Date: 05/17/10 06:04 pm Title: A Small Peace
Awww!!! I'm so happy to see Tom finally not mad at Bill any more!!
Date: 09/05/09 09:36 am Title: A Small Peace
Im in love with this story its so beautiful and well written
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Your comment means a lot!!
Date: 08/29/09 07:26 pm Title: A Small Peace
plz update soon thx=]
Author's Response: I'm working on it! :)
Date: 08/26/09 06:04 am Title: A Small Peace
awww x3 mooooreee
this is great :D
Author's Response: Thank you!! :)
Date: 08/26/09 12:27 am Title: A Small Peace
Ooo! I did like this chapter. I'm glad the twins are ok and the thought the star tattoo appearing was very cool. The world you've created here is fantastice. I particularly enjoyed the part about Tom opening the door. I could just totally see it in my mind!
BTW, if you want I'd be happy to give you a hand again if you wanted it. I'm feeling better now and I think I'll have the time so if you want to brainstorm ideas of just have me look over a chapter I'd be happy to repraise the role. If not that's ok too. I'm totally happy just reading the chapters as they come. Whatever floats your boat.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!! I was worried it would be bad. lol I'm pretty proud of the world I've made, too. :) I would love to have you be my beta again!! I think I'll need to brainstorm some chapter ideas with you soon. Thank you so much for your review! It really made my day! Talk to you soon.
Date: 07/26/09 08:57 pm Title: Haunting You
THEY ARE GODS?! omgomg!! this storie is great! i thought it was gonna end after tom came to bill's place but NEIN! there is much more stuff to write n read! keep it up! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and kind words! This story has been on hiatus for me for a long time, the ideas and the whole thing just aren't flowing for me anymore. I'm writing some other stuff now to see if it helps clear the waters, but I promise I'll try my hardest to get this one finished!
Date: 04/25/09 03:23 pm Title: Haunting You
This was fantastic! OMG!! I don't even know what you ever needed me for at this point! Their relationship and the depth of it was beautiful, the pain, the nightmares/memories of them is just genious... I even liked the Godess part and I was hasitant over that.
Your description at the end was out of this world, and the last line... brilliant. Honestly, this is the best chapter yet!
Author's Response: Oh gosh, Jesse...I won't be able to stop smiling now because of your response. Seriously, Thank you!!!! I'm so glad the relationship is coming across like that! I did change the Goddess part with your suggestions. Your review means more to me than I can probably tell you right now. Thank you so much!
Date: 04/25/09 12:21 am Title: Haunting You
Holy cow, that was amazing!
Only a couple things at the end, like you were rushing through whatever you were typing, had mistakes. :D
Over all, still absolutely phenominal
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know and thanks for the wonderful review! Your reaction really means so, so much to me! <3
Date: 04/23/09 05:34 pm Title: Haunting You
i reallly dont get what just happend like rlly m confuzd updae tho
Author's Response: Chapter condensed: Bill and Tom are nervous around each other. Bill explains their connection. Tom remembers a nightmare he had about Bill. They pass out. Bill is visited by the Goddess. The end.
Date: 04/21/09 07:34 pm Title: Haunting You
O_O holy shit
...
more.
like...now! xD
Author's Response: oh goodness...thank you soooooooooo much for you review! I was sitting here very worried ancd thinking everyone hated it. I'm thinking a heartfilled christmas chaper is needed, don't you? lol :) Thank you VERY much for the review hon!
Date: 04/10/09 12:43 am Title: Take My Hand
Squees of delight and of huzzahness! :D I just love updates!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/30/09 03:45 pm Title: Take My Hand
LOVE IT!! omg this is rlly good u gotta update
Author's Response: Thanks! It will be soon, don't worry! :)
Date: 03/29/09 10:28 am Title: Take My Hand
this story kicks some major ass.
I hope Tom can learn to trust Bill again ^-^
Author's Response: Thanks! He will, don't worry! :)
Date: 03/29/09 03:39 am Title: Take My Hand
I fucking love this!! *squeals*
I've just read the whole story and can't wait for the next update!! *o*
I'd love to see a jealous Tom in here!XD
Sorry! I'm in a hyper mode right now!! :P
Author's Response: I'm so glad! ^^) I'll see if I can work in jelous Tom somewhere. lol Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/28/09 05:08 pm Title: Take My Hand
Trust me, this isn't short. Wow, it feels so different reading it from a reviewer perspective rather than a beta perspective. I have to admit I loved it! I don't know what I would have changed if I had managed to beta it properly (other than a few grammer errors). It was beautifully written the ending was perfect, the progression of Tom slowly beginning to trust Bill again is going really well... I really liked it.
Ya know I never noticed you writing style before, I mean, I did, but not like this, there was something about it, I'll figure out a word for it eventually, but it's great.
I'm really sorry I wasn't able to be the helpful person I wanted to be but I'm not totally sure you needed my help.
I can't wait to hear about you french person so you better write me and tell me all about them. Also, I'm still a decent ideas person so if your having trouble w/ where you want something to go I'd be happy to help there, I'm just to disoriented right now to deal w/ fine details (which I feel is what a beta is supposed to focus on).
I'll write to you soon,
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it-it makes me feel like I did I right. lol I'll have to look over it again-I poseted it late and feel asleep right after. I like the ending too! :) I'm curious to hear what my writing style is like! I'll be e-mailing you soon with details on her, and I have an idea for the next chapter I want to run by you. Talk to you soon, and thanks for the wonderful review! <3
Date: 03/28/09 05:06 am Title: Look at the Mess We Made
This isn't really important, but I have to mention that "sota" is Finnish and means war :DD
Author's Response: Oh wow...I had no idea! That is really cool!I love learning languages, so thank you so much for telling me!
Date: 03/28/09 02:50 am Title: Take My Hand
I love your story! I hope you update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm planning on an update soon!
Date: 03/28/09 01:32 am Title: Take My Hand
Yay! An update but with some major developments happening between Tom and Bill.
Hope you're able to update when you get back!
Author's Response: Yep. I have the next part already written..I might add some more. There is MAJOR drama. lol Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/25/09 06:27 pm Title: Look at the Mess We Made
“Do you want a so...ta? Sota?” Bill asked
Lol, ahhhh dude.... That was funny..
It's adorable how Bill is still learnig this earth stuff.
Author's Response: I love that part too! It makes me wanna giggle and hug Bill. :P
Date: 02/25/09 06:17 pm Title: Vibrate?
Okay... This story is interesting.
Author's Response: I'm glad! :)