Date: 11/11/08 02:23 am Title: Dirty Dancing
-needs more-
i love you.
Author's Response: thanks! <3
Date: 11/10/08 06:07 pm Title: Dirty Dancing
You make me feel so happy when I read this! It's like, OMG! Someone actually takes my advice. I'm not sure how good it was from other perpectives, but I liked it! Particularly the additional scene in the booth! And the dancing worked out well I think.
Looking good sweety!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! You helped alot with it too! I was worried about if it was hot enough or not. I'm pretty satisfied with it. <3 People who don't take your advice are crazy!
Date: 11/10/08 12:09 am Title: Dirty Dancing
WOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!.......d:)
Author's Response: I'm guessing it was good? :)Thanks for telling me! <3
Date: 10/28/08 09:39 pm Title: Answers
So Bill transfered his energy of calmness to Tom, right? Well I guess that explains why his come down wasn't so bad or else he would be wanting to commit suicide some where in the chapter instead having a heart to heart and cuddling.
Author's Response: Yep. You got it! :) And I've never done drugs before in my life, so I have no idea what you are supposed to be like after you take them.
Date: 10/27/08 08:12 pm Title: He Loves Me
Ommg, damned ice cream!! It made me hungry. XD Man, I so wanna go to Munich! Heck, screw that, I wanna go to Berlin. That would be amazing... :3 *blissed out*
Oh, anyways! Great update!! I think Bill and Tom together are so freaking adorable!! When's Tom going to find out though? And I know that Bushido is eventually going to have Tom go do another job... How's that gonna work out?
Oh, the sexy German-boy drama!! XD
Great update. :3
Author's Response: I want to go to Berlin so bad too! I told my friend we are going to go to Berlin when I visit her. Thanks! Tom is going to find out in a few more chapters...I don't want to give al ot more away, but it does have to do with Bushido and that other job. I'm so glad you liked it! <3
Date: 10/27/08 05:40 pm Title: He Loves Me
O.O alien billa clubbing........O.O
Author's Response: Teehee...I think it will be fun...
Date: 10/26/08 10:22 pm Title: He Loves Me
Well those end notes clear up a bit! Honestly I just skimmed this instead of being a good thurough reader but I'm happy you took my edits. Were they helpful? Seems that way but you could be humoring me. Well, anywho, I loved it, and I'm partial to the ice cream flavors, regardless of how bizarre they are.
Good job, look forward to hearing from you soon!
Date: 10/13/08 06:37 pm Title: Answers
That was so.... AW-ISH! :D Just so cute. Yeah, yeah, I know. It wasn't supposed to be cute. Sue me. :P I loved it anyways though. :3
Author's Response: Awww..thanks! It was supposed to be a little cute.. :p
Date: 10/13/08 04:16 pm Title: Answers
apart from the fact that their confessions were a bit strait forward for people who just met this was good. I liked the part about Tom not feeling whole and how understanding Bill was about it.
I liked how it ended too.
Author's Response: I couldn't get the confessions right...I feel the same way about them. I'm glad you liked the ending! <3
Date: 10/13/08 03:47 pm Title: 'Till I Get My Satisfaction
At least Tom said no to heroin. I loved that Bill went out to find Tom. And that Tom was all over him. Plus the imagdry of Georg was super funny. Love the ending though I imagine things will not be good the next morning.
Author's Response: Thanks, it is my favorite chapter so far.
Date: 10/13/08 01:01 am Title: Answers
awwwww...... d:)
Author's Response: Thanks! <3
Date: 10/08/08 09:01 pm Title: 'Till I Get My Satisfaction
Couple mistakes. You might want to find a beta just to check over it. Yo managed to catch most everything, but there's still those couple odd spots. :D
Much love for two fantastic updates!
(Yeah, I'm lazy and I hadn't read the 4th until tonight. XDD)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! And I'll definently send it to a beta!
Date: 10/06/08 01:46 am Title: 'Till I Get My Satisfaction
I like this. =] Keep it going!
Author's Response: Thanks alot! I'm trying, but I'm in a bit of a writer's block.
Date: 10/05/08 10:38 pm Title: 'Till I Get My Satisfaction
billa don't know about drugs do he?
Author's Response: No, I thought it would make the story more interesting if Bill didn't know what drugs are.
Date: 09/29/08 01:28 am Title: Look at the Mess We Made
y is tom selling that crap. LOVE IT!! CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!
d:)(gangsta smiley)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I should be putting it up tomorrow! <3
Date: 09/28/08 11:34 pm Title: Look at the Mess We Made
I'm oblivious to most grammer mistakes so I didn't notice any. Sorry.
I loved bill's experience w/ caffine. It was so funny! I'm sorry about how Bill was feeling at the end though. Tom doesn't hate him. He's just human. He was annoyed. I guess Bill doesn't have enough experience w/ humans to understand that though.
Tom's not gonna come back either will he? He doens't know.
I loved the effect of the room on Tom. At least Bill did that right. It was really nice.
You're a pretty good writer. I'm impressed. I really like this story.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! When I was writing it, I thought of the kids I babysit for on caffine...*shudder* :) I loved writing about the rooms too. I should be updating tomorrow. Hopefully I can answer your questions then too. I've been trying to work out all of my answers, and I have been quite busy with school. Thanks again!
Date: 09/28/08 11:20 pm Title: Vibrate?
Loved Bill's sorta military like cutenss. He's naive but totally w/ it. It's fabulous. And I'm glad Tom's warming up to him.
I liked the props you gave to global warming, much appreciated.
So Simone knew that Tom wasn't her's that good I guess. She still loved him though, that better.
Hope Bill doesn't drive Tom away w/ his strangeness.
Date: 09/28/08 11:11 pm Title: Meeting
Ok, so how much does Simone know? She knows he a commander. But does she know he's not from earth? And are Bill and Tom really twins? If so how come tom's on earth? I understand the concept of soul mates but tom and bill are identicle twins. They should have the same parents right? Is Tom not Simone's son? Tom doesn't appear to know that. Too bad he freaked. They were doing so well for a while there.
How does Tom explain how he gets beat up to his mom if she doesn't know he's selling drugs? Why does he do it if he gets beat up so much? Who beats him up? The ppl he's selling to? That makes no sense.
Date: 08/30/08 08:11 pm Title: Meeting
I pity you, you have chemistry.
I hope, for your sake, that you understand it better than me, Lindi, and Chelsye did.
lol, I'm picturing people calling Bill "commander", and it's the funniest thing ever.
And somehow, that gave me the mental picture of people calling YOU commander, so now I'm laughing too hard to type a proper review.
Author's Response: Ah lol. I had chem last year. It was one of the best classes ever! LOLOL someone called me satan the other day...and I laughed so hard. lmao I'm glad you liked it! <3