Reviews For One Last Kiss
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Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/13 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 11/17/13 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwh, I felt so bad for Bill as I read this. :( I almost stared crying! Oh god, my heart ached for Bill! I was so happy when Tom woke him up! THANK GOD IT WAS ONLY A BAD DREAM. The ending was cute! I loved it!!! ^^
Reviewer: sadangel10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 01/13/09 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was so sad at first, but i'm glad it was only a dream=DDD
great job, i enjoyed it=DD
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/08 05:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 11/23/08 05:19 am Title: Chapter 1
You totally made me cry with this. It was a little scattered but I liked it. I'm sooo glad it was only a dream. Good stuff. :)
Reviewer: TutkuNightlord Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/08 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 11/06/08 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww! That's so adorable!
Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 08/23/08 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a little difficult to read. The writing was a little choppy and it was hard to tell who was talking. I figured it out alright but it was still a little confusing.
You did a good job w/ the emotion. I'm really happy it was just a dream.
After Bill woke up it became more coherent.
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