Date: 09/06/08 05:53 pm Title: I
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DOLL_(manga)
It's the only manga I actually read :)
Date: 09/06/08 01:53 pm Title: I
Ooooh, lovely, very well done, and SO very DOLL-esque! I won't assume that this fic was inspired by that manga, but if you haven't read it? You NEED to, as soon as possible :)
I would have to agree that in normal circumstances I would find it hard to believe that Tom wouldn't recognize Bill no matter what, but I kind of like to think that Tom's state of mind through much of his, along with this preoccupation, would easily cloud that for him. Not to mention any subconscious dealings at work, he just may have known all along but the horror of it would be too much for him to handle. So yes, I find this totally believable, in this universe :)
Author's Response: Good to know. :) But no, we have never read that manga. I didn't even know it existed; I don't really read any manga.
Date: 09/04/08 11:31 pm Title: V
This made me so SO sad.
I really loved the story.
Date: 09/04/08 06:30 pm Title: V
That was sad. Which is definitely a nice change. *hughug*
Date: 09/04/08 06:24 pm Title: V
That was such a bitter-sweet and beautiful ending. I wish it this could have ended "happily-ever-after", but this seems to be the only true ending for the story.
Date: 09/04/08 03:54 pm Title: V
Oh god, you've turned me into a mess of tears. That was a beautiful ending ;.;
Date: 09/04/08 03:04 pm Title: V
It's...not over? Or is it?
Date: 09/04/08 12:26 pm Title: V
OH MY GOD that was such an amazing story.
That made my cry so badly! you did so good writing this. Amazing.
Date: 09/04/08 07:04 am Title: I
OMG I can't close my mouth
Date: 09/04/08 04:31 am Title: V
i almost cried.. the emotions in this one are so strong.
and i'm glad you named the last chapter after me. ;]
Date: 09/04/08 04:15 am Title: V
I think I will just stay here with my mouth hanging open and never give a proper review, because I seriously don't think I can.
Date: 09/04/08 03:50 am Title: V
terribly beautiful...and i use that in a litteral sense
Date: 09/04/08 03:41 am Title: V
I am not surprised, it's what I thought was going on. I was really hoping for a happier ending but the world it's based in made this make more sense. I need fluffy fic, like, now, cuz my heart feels like it's in a vice.
Date: 09/01/08 11:38 pm Title: IV
Why do I feel like the robot is Bill? .___.
Please don't do that to me. Please.
Date: 08/31/08 08:51 am Title: IV
The description about the woman tom helped to escape so much suffering by dying was so painfull to read.
571 is sooo cute!But continues to refer to HIM as "IT". And i liketo believe that 571 was hurt when tom asked again he question,ignoring every comforting words 571 said,because his voice was a bit more robotic.It's like when we're hurt and give a cool reply to someone.I also like to believe that his human parts are as strong,and that he still has a heart and a soul eventhough he's physically partly a robot.That's just a plus!
I hope,really hope that Tom won't have to confront a cyborg fully programmed Bill who won't recognize him at all.I'm sure, if he loses 571,he'll be more broken.O_O And wow, if 571 had to fight aginst Bill to protect Tom? My imagination is running here! XD
If 571 is Bill,that would be cool.Even if he's pshysically transformed.
Maybe half of what i'm saying is very laughable! but that's what i think about this whle story for now^^
Date: 08/31/08 08:25 am Title: III
Oh ,cyborg it is.Not android *shame*. 571's programm isn't complete,that's cool.Maybe the human part in him will come to the surface someday?I'm still conviced it's Bill's body they choose to transform it into 571.They are now probably looking for him desperately!
Or Tom will have to confront a Cyborg Bill? O_O Oh,my!
The prorammation of the cyborg reminds me a bit of "I robot" the film with will smith,that robot's aren't programmed to harm human,they are like servants and they do whatever their master wants
Author's Response: I don't know that it's against the rules, but at the very least, English is probably better for regular reviewing, simply because while I speak French, Sophia does not. Though the franglais amused me. ;)
Glad you enjoy it!