Date: 06/13/11 12:46 am Title: The Frailty
OK..so like why didn't they take cover in a basement or shelter or something and maybe they both could have lived?!
Date: 04/24/11 08:22 pm Title: The Frailty
God this was so sad! I cried at the end.
Date: 03/21/11 11:25 am Title: The Frailty
*cries* So sad, so sad. so. sad.
Date: 11/08/10 08:07 pm Title: The Frailty
I am absolutely sobbing right now. This story affected me very deeply and it was a wonderful piece of writing. Danke.
Date: 10/18/10 12:57 pm Title: The Frailty
OMG, this is so sad;__; really really sad...
Date: 08/25/10 01:59 am Title: The Frailty
Very sad and sweet. I really liked this.
Date: 07/06/10 02:38 pm Title: The Frailty
This fic touch me in a very deep level. Thank you for that.
Date: 03/24/10 09:36 am Title: The Frailty
Oh god that hurt,but in that amazingly good way that makes you want more of it. Like if you read it enough times there will be a happy ending in there somewhere you know? I loved the part about the ferris wheel.
Date: 12/24/09 10:29 pm Title: The Frailty
I hate that movie.
I hardly EVER cry at anything, but that movie makes me cry every freaking time.
This is morbid and it gave me a pit of uncomfortable pain in my stomach...
GREAT JOB!
HAhah
You really did the emotions well
Date: 09/29/09 08:05 pm Title: The Frailty
Ok. It was really sad...and really good, but I hope I hadn't read it. Personal reasons, but I just can't handle the idea of one twin dying, and especially the other watching them die, unable to do anything about it.
You should put the character death warning. I was still hoping Bill would survive along with Tom because I saw no warning there.
Date: 05/06/09 01:59 am Title: The Frailty
Wow, do I ever feel like an ass. As you know, I simply adored "Across the Great Divide". Why the hell didn't I think to see what else you wrote? You should have been pimping your stories, girl!!
This story made me cry, of course. But that's okay, cause the twins lived a lifetime is the short time they had left. People need to do that even now, with no disaster looming over us. My step-mom (who I recently lost) was always saying things like - don't wait til you can afford to have babies, or don't save the good china for company only. This story has that feel about it. Don't waste a minute worrying about what others are going to think, just love each other as much as you can.
Even with Bill gone, Tom kept him in his heart and didn't give up. Bill's love seemed to have given him the strength to carry on and protect those around him that needed care.
A lovely story. I'm so glad I went looking. Tomorrow I'm going to spend some time reading your other story on this site. Yummy!
Date: 04/30/09 01:54 pm Title: The Frailty
So poignant, and sad. I love this, it's a different tone than most stories about the twins. *faved*
Date: 03/19/09 03:11 pm Title: The Frailty
that was beautiful.. and so very sad.. i'm sorry, i need a minute to recover from this :)
Date: 11/16/08 10:37 pm Title: The Frailty
I hate to be repetitive, but you made me cry here. I could have dealt with both of them dying but for Tom to survive, it just broke my heart. There's nothing worse than being the one left behind.
Great story...I'm still kind of raw, so it obviously works!
Date: 09/08/08 06:22 am Title: The Frailty
And as I was reading this..."Somewhere Over The Rainbow", which is my favorite song, was playing on my itunes...I'm F***ing ballin right now. No joke.
Date: 08/25/08 12:17 am Title: The Frailty
that was sad... ;________;
Date: 08/24/08 07:32 pm Title: The Frailty
I'll be honest, I looked over reviews before I read this I was afraid I'd be too depressed. I took a chance anyway though.
This was really beautiful. Sad that you killed Bill and not Tom too, but still.
I liked the idea of the world ending. Though just to let you know if the world were going to end they probably wouldn't tell us for exactly the reasons you emphisized in this story.
Still, I loved it.
Date: 08/24/08 02:01 pm Title: The Frailty
Oh my god, this is going to give me nightmares...
Author's Response: So .... success, then?
Date: 08/24/08 01:50 pm Title: The Frailty
Oh wow.
That's...really saddening and depressing, but It's a happy moment. I'm glad he and Tom were together at the last moment.
Author's Response: To be fair, it's a fic about the end of the world, so to say. That in itself is a little depressing. But at least it evoked emotion from you, because as the writer, that's always my goal.