Date: 06/20/09 11:08 am Title: V
It's really beautiful and strong. I was... yeah, I couldn't tell that I'm actually was crying, but the thing you do to me, is completely unbelievable. It's trembling hands and glassy eyes, not tears completely.
Thank you for that amazing story.
Date: 04/11/09 10:59 pm Title: V
Woah. Amazing. You two never cease to amaze me. Beautiful, masterful, and many other adjectives which would take up too much space.
This is going straight to my favorites.
Date: 04/08/09 12:54 am Title: V
This was just....
I can't even describe it.
Really amazing job. (: *favorites*
Date: 03/20/09 05:30 pm Title: V
Heartbreaking and awesome. Just...wow.
Date: 02/15/09 11:43 pm Title: V
This was by far the saddest story that I have ever read. Truelly was not expecting 571 to be Bill and was heart broken. I only wish they could have lived instead of die but perfectly understandable. :) loved it
Date: 02/03/09 10:04 am Title: V
God I cried so much when I read this...It was so nice and so sad to have the story end with their last night together...
Why couldn't Cyborg Bill live and stay with Tom. It would have been so much nicer, even if his Bill was already dead? His memories could have come back and I wouldn't be feeling so depressed right now. *crying*
I really like this story, it was sad but I liked all the experiments and labs and all that kind of stuff. I loved all of the flashbacks too, it didn't just make it so had you had to work out everything for yourself, even though it was obvious what had happened. Great story.
Date: 01/26/09 11:57 am Title: I
The ending is so sad, but in a way it's the best ending for them, at least they can be together.
Another heart clencher from you two.
Date: 01/25/09 12:51 pm Title: I
Another amazing fic from both of you. Everything just felt so real... It's original, very well written and it's not the cheesy type but still heart-aching.. I like it.^^
The moment he found 571, I knew it was Bill, but I was thinking whether he's a replica of the real Bill, or a cyborg. LOL..XD It was Resident Evil that came into my mind about the cyborg: Project Alice. (About the replica robot, AI and I-Robot.. LOL!XD) And I think I've read a fiction novel of something about Nano bytes and stuff- Dean Koontz' work, I believe- except that it's not about cyborgs, but a kind of mutation to the body..
First time I've read a sci-fi fic. Amazing^^
Date: 01/11/09 10:18 am Title: V
Ahhh I should not have read this just before bed! Now I'm all miserable and guh.
Date: 01/02/09 04:28 pm Title: I
this made me cry..
very well written! it didn't turn cheesy and all lovey-dovey, great story!
Date: 12/08/08 06:15 pm Title: V
Damn you both and your amazing writing skills. It was good, great honestly.
I knew that cyborg was Bill, that was really a great job n both your part.
Oh, happy birthday majestrix by the way!
Date: 11/27/08 07:58 am Title: V
Read this with a heavy heart; especially at the end where I knew I would tear but carried on reading it anyway.
I'm just staring into space going over the scenes in my head. Poor Tom.
Date: 11/17/08 10:26 pm Title: V
I've read several of your fics, and I always find it so difficult to review. In fact, I feel like calling this work a "fic" is disrespectful to the level of writing obviously displayed. Every emotion is so intense. The plot, which could've easily been cheese'd up and predictable, was so strong and mysterious. I can't even - I'm so....overwhelmed by the sheer awesomeness of it. I couldn't stop reading. I had to re-read some parts, in fact, just because of the detail, and....
...I'm not saying what I want to say. Crap.
It was original and well executed, and one of my favorite AUs thus far. You're gifted when it comes to literature. You get it. It shows in your writing. I feel like I should go review everything else I've read, and yet I know it'd be redundant. I'd say the same things in a slightly different context.
So just know that I'm well and truly blown away by how you write and I hope this inspires you to write more and often.
:)
Date: 11/08/08 08:38 am Title: V
"I found his death certificate."
I knew it was coming, but it still hit me like a huge, huge, HUGE blow.
The whole thing is heart-wrenching. Absolutely heart-wrenching. Especially this final chapter.
I love it so much, I could cry.
Date: 09/29/08 01:26 pm Title: V
I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to give you guys a good review here... I am to astonished to think strait, right now!
I've never thought I would like to read a story containing character death, but I'm glad I did!
The overall feeling of the story is like it's a Japanese Anim� of some kind!
"Ghost in the Shell" comes to mind quite easily, especially the third chapter!
I have never read any TH fic containing cyborgs before, so to me, it was quite original!
You have done a excellent work, and I'm proud to say I liked it a lot! :)
Thank You!
I will add it to my favourites!
Date: 09/17/08 08:32 am Title: V
Oh wow, I'm so glad I finally got to read this, it's probably my favourite of yours :) I knew from the moment he said he was a cyborg that it was Bill, which left me with a kind of dread as I read the rest of it, waiting for Tom to figure it out. lol I had in mind this cheesy scenario where he'd find out and then Billborg would get all his memories back and they'd live happily ever after and have cyborg sex, and I'm just so glad that didn't happen ;)
More sci-fi!
Date: 09/08/08 07:50 pm Title: V
Wow, I don't even know what to say about this one... it's sad, sweet, and despair-filled all at once. It's beautiful, but makes me want to cry. I'm so conflicted! It's got a great artistic flair, with the recorded camera scene at the end... the only memories left of them. I love how even though Tom's got nothing without his brother, he won't give up until he finds him. At least he finally does and they can be together in the afterlife (or their next life, or whatever). I think I need lessons from you on how to get such emotion out of a piece of writing... just amazing!
Date: 09/07/08 02:00 pm Title: I
Loved the story though the ending made me sad. However, it seemed the most logical ending. Guess you can't win them all, can you?!