Date: 05/12/12 10:38 pm Title: Forgiveness
Oh my gosh, I ran out of story. D: This was so amazing, I absolutely adored the first part of the first chapter. It hooked me fast. I literally feared for Tom's very life when he was messing up Bill's room, and was screaming at my boyfriend about how Tom will die. D: My heart broke when Bill had a break down, and the park scene. This should be made into a movie, yup. Thanks for the amazing read!
Date: 03/03/09 03:09 pm Title: Prologue
is there coming more on this fic? I really like it! :D You really do have a talent for writing! :D
Date: 12/27/08 07:50 am Title: Prologue
just wanted to remind you how much i'm craving this story. i'd forgotten about it and when i saw it on my favorites i was reminded of all those words and feelings. i'll keep waiting for you. *_*
Date: 12/10/08 06:52 pm Title: Prologue
plaese update soon. i will die with out this story
Date: 12/06/08 12:57 am Title: Prologue
This story is amazing, astonishing, brilliant,incredible, marvelous, remarkable, wonderful.
It really is. Its only up to chapter four and I cant wait for more! Please please please update soon! Its so brilliant, I keep checking back every day to see if its been updated. It's written really well and it feels really realistic. I just love it so much. Please please please continue writing! I cant wait for the next update!
Date: 11/17/08 08:42 pm Title: Prologue
this stroy is so good please update soon
Date: 09/21/08 11:16 am Title: Prologue
this story is way to good, please don't leave it at that :(
Author's Response: I'll try to write more. Just on Hiatus right now... So sorry
Date: 09/12/08 04:15 pm Title: Forgiveness
D: no updates still...?
Author's Response: I'm really sorry. I've been so osf09eauf8dj lately... Lot's of problems going on...
Date: 08/31/08 12:49 am Title: Prologue
Wow. Caught my attention right away. I feel bad for Bill, seeing all those adjectives in his sentences makes me sad ;_; xD.
Author's Response: Awee <333 Poor Billa, :P
Date: 08/28/08 02:45 am Title: Prologue
It is good, it's bloody fantastic!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! <33
Date: 08/27/08 11:16 pm Title: Forgiveness
LUV IT!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!! <33
Date: 08/27/08 05:33 pm Title: Forgiveness
EEE!! go on!! I was diagnosed with minor OCD when I was five. I can't stand circles, but I got used to the normal things though, and I have to do things in a certain order, and I get really obsessed over things easily, like my friends, they have to be absolutly commited, or I can't stand being around them... So you hit this pretty spot on!! way to go
Author's Response: Why thank ya! <3 Yeah I've always been a little OC but when my Dad passed away it got really bad and messes would make me flip.
Date: 08/27/08 05:11 pm Title: Forgiveness
Shit, I knew that'd be bad... D: I hope they'll talk about it the next day, and clear things, make it up to each other and be okay again DX and I hope you'll post soon as well! FAVS :D!
Author's Response: I have a lot to do this evening however I will definitely try for an update tonight!! <333
Date: 08/27/08 04:41 pm Title: Revenge
O_O omg, omg I fear what could happen... I think... it could be really bad. Omg, I'm afraid to read what's next... Tom was unfair :( okay he was humiliated, BUT it was too much.
Author's Response: Awe :P <33
Date: 08/27/08 04:27 pm Title: Snow
I SO do like this! I like the narration, Bill's character and most of all Tom's *_* he's so sweet, no one would ahve that patience. III like ;)
Author's Response: Thank you very much!! <33
Date: 08/27/08 04:22 pm Title: Forgiveness
oh! drunk Tom... :o well at least tom clean up Bill's room :D
Author's Response: He's still a meany ): Hehe <3
Date: 08/27/08 03:44 pm Title: Forgiveness
Wow *_*
Author's Response: I hope that's good O: Thanks!
Date: 08/27/08 02:15 pm Title: Forgiveness
So, here we go again xD. At first thank you for your fast update and your nice response :)! You described Bills emotions as he had seen his messy room so unbelievable good and understandable that it makes me cry because of the sympathy for Bill. I know violence isn’t a solution but Tom deserved the bruise from Bill :(. Toms problem with alcohol is certainly important for the story; I hope he can get over it especially for his Brother and his mother. Where is actually their dad? And what are the causes for Bills disorder? So many questions and just you can answer me all of them with another chapter ;).
Author's Response: All questions will be answered in due time C:<3333
Date: 08/27/08 01:09 pm Title: Prologue
:O me likes.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad! <3
Date: 08/27/08 11:35 am Title: Revenge
I discovered your story today and what should I say, I’m totally enthusing about it. This story is more different than other stories but in a positive way. You write about a difficult subject and you do it with so much empathy. The characters that you give Bill and Tom are very great chosen, because on the hand their love each other so much but on the other hand they are so different. Especially the rare personality of Bill is very interesting. A very intelligent story and I hope for a fast update. How could do Tom such cruel thing to his baby brother? Bill will be so upset... (Sorry for the bad English , I try my best :))
Author's Response: You're English is amazing! Don't worry! And thank you, oh so much! <33 I am just waiting for them to accept my update as we speak! Thanks again, hope you like the new update <3