Date: 06/09/18 02:31 pm Title: Las Vegas Baby
this was a good story!
Date: 05/05/09 11:40 am Title: Las Vegas Baby
hehe, so cool! and finally, another person who writes on their phone. :)
Date: 10/09/08 05:25 pm Title: Las Vegas Baby
Ray-Ray your banner is crappy. Can I make you a new one? Yeah I'll do that...
To be honest your writing isn't that great, but it's getting better. With some pracctice you could be the next...hmm...ME!
Harharhar no.
But you could definitley improve.
Don't Forget captain Dan and His Scurvy Crew are ACE.
And BushiBushi is gon raep you.
Now excuse me while I go off to make you a banner!
Date: 09/08/08 03:23 pm Title: Las Vegas Baby
Hehe, funny!
I liked it.
Date: 08/23/08 01:15 pm Title: Las Vegas Baby
oh wow on ur phone lolz i loved it funny as hell u should write more often lolz
Author's Response: Thanks, I will be writing more often. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 08/23/08 01:09 am Title: Las Vegas Baby
You wrote this on your phone?! No way! This was so funny and hot, but the idea really made me laugh, and how Bill woke Tom up to take a quiz about sex. :)
Author's Response: Yes, we were on our way to Las Vegas to meet Tokio Hotel and I got very bored in the car for 3 days. And we are going to get to meet them, I can't wait. But I do like the way way this story turned out. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 08/22/08 06:36 am Title: Las Vegas Baby
"But it is about sex." Bill said deperatly trying to get him to take it.
"Give it to me." Tom said moving his arm toward Bill for the quiz.
Oh that made me laugh :D
This was great xD
Author's Response: I am happy you liked it.
Date: 08/22/08 12:39 am Title: Las Vegas Baby
I love Cosmo, great little story.
Author's Response: I haven't ever really read it before. I guess now I'll have to if it gives me a good story.
