Date: 09/27/08 11:26 am Title: Chapter 16
This was great!!! I'm so happy w/ David's death. I'm morbid I know, but he got what he deserved and he learned the truth before he died. Idiot. And now Tom and Bill are together forever and I guess they'll establish a republic. All's well that end's well right?
Thank you so much! I loved this story! Definately a favorite.
Author's Response: thank you <3
Date: 09/27/08 11:00 am Title: Chapter 16
woehaaa, yeeeey! He's dead! :D
I'm very very proud of Bill!!
Author's Response: me too! <3
Date: 09/27/08 09:27 am Title: Chapter 16
OMG! O_O
It was absolutely perfect. Loved every bit.
You seriously have a way with words that I have never seen before ^_^
Author's Response: wow thank you :)
Date: 09/27/08 08:37 am Title: Chapter 16
Fantastic story! I loved every minute of it, though I will miss reading this every day before work now. :( But it was a great read!
Author's Response: thank you so much :)
Date: 09/27/08 07:49 am Title: Chapter 16
I've not had a keyboard in god only knows how long. I've meant to review each chapter, but I couldn't.
I feel bad about that.
I've adored every word of this, it's been fucking perfect, too say the least.
It wasn't rushed or unresearched, and most importantly it was interesting. Not once whilst I was reading did I get bored, or wander away in search of something more interesting like I do with alot of fics, this was perfect.
Everything fit so well, from Bill not knowing how the outside world worked and Geovus' and Gustavian's secret agendas.
There wasn't a thing that I could find wrong with this, it was utterly perfect
Author's Response: thanks so much for commenting now, I appreciate it and I'm really glad you liked the story. <3
Date: 09/27/08 07:01 am Title: Chapter 16
Perfect ending. I think this may be my all-time favourite fic. It was completely enchanting, and thank you so much for it.
Author's Response: thank you! :) <3
Date: 09/27/08 05:48 am Title: Chapter 16
*sniffles* I'm so happy it ended well, but so sad that it's over.
Author's Response: <3 glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 09/27/08 05:44 am Title: Chapter 16
that was so sweet. i love the ending, actually i love any jappy ending! great story!
Author's Response: thank you :D
Date: 09/27/08 05:30 am Title: Chapter 16
sooo much action, u write so well, i pictured it all... and i awwwwwwed at the end)))
lov u! sequel???
Author's Response: Not sure about a sequel or not yet XD
Date: 09/27/08 05:26 am Title: Chapter 16
I really am sad to see the end of this story - you've put together a fantastic piece of work here and it really did have everything in it. I would love to see a sequel with Tom negotiating the political nightmares of implementing democracy where it wasn't before, but that's just my type of thing and I know as an author you sometimes want to let things stand.
That said, thank you for sharing such a fantastic fic. You can pride yourself on having made me miss the bus once this week, and the fact that I was running late was the only reason I didn't review at the time.
I think, for me, two of the main high points for the fic were how you handled the role of the goddess and how you approached the fight scenes. Both of those are always difficult to handle in text and make them seem really effective - you really succeeded there.
Author's Response: well I'm sorry you missed the bus but I'm so happy you liked it enough to miss the bus, if that makes sense! lol thank you so much for your comment I really appreciate it.
Date: 09/27/08 05:07 am Title: Chapter 16
aaaaawwww sweet!!!! ^///^
im gonna miss this story so much! *wipes tears*
Author's Response: <3 thanks for your comment
Date: 09/27/08 04:54 am Title: Chapter 16
Yes!! All is saved. I'm soo glad everything turned out for the best - Meaning Dsvid is dead!! YES!!
Brilliant ending. Brilliant story. I'm sad its over.
Author's Response: thanks for your comments :)
Date: 09/27/08 03:34 am Title: Chapter 16
AMAZING! *tears of joy* this chapter was so exciting! lovely job hun! i loved the idea of using th eletter opener! and right through the heart awesome!
poor Tom though, ruling a country can be hard, but at least he has his bill. i'm sad this story is over, but glad a tthe same time. it absolutly amazez me how many stories you have completed! i barely managed to complete one mutichaptered monster, *le sigh* anyways beautiful story XD
Author's Response: Most of my fics are just one shots haha the multichapter stuff is hard.rnthanks for your comment :)
Date: 09/27/08 02:48 am Title: Chapter 16
Too bad it's over. Enjoyed it untill the last word. This story shows there needn't be too much porn to make it a nice fic! Thank you, again.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/27/08 02:47 am Title: Chapter 16
Why do the best ones always have to end? I'm going to miss this story but it was a great read., one I'll probably read again. Thanks
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/27/08 02:17 am Title: Chapter 16
TOGETHERRRRRR~
Date: 09/27/08 02:03 am Title: Chapter 16
Oh bby... it was perfect.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/27/08 01:34 am Title: Chapter 16
amazing story. the th boys should feel very honored to be in this fic. ^_^
Author's Response: aw thank you <3
Date: 09/27/08 01:13 am Title: Chapter 16
*bounces happily*
Fabulous ending to an amazing story. :) I absolutely loved the entire thing, from start until finish. This was a wonderful little world you created and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Author's Response: thank you so much :)
Date: 09/27/08 01:09 am Title: Chapter 16
Holy fuck I loved it. Sequel? =D
Author's Response: thank you :) not sure about a sequel or not at this stage.