Date: 11/11/08 01:43 am Title: Chapter 16
o goodness, i dont even know what to say about this story...i passed up reading it so many times and now im hitting myself for it. i ablsolutely loved it!! lots of action, love and passion that makes a story perfect..and Tom bottoming helped a lot too (sorry i have a thing with that, to me it is like the hottest thing in the world!!)absolutely beautiful story
Date: 10/30/08 01:10 am Title: Chapter 16
Oh Goddess!
Your an excellent writter! :)
Very well done:)
Good Job:)
Date: 10/28/08 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow, possibly one of the best AU's I've ever read!!! It kinda reminded me of the Scorpion King (I love those movies!), not that anything was actually the same. It was dramatic and funny and just sweet! And Tom got bottomed!!!! Wow, I'm sure you're not the first to do that but its the first I read. I was like this the whole time :O
Date: 10/24/08 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 16
LOVED this story! You did a fabulous job writing this!
Date: 10/22/08 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 16
this was definitely a movie
so cool
i really suck with words right now
but i loved it!
maybe after i'm not sick anymore i'll be more descriptive :-)
Date: 10/11/08 10:16 am Title: Chapter 16
Alright this is unbelievable!
I read this story with animated, blurry, disgusted and smiling eyes.
It's was just amazing!
You combinated history, mystery and love all together. Those are my favorites subjects.
Every word was special, I swear!
And the passion was spatting of my screen. It was also very original. And it looks like you really know how every person, the poor ones and the rich was, lived there in that tome. It looks proffecional and all sorts of stufff.
Great job!
Do you know that you've made me smile, and cry and bouncing all over my chair.
And in the end WOUW!
I hate the uncle, he's a total jerk! and when I read this line: Bill shoved again and the small knife slid deeper. My smile was so big. I know it's a little cruel but all I thought was:
the sweet taste of revenge
It ís true.
But Anyway, I realy love the story and I'm gunna read it again and again untill I'm going crazy xD
So this was my comment..
Oh by the wasy, I'm dutch, so my English is not so well, sorry for the my spelling and gramaticall mistakes.
xoxox ragdoll
Date: 10/03/08 01:32 am Title: Chapter 16
i was waiting for the ending and it was the best it made my day i got that happy feelingand it made me wanna cry and smile at the same time ur a very good writer and u made this story come to life really i could picture everything im so glad i came across this story ill probly read it again i liked it so much keep writeing good stories i no u will lol ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Thanks for reading and commenting :)
Date: 10/01/08 07:51 am Title: Chapter 16
I don't really know what I should say exactly. This story was great. I've had to stay up all night to watch over my brother. He's epileptic you see, and he had another seizure last night. This story has kept me awake, and thouroughly entertained. So you have my sincerest thanks.
Author's Response: Wow *hugs* I'm glad this story was able to distract you. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 09/30/08 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
Aw.
Absolutely badass.
Author's Response: thanks :D
Date: 09/30/08 05:53 am Title: Chapter 16
I can't believe it's over.. it feels so unreal. Aaaw, I'm gonna miss it "/
It felt kinda like a movie. A very good movie. I could imagine everything that happened. (Which was kinda gross when they were fighting, too much blood xD)
It takes a good writer to have that effect on a reader. You and this story is going to my favs right away!
I want to thank you for this story, it has touched me in many ways. Again, thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) I hope it wasn't too bloody for you XD
Date: 09/29/08 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 16
This was awesome! I enjoyed every second of it!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/29/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
awwwwwwwwwwww
Author's Response: <3
Date: 09/29/08 07:42 am Title: Chapter 16
You really wrote a wonderful story. I enjoyed every letter and I liked it a lot. The final fight wasn´t long however strong and emotional. The prophecy was right. Tom killed David through Bill. That´s why there had to be two of them. David was so cruel and deranged... he deserved what he got.
Well, thank you for writing it for us and I´m looking forward to read other fantasies of yours.
Author's Response: thanks so much- thanks for all your comments on the chapters :)
Date: 09/28/08 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 16
ohhh i'm sad ! it can't be over ! i looove this story ! but it was a happy ending !
Date: 09/28/08 05:44 am Title: Chapter 16
I love this story a292;just love it z90;amazinga281;
Author's Response: ank you :)
Date: 09/27/08 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh well. Looks like everybody wants to finish all the stories! XDD
Bue, well I liked!! i think there are a lost part in this but I don't know what it is, so, I just take what is writting in here.
thanks for the awesome story!
Author's Response: I'm not sure what part you missed, did you read all the chapters? <3
Date: 09/27/08 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 16
Perfect ending *.*
Author's Response: thank you ^__^
Date: 09/27/08 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
love it!!!! d:)(gangsta smiley)
Author's Response: thanks :D
Date: 09/27/08 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 16
oh gosh. this chapter was amazing. it played through my head like the best action movie/drama in the world!! i'm so glad it was bill who got the chance to avenge himself on his uncle. he sure taught david a lesson! :D
this story is one of the best i've ever read on this site. never once did i think "oh, this thing's getting way too long" or "oh, i'm bored." it was good from beginning to end! every word of it! you started with a bang, and kept that excitement up until the very last word! great job!!
Author's Response: thank you so much <3
Date: 09/27/08 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
Aw. This story was so fast-paced and epic and well-written and romantic and just great all around. Great job with it! A fantasy fic like this isn't easy to do and you pulled it off well :)
Author's Response: Thanks very much :)