Date: 04/10/10 11:13 pm Title: Little Toys Have Big Meanings.
Hmmm.. I'm not sure that to make of this one. Parts of it were really intreguing, and then other parts I kind of wondered why that was happening.. like, why would Gustav look in their closet? idk.
The fact that Bill had stripped completely was the real hook for me in this story.. however, I wish you would have explained what on Earth he was thinking! And then Tom, with his "beloved gf", why he caved so fast in wanting his brother.. wish that was a bit more realistic.
Anyways, I guess I'm leaning towards liking it.. perhaps it was the metaphor with the ball or something that made it mysterious, even if it wasnt the best-written thing.
Keep writing. :)
Date: 09/27/08 06:14 pm Title: Little Toys Have Big Meanings.
*Gawd, that's so sexy, Bill standing naked in that closet.
*That blow job was hot!! I love that Tom shouted he loves Bill when he came.
Nice fic!
Date: 08/25/08 11:20 am Title: Little Toys Have Big Meanings.
Ha, Gustav knows exactly what happened. That was good
Date: 08/24/08 11:25 pm Title: Little Toys Have Big Meanings.
Nawww, I really liked that.
Except that at first I read that you had written this in French at first and I have no idea why, I couldn't help but translate everything back in French as I was reading, hahaha.
It stopped when Bill got naked, so it's all good ;)