Date: 07/03/15 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god that was one of the most gorgeous pieces of writing that I have ever read. Wow. I am truly blown away!
Date: 11/22/13 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohmygod, this is incredible! Wow I am totally speechless.
Date: 11/21/13 06:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, this is intense. And deep and emotional. Really beautiful story-telling here. I LOVE how you describe their type of love. Your characters are natural together. Really well done. :)
Date: 11/18/13 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful... Love it!
Date: 04/21/13 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is withouth a doubt one of the most "realistic" angsty stories I have ever read about the twins. Down to the very word it is art.
Date: 05/22/12 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so awesome. And very realistic too. I can totally imagine this scenario happening in RL.
Great job! :D /favorites
Date: 11/08/10 04:12 am Title: Chapter 1
This was beautiful. I like the unique way you depicted their bond.
Date: 02/26/10 06:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I think I totally understand how you painted them here. I always wondered if someone would or could put it like this.
"It’s all about affection that can only be expressed adequately through physical intimacy." Just like that, in one simple sentence. Realy really gorgeous.
Date: 11/14/09 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is excruciatingly beautiful. I'm at a loss for words.
Date: 04/27/09 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so beautiful and perfect. You have such a way with description, and the way you described every bit of this, from Bill's longing to be back with Tom, to their different love, to the sex itself, was incredible. *favs*
Date: 04/13/09 01:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I seriously love how you write girly, it's so amazing -really!
-you are my ispiration XD
Date: 01/16/09 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really good, your english is amazing and this story was cute, but w/ a sad note too it.
Date: 08/21/08 06:49 am Title: Chapter 1
This is one of the best pieces I've seen on here.
Date: 08/21/08 03:35 am Title: Chapter 1
This . . . is beautiful.
Date: 08/21/08 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing. So little dialogue and so much emotion.
I liked the concept that the twins aren't in love, aren't lovers, but their love-making is more an attempt to stay so closely bonded longer. Only they can make each other feel so much. It's sweeter and deeper, I think.
Your writing is absolutely beautiful. So many things caught my eye as poetic, but I had to go back and read this line several times:
Bill’s cock is crying tiny pearls of pleasure, the amber of his eyes is almost completely eaten up by the black of passion.
That is just plain gorgeous.
I'm so glad I read this tonight. Thank you for posting it.
Date: 08/20/08 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was beautiful.
Date: 08/20/08 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was one of the most beautiful and poetic things I've read in awhile. Everything was just so...perfect. I really loved this!
Date: 08/20/08 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude, that was intense!
Date: 08/20/08 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow!
I liked this fic a lot.
It's really well written, and the way you described the twins' bond is wonderful.
Good job!
Date: 08/20/08 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh I hope that toothache goes away and I really liked this fic good job on it.^-^