Date: 03/23/11 08:05 am Title: Chapter 4
this is amazing, plase update soon! i like how bill's infatuated in natilia and tom is kind of romancing her. what if bill catches natalia and tom kissing and becomes jealous? how will u get tom/bill/ofc? will tom be submissive to bill? what if bill gets so infatuated with her he wants her to love him but he relizes that she is still scaired of him so he tried to woo and romance her and compete with tom. please update soon!
Date: 12/14/09 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
HOT DAMN!!!
this is a fuckin' sexy and hot story!!
if you don't update, I WILL GET YOU!!
MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
=D
Date: 06/02/09 10:31 am Title: Chapter 4
Woow man love it :D it's great interesting at least :D
Author's Response: thanks :D
Date: 11/27/08 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
omg every chapter gets better nd better i cnt wait 4 u 2 write more
Author's Response: aww thanks trace :)
Date: 09/13/08 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
wow Bill is a meanie! lol
great chapter...update soon! :)
Author's Response: ja he is lol & thanks ill update asap :)
Date: 09/10/08 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bill is the cruel man?
OhEmGee.
I didn't know that.
Author's Response: lol yuppp
Date: 09/10/08 08:39 am Title: Chapter 3
So painful, yet lovely;)
Please update soon hun^-^)
Author's Response: thanks :] & ill update ASAP
Date: 09/09/08 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
O.O woah.
this is deep shit.
keep going. its
awesome yo.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/09/08 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
He is one cruel man.
What happened to Bill.
He wasn't in the story much.
Author's Response: Bill is the cruel man lol! Thanks for the review :D
Date: 09/01/08 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Next chapter!!!!!
Please? (=^-^=)
I really enjoy this story ^_-
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 08/27/08 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooo very interesting story so far! more please!! :)
Author's Response: thank you :D & ill put more up as soon as I can !
Date: 08/26/08 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far!!!
Keep going!!!
I love the plotline!!!
Love, Emily
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/26/08 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I never heard a story like this.
Wow, usually stories are in present time.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :D
Date: 08/26/08 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
yoyo this is sexy ;=)
Author's Response: awwww, sab. gracias :D