Date: 08/21/08 02:55 pm Title: WAKE UP
OMG!
Nooo...
So sad X_____x
I'm like.. numb.. it was so beautiful!
Going to my favs right away!
Author's Response: Awwww. Thank you so much. =)
Date: 08/21/08 01:13 am Title: WAKE UP
Oh wow, this had me bawling my eyes out. Maybe it's the song I was listening to, which was just bad timing (Hello by Evanescence, about someone dying) but I have a feeling it was also your writing. It was very beautiful and heart breaking. I liked it alot personally, and I read the other reviews people left , and I know what you mean by its supposed to have a sad ending, that was like one of my own stories. I think sometimes though the sad endings are the most beautiful. Basically, I enjoyed it even though it made me cry. Good job. :]
Author's Response: AWESOME!! ..Well, not awesome that I made you cry, but awesome that I was able to write something that actually had someones emotions running I guess.rnNice background music choice btw. I approve. =) "Beautiful and heartbreaking"--thats exactly what I was going for and I'm glad it came thru. Thank you so much.
Date: 08/21/08 12:49 am Title: WAKE UP
that.....was......strange.......depressing.......scary......creepy......i loved it. that was brilliant. although very cruel..... great job. i loved the way it was written.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. It was something new for me also, and if I pulled off the effect, I'm very glad. =)
Date: 08/21/08 12:30 am Title: WAKE UP
That's absolutely brillaint! Super depressing but brilliant! I'd like to point out that Shakespear was a romantic though and all, I think, of his characters ended up together in the end. Some dead together, other not. Maybe, maybe? You could write one more, happier chapter? Where Tom dies and they're together? Maybe?
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!! =) Really glad you liked it. I take it this means you understood everything in the end?rnI don't know about writing a 3rd chapter. I never intended for it to have a happy ending. But I'll think about it, just cuz you asked.. dont expect anything tho.rnThanks again Hekki.
Date: 08/21/08 12:22 am Title: FIELD OF DREAMS
I like it. I'm not sure I understand everything, like where they are, how Tom died (cold?) what the circomstances were, but for some reason, that all right.
Author's Response: I guess the second part is supposed to tie the loose ends together. Glad it wasn't a deterrent from reading further. :)
Date: 08/21/08 12:04 am Title: FIELD OF DREAMS
You caught my attention with the "necrophilia" warning, I admit. So far so good. :]
Author's Response: Thanks. That warning always gets me too; it was partly what gave me the idea.rnPart2 is up also --hope you like the rest. =)