Date: 08/29/08 03:32 am Title: Chapter 3
oh dear lord, it's not going to be a short nap, is it?
very, very nice smut.
Author's Response: thank you very much :)
Date: 08/29/08 03:07 am Title: Chapter 3
Awww, Tomi is such a sweetheart ._. I really, really love this! Update soon xxx
Author's Response: thank you <3
Date: 08/29/08 02:36 am Title: Chapter 3
u do such crazy things for love
i hope bill won't be descovered
Author's Response: thanks for reading and commenting :)
Date: 08/29/08 01:47 am Title: Chapter 3
oh gott... the hotness
Author's Response: ^.^
Date: 08/29/08 01:47 am Title: Chapter 3
oh squeeee how adorable!
Author's Response: thanks XD
Date: 08/28/08 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
OHHH YEA BSBY!! Kiss kiss. Yummy. *drool* your talent is astounding.
Author's Response: XD thank you! <3
Date: 08/28/08 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
OHHH YEA BaBY!! Kiss kiss. Yummy. *drool* your talent is astounding.
Date: 08/27/08 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is epic win. Please update it soon, I really, really love the idea! It reminds me so much of the books I grew up reading... I love you, hun!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 08/27/08 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tom's so cute! A bit hormonal, but he's a guy. I love how he and Bill met, a bit akward, but hey, whatever.
And then he and Bill just clicked. It was great.
B/c it's dark they can't really see each other can they?
I loved that it ended in a kiss too! Tom obviously is falling for Bill, and Bill is falling for Tom.
Will Tom be upset when he learns the truth?
Update soon.
Author's Response: thanks so much for commenting :)
Date: 08/27/08 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
ohhh billy..billy
tomi will learn u a few things...
i hope they'll have sex...
i liked the way u described the city..the places...it's so vivid ,like i'm there
Author's Response: thank you very much
Date: 08/26/08 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very nice! The details are wonderful without being overdone, and it really makes you feel like you're standing right there next to Bill.
The end of this chapter was breath-taking. So very well written. I look forward to the rest :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much <3 I'll be posting more in a couple of days.
Date: 08/26/08 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
lol I love how Tom tried to pick Bill up for the night...and that he didn't care that Bill was a boy ^.^
Author's Response: Why would he? XD
Date: 08/26/08 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
somehow, it came to my mind "alladin" when he was showing his "home" with view to the palace to jasmine.
Author's Response: you're not the first person to mention that which is ironic since I haven't seen that movie in about 15 years!
Date: 08/26/08 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
beautiful. more pls
Author's Response: thank you :) more soon!
Date: 08/26/08 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
OH MY GOD"
Thissss iss just perfect.
This fic is so well written goshhhhh O_O
I just loveeeee all the details.
its like a movie
Author's Response: thank you so much :)
Date: 08/26/08 11:56 am Title: Chapter 2
I love it, I love it, I love it :D
Author's Response: thank you! :)
Date: 08/26/08 10:36 am Title: Chapter 2
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*melts on the floor with a stupid smile on*
Author's Response: XD *mops you up*
Date: 08/26/08 09:26 am Title: Chapter 2
shalalalalala, don't be scared, you got the mood prepared, go on and kiss the Bill, lala.
Now that I have serenaded you with one Disney movie song, I'll go back to waiting for the next chapter lol
Author's Response: Lots of Disney connections seem to be triggering with people reading this!rnrn<3
Date: 08/26/08 06:50 am Title: Chapter 2
This is amazing!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 08/26/08 05:06 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm loving this so much!
Author's Response: thank you <3