Date: 09/20/08 03:55 am Title: Chapter 10
yaj! you continued ^^) i read the whole fic yesturday and fell in love with it!!! i even had a dream about what's gonna happen next, but it was kinda sad so im happy that this real one wasn't sad :) i really don't know how you can create so real - athmospere and happenings and places and stuff.. i feel like im wathing a good movie, it all seems so realistic, something that could have happened few thousand years ago, and you still don't forget the plot and storyline.. i just love this, i dunno other words for it.. so Plese continue soooonn!!!!
Author's Response: thanks so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it. More to come!
Date: 09/20/08 03:54 am Title: Chapter 10
this chapter was sweet and intense
i was so nervous that someone will come in the room and find them...
and i like more bill bottoming
Author's Response: I like Bill bottoming too, but I also like a little Bill on top every now and then! :)
Date: 09/20/08 02:08 am Title: Chapter 10
wow, an amazingly awesome chapter, i'm glad Tom didn't freak out, i know he's not exactly comfortable with it yet, but i hate it when people freak out over things like someone not telling them something, i know i wouldn't be mad, i just be a little scared and what not...but maybe i'm odd...
I'm really glad you updated, and i'm still nervous about what david will do if he finds out, which i'm sure he will.
and i lile how the boys most likely are borthers in this.
i don't have any costructive critisism though, i tend not to look for things that need to be fixed or what not, i just enjoy. XD and believe me it wa senjoyalbe *giggle*
I love top bill, and it doesn't happen (isn't written) much when(the twins) they go both ways i like that.
Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback, I really appreciate it. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I love topBill too XD
Date: 09/20/08 01:58 am Title: Chapter 10
Awww... I'm so glad Tomi didn't leave him... *sigh*
Lovely chapter, brilliant close. ^^
Date: 09/20/08 12:51 am Title: Chapter 10
Ahh! He does know Tom's the boy from his dreams
Author's Response: He's getting there :)
Date: 09/20/08 12:41 am Title: Chapter 10
SPOONING !!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: XD spooning always wins!
Date: 09/19/08 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
So, that's Bill's room...and????
I seriously need to know what's next... Please? Pretty please? This story kicks more ass with chapter.
Author's Response: keep reading! XD
Date: 09/19/08 05:48 am Title: Chapter 9
omg I forgot to leave a review for this one D:
It was such a great chapter! I was so worried that Tom might be really pissed at Bill and they'd have a fight but thank God it didn't happen. Now I can't wait for the next one. Omg, if David finds out about Tom *trembles with fear* D8
Author's Response: <3 thanks for commenting :)
Date: 09/19/08 04:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, wonderful cliffhanger. Can't wait for moooooore!!!!!!!!
Date: 09/18/08 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh, his boy ;) Good choice. Loved this chapter.
Author's Response: ;) definitely his boy XD and thank you
Date: 09/18/08 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
Well, that went... well? Tom could have had a worse reaction so, so far so good, of course Geo was mad, but he'll get over it. I hope Tom will accept this, maybe they'll introduce Tom to Bill's mother, and she'll recognize him as her son. That would be great, sorta. Updae soon.
Author's Response: :) thanks for commenting
Date: 09/18/08 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 9
Haha. XD
I actually almost feel bad for those guards. Almost. lol
This is win, I can't wait to see how they get out of this one!
Author's Response: Almost XDrnrn<3
Date: 09/18/08 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
"So, this is my room!" LOOOL Only Bill to say something like that in such a time like this! xDDDD
OMG Tom as a slave...imagine the possibilities *.*
Author's Response: heeee awkward.... XDrnmaybe there needs to be a whole other story where Tom is Bill's slave...
Date: 09/18/08 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
now wat gonna happen?
Author's Response: wait and see! ;)
Date: 09/18/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
this was a really tense chapter
i hope they'll do something good in bill's room too*wink*
Author's Response: XD I hope so too!
Date: 09/18/08 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love this
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/18/08 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
I DEMAND MORE
I always get so excited to see my favorite storys updated
that includes this one
Author's Response: aw thank you! I'm glad you like it :)
Date: 09/18/08 09:27 am Title: Chapter 9
Ahhh!! He finally found out!!
I'm so happy that you didn't make Tom turn Bill away. I might have cried... monsoon style.
DDD:
Anyway.... this is such an awesome story. I'm so addicted to it, haha.
Author's Response: XD I'm glad you like it. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 09/18/08 09:12 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm in love with this story! *.* I hope everything works out fine for our boys.
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 09/18/08 06:25 am Title: Chapter 9
omg Em, can you please update very quickly? This chapter was really breathtaking. I read it so quickly that now Iīm going to read it once more :-D
It such an amazing story!
I get Geoīs reaction, however Bill is still the same, but Geo neednīt know it, he doesnīt know him so well. Heīs peace and freedom fighter, he must be careful and now heīs confused and upset.
Tom really loves him and tries to understand. I wonder what they will do now. Everything is going to be so complicated. Will they be happy together in the end, promise? ;-) No, I donīt wanna hear it now. I like it so much that Iīll be patiently waiting.
Author's Response: thank you so much! I appreciate your feedback XD I wont give away the ending though! <3