Date: 09/18/08 06:12 am Title: Chapter 9
:D meet the parents!
Author's Response: XD
Date: 09/18/08 06:06 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh my.. O_O *speechless*
This is absolutely amazing ^_^
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/18/08 05:41 am Title: Chapter 9
AMAZING chapter, whoo! i really, really, REALLY liked this one!
yay tom is on Bills rooom, i know to expect some questions on tom's side, but weeeee so exciting! and i'm scafred about what David will do.
Author's Response: thank you <3
Date: 09/18/08 05:33 am Title: Chapter 9
O_O
I'm still shocked that Tom now knows. Well... I suppose he was going to find out sooner or later. Perhaps Tom will become his official boy. :P I hope Tom will forgive him.
Author's Response: <3 thanks for commenting
Date: 09/18/08 05:03 am Title: Chapter 9
holy shit!!!!
best chapter EVER!
*claps hands*
I'd pay to see tom's face right now! xD
Author's Response: thank you! :)
Date: 09/18/08 04:05 am Title: Chapter 9
oooh gott! i keep forgetting that tom & bill are actually twins in this fic.
OMGGGG DRAMA DRAMA! can't waitttt
Author's Response: XD thanks for commenting
Date: 09/18/08 03:51 am Title: Chapter 9
*blinks*
Wow. A lot happened in a short amount of time... But, damn. Awesome update. :)
Now Tom knows. Ought to be fun as hell.
Author's Response: Yes, quite a jam packed chapter! >.<
Date: 09/17/08 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
Poor Bill, David certainly doesn't treat him as an heir. I wish Bill had been able to escape. I guess Gustav knows huh? Nice of him not to tell, make him a truly trust worthy friend ok? And maybe the next chapter could be a bit lighter? This was so... creepy. All the people act like rapists towards Bill. I want Tom in the next chaper. Please.
Author's Response: I'll try my best with Gustav :)
Date: 09/16/08 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
Gustav is so sweet.
Author's Response: he is <3
Date: 09/16/08 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ooooooo..... :):):):):):):):):):)
Author's Response: XD
Date: 09/16/08 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aww, I love Gusti in this. He makes me happy. ^^
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad :)
Date: 09/16/08 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
in one place you have a misprint in this chapter... when Gustav was bringing wine to Bill you called him Georg in one of the lines...
chapter is good... how far did David get with a stoned Bill?
Author's Response: Thanks I've fixed that typo.rnrnAnd David got just as far with Bill as the story described. :)
Date: 09/16/08 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh... Gustav really surprised me. But Iīm glad he cares. Bill needs somebody to trust behind palace walls.
What I cannot understand is why David acts towards Bill this way (despite his affection). Bill is his heir and David should realize that if his soldiers and other people accompanying him will see how he treats Bill, Bill needīt gain their respect someday and the whole empire could be ruined (even without Tomīs predicted intervention). Heīs totally fool. I really donīt like him.
Amazing again. Iīm feel so absorbed in this story and I cannot wait to read next chapter. Thanks Em :-)
Author's Response: sadly, I think that David would rather think he'll be ruling forever than the idea that he might have to pass everything on to Bill. He wants what he wants. :(rnrnthank you :)
Date: 09/16/08 10:50 am Title: Chapter 8
You got a mistake here: "Geovius returned with more wine and Bill drank it quickly". You have other gramatical mistakes but I think that one you should really change ;)
Gustav knows! Oh my o_______o
Author's Response: Thank you! I've fixed it.
Date: 09/16/08 10:31 am Title: Chapter 8
aw, this one was sad in a way; and MAN does david freak me out iN this one! i was scare for a moment that david would bring tom into the banquet(thingy) and have him do something, i don't really know what....
as always an interestign and amazing chapter. thank you!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/16/08 09:49 am Title: Chapter 8
EMMMY!!!!!!!!!! i had to read it here cos i prefer the grey background to the white on lj.
it's gorgeous! it's like aladdin but better! oh god. probably going to end up being my favourite AU.
lovelovelove:D:D
Author's Response: <3<3<3 thank you so much :)
Date: 09/16/08 06:41 am Title: Chapter 8
awwe noooo. Bill didn't get to see his Tom. The palace is sounding horrible more and more. I'd prefer to be with Tom.
Author's Response: me too! <3
Date: 09/16/08 06:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for this great update. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love it very much.
Date: 09/16/08 06:05 am Title: Chapter 8
I really hate David, but his character fits perfectly into the story.
I still love it ^_^
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/13/08 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
D:
I really don't like David. Like, really.
Author's Response: I'm sorry :( keep reading!