard and difficult to write a discussion that was already made in a lot of stories. And about the cap... that's actually my opinion about the black leather cap, I wrote this chapter months ago, a few days after Tom showed it and my reaction to it was the same as Bill's: "Is awful."
rnThanks again for reading :)
Date: 02/18/09 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aaw, so sweet :D
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 02/18/09 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, this is so good. I love how Tom is being so sweet taking care of Bill. You really write their relationship so well, and the pacing of this is perfect. I can't wait for chapter 4; I hope you don't make us wait too long. :)
Author's Response: Thanks :) And don't worry about the 4th chapter - is already translated and betaed. I'll post it tomorrow probably :) (though I'm really scared because I don't like that one ._.) Again, thanks for reading!
Date: 02/17/09 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't think their could be more a perfect song, it set the mood so beautifully!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Date: 02/17/09 10:32 am Title: Chapter 3
That must have been one of the best kissing scenes ever *_*
Author's Response: Wow, thanks!
Date: 01/21/09 03:46 am Title: Chapter 2
i just want to hit bill for being so dumb then i want to hug him and tell him that everything will be alright and tom is to funny w/ the Nena part at the end lol =]
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm happy you're liking it :D
Date: 01/13/09 06:53 am Title: Chapter 2
thats so pretty... aww
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 01/12/09 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
This chapter is absolutely amazing! You are really good at describing emotions :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) Is nice to know that people likes my writing :)
Date: 08/28/08 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1
It's really good, it really is. Great job!
Author's Response: thank you :D
Date: 08/28/08 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1
very well written
xx
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 08/28/08 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, I love it. Great start :) I hope he doesn't turn blind D: But, it would be interesting of course *nods*
Update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Date: 08/28/08 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
DDD: awww... poor Billa! But this story is really good ^^ Your style and grammar are pretty good too, so I like it and the way that Tom acts toward Bill is just hellaciously adorable O:
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D
Date: 08/28/08 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1
*wipes tear* omg this is great
Author's Response: Oh no, don't cry *gives candy* thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 08/28/08 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this story so far, even though poor Bill is hurt :(
The twins are cute together in it. Looking foward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/28/08 07:57 am Title: Chapter 1
^^ Good Job. I like it! :D cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, hey you XD Thanks for reading :)
Date: 08/28/08 07:50 am Title: Chapter 1
D: this is why I hate cars and trucks... I like this story though ;) and I hope you'll post soon! If it's a very light NC17 then you can put R in the rating, but leave the Blood warning- people could read the fist chapter when you've posted your last, where there is no blood... ;) omg I hope he won't be blind...
Author's Response: I still think I'll keep the Nc17, thanks. Btw, if you want to read it in italian you can find it on the community ;)
Date: 08/28/08 07:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Ah. Poor Bill. D:
This is so great! I loved it. :]
can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you :) Give me a week to pass my spanish exam and I'll translate the second :D
Date: 08/28/08 07:46 am Title: Chapter 1
yep i definitely like this (:
Author's Response: Thanks :)