Date: 08/26/08 11:11 pm Title: Take Your Clothes Off
that was amazing
Date: 08/26/08 08:03 pm Title: Take Your Clothes Off
Holy fucking shit... I'm at a loss for words. This was nothing short of amazing, I've had shivers runnings through my entire body troughout the whole story. Hot hot HOT and unbelievably sweet, I loved every single line. She couldn't have gotten a better birthday present, that's for sure!
Date: 08/26/08 06:01 pm Title: Take Your Clothes Off
I loooved this.
All of it, seriously.
Date: 08/26/08 04:24 pm Title: Take Your Clothes Off
fuheiufdhscnksfwsdiuows ._.
My head hurts from how hot that was. And my throat hurts from wanting to cry when Bill was depressed. But it's mostly my head that hurts.
But my heart hurts too, because of how much I love this and how much I love you!! lol :) ♥
Date: 08/26/08 03:53 pm Title: Take Your Clothes Off
Gosh, this was intense xP Which was probably exactly the point of this xD Oh my, just...God.
It made me cry, the part about the twins as little babies. Clinging to each other and throwing a fit when separated. Just so sweet and emotional. Lovely.
Thank you ^^
Date: 08/26/08 03:28 pm Title: Take Your Clothes Off
UMF, omg *_*
Date: 08/26/08 02:58 pm Title: Take Your Clothes Off
OMG that was so hot I have a funny feeling in my pants area lol xxxx
Date: 08/26/08 02:28 pm Title: Take Your Clothes Off
This is actually hotter than sex. Perfect smut!
Date: 08/26/08 12:25 pm Title: Take Your Clothes Off
hot...hot..nasty...naughty...dirty...
u got me worked up
Date: 08/26/08 11:56 am Title: Take Your Clothes Off
Not quite sex but it was still twincest. XD Very awesome!
Date: 08/26/08 11:00 am Title: Take Your Clothes Off
I love how your stories combine romance, sexiness, fluffiness and angst so seemlessly!
Date: 08/26/08 09:59 am Title: Take Your Clothes Off
ahw this is really beautiful.. i love love love this
Date: 08/26/08 07:38 am Title: Take Your Clothes Off
Wow great story and the mini story behind the picture was so cute!
Date: 08/26/08 06:41 am Title: Take Your Clothes Off
Bill on Tom's lap what a teeeeeease.
Date: 08/26/08 03:03 am Title: Take Your Clothes Off
shit, so hot. hot hot hot, and amazing twinliness. your fic always has such vivid emotions. i love your twins.
Date: 08/26/08 02:56 am Title: Take Your Clothes Off
I LOVE how you took certain things that really happened and worked them into the story-- Bill squirming around on Tom's lap on camera, Bill jerking away from Tom's touch, again on camera, the line about how "they didn't hug anymore..."
Your twins are the best. :)
Date: 08/26/08 02:50 am Title: Take Your Clothes Off
Haylz, that was... amazing. Really, really amazing. It was like... the perfect Halyz fic.
And what makes a perfect Haylz fic?
#1: Gorgeously characterized twins: I loved how they both were bashful at times, and your drunken Tom is my absolute favorite.
#2: Platonic twin moments that turn not so platonic: I love how even before anything sexual happens, they have this lovely little relationship. Tom lets Bill cuddle with him after watching horror movies and won't let anyone tease Bill for being scared. Bill always carried that lovely little baby picture of them around in his wallet.
#3: Insanely hot smut: NGGGH. Seriously, you think they were frustrated with not touching? I WAS! ;) The build up had my blood boiling, I'll tell you that. And somehow, even the with most graphic of scenes you write, I always feel so warm and blissed out after reading them. I never feel scandalized in a dirty way, because your twins always seem so right, so it's never wrong or dirty.
#4: Amazing writing: what can I say? The perfect birthday present by my favorite author.
I will be rereading this countless times, as I do with most of your stories.
Thank you so much for this fic, it was a treat. I read it as slowly as possible and I think drove Darcy a little made in the process.
:) :) :)
Date: 08/26/08 02:32 am Title: Take Your Clothes Off
I really like this. I would love to fantasize if twincest ever really happened, it would happen like this. Thanks for this wonderful fanfic, and thanks for listening. ;)
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ARIANNE.
Date: 08/26/08 02:27 am Title: Take Your Clothes Off
You have this way of completely killing my brain cells with you fic. How will I explain my inability to function at work tomorrow to my boss?
Definitely one of my favorites, sweetie! So so sooooooo good...