Date: 09/25/08 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 14
Well, so much for waiting to take David on. Looks like it's now or never. Can't wait for the next chapter. Is Simone unhappy that Bill and Tom are together? I thought that wasn't too uncommon in egypt at the time.
Do the G's know each other?
UPDATE!!!
Date: 09/25/08 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 14
noooo damn i was like man David shows up kill him Tom!! lol u did good i love this story keep writeing!!
Date: 09/25/08 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 14
Bill, why did you have to be so stubborn D; Fuck, this story is getting me so riled up. I am one hundred percent in love with it. It's unravelling like a movie. I wish it were!
Date: 09/25/08 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
EEEEEK! oh wow, i seriously screamed when i read the last line! omg i hope you keep doing these quick updates, because i'm DYING HERE. HOMG. >
Author's Response: yes :D updating again tonight.
Date: 09/25/08 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 14
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
Author's Response: >.<
Date: 09/25/08 10:19 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh God!!! Can't he just suddenly have a heart attack or something? Don't you think that would be an awesome ending? I certainly do... *big sad sigh*
Author's Response: hahaha that would be very interesting XD
Date: 09/25/08 07:05 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh my god O_O
You made me speechless...
This is one hell of a cliffhanger
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/25/08 07:05 am Title: Chapter 14
The Family is together again. No we just have to do something about that stinkin', rotten, Uncle!!
Oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god - Don't Hurt Him!!
Author's Response: XD
Date: 09/25/08 06:58 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh God! The cliffhanger from HELL. Jeebus. LOL. Fantastic story, but ahhhh!
Author's Response: thanks! XD
Date: 09/25/08 04:33 am Title: Chapter 14
:O oh my god!
Author's Response: DX
Date: 09/25/08 04:29 am Title: Chapter 14
omg... I cannot wait until tomorrow morning! Fantastic, so so real and breathtaking.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/25/08 04:29 am Title: Chapter 14
........................................................................ holy shit
O.O
Author's Response: >.<
Date: 09/25/08 03:01 am Title: Chapter 14
oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!!! *runs frantically about the room pulling hair out* What is going to happen!
i am so nervous about what will happen right now, lol....
Author's Response: XD don't keel over!
Date: 09/25/08 02:43 am Title: Chapter 14
Damn...
You're fucking awesome at packing a lot in one chapter. Holy fucking damn.
*blinks*
I think I need to just sit back and, like... Take it in for a minute.
Author's Response: Not TOO much I hope >.<
Date: 09/25/08 12:08 am Title: Chapter 13
I may have said this before, but... I'm REALLY not a fan of Bill on top. However, when you write it... It amazes me how much I enjoy it. :/
Anyways... I really like how this story is unfolding... God, Tomi better listen to his little brother soon. He knows they're twins, why doesn't he admit it? D:
*hands you cookie*
Next chapter soon, please? ;D
Author's Response: thank you :D I'm glad you like it even with the Bill on top
Date: 09/24/08 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 13
Now that was ... beautiful.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/24/08 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
exquisite beauty of reunion...
Author's Response: :)
Date: 09/24/08 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
Well, Simone knows now, I'm supprised she didn't come running in on them. But at least she knows now. And David orderd Tom to be killed. Never works does it? I hope the part about them meeting their fate pertains to a GOOD fate. Not a sad end.
Did Tom accept the truth? I wasn't totall sure.
Thanks for the dairly updates.
Author's Response: He has :) slowly! XD
Date: 09/24/08 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
Amazing writing. Very intense.
Author's Response: thank you :)