Date: 11/16/08 09:55 am Title: French; Je t'aime
Aaaawww, that's cute ^^ I love it :D I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: :3 coming from you, that's a massive compliment. Thanks for stroking my ego. LOL jk. But thanks, I'll be sure to update soon.
Date: 11/16/08 09:30 am Title: Afrikaans; Ek is lief vir jou
Just to let you know, in Afrikaans it's, Ek is lief vir jou.
Lol.
But other than that. I loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Eep! Sorry. But thanks for correcting me.
Date: 11/16/08 08:36 am Title: French; Je t'aime
Go on, go on, go on!!!!!
Could I please, please, please be one of their (common) friends? Pretty please?
And maybe I can beta for you. Not sure, 'cuz I'm not a native speaker, but I can do something. Just put in the reply if you want me to ^^
This is so great. Oh, oh, in Japanese, 'I love you' is 'Kimi o ai shiteru'. ^^ *hinthint*
Author's Response: Of course you can, email me at x.kisshim.x@gmail.com and I'll give you the info I'll need.rn A few people have offered, but I might need more than one, because I'm impatient when I'm in a posting mood. So it'd be awesome if you could help. :3rn LOL, I'll be sure to add the Japanese to the chapter title.
Date: 11/16/08 08:15 am Title: French; Je t'aime
That was so cute!
Author's Response: Thanks. :3
Date: 11/16/08 08:02 am Title: French; Je t'aime
Short doesn't matter, it was still unbelievably sweet. :) Congrats on the reviews by the way, you totally deserve them for this fic.
Totally and completely.
*hugz* ^^
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. You're so sweet. rnrn*hugz back*
Date: 11/12/08 02:35 pm Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
PLEASE CONTINUE! i love this so much ^^
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I recently contacted a new beta, but they haven't gotten back to me. :(
Date: 11/04/08 09:57 pm Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
I like how you use the phrase "Tom time." And put little details like Bill scooping up all his sister's toys from the bathroom. This story is well written, but it doesn't feel very cohesive, if that makes any sense. It doesn't seem like it has a well developed plot. What is the reason for this story? Where is it going?
Author's Response: Thanks. But the plot is there, I just haven't made it very well known yet. This story is going to be [hopefully] 100 chapters long. Though I haven't written much lately. I'll be sure to make it prominently known of the plot. Thanks for the feedback though. I was well needed, seeing as I haven't had much inspiration lately. Thanks for the kick in the butt.
Date: 10/24/08 04:17 pm Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
ppppppllllleeeeaaaaasssseeeee let me be one of their friends!!!!
Author's Response: Email me at x.kisshim.x@gmail.com
Date: 10/24/08 04:14 pm Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
YAY!!!!!!!
Continue this pleeeeeease???
Author's Response: Lol ok. :3
Date: 10/19/08 05:13 pm Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
I love!! =D
Author's Response: WOO! Thanks.
Date: 10/16/08 10:24 pm Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
great update (:
Author's Response: Thanks. :3
Date: 10/14/08 09:10 pm Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
o.o love it, you should continue o.o *coughs* Okay, me being weird :') Great chapter :D I hope you'll continue soon =D Ooooh, and I wanna get in the story :D *sents e-mail*
xx Chiii
Author's Response: Lol. I'm hoping to get the next one beta'd and up soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/14/08 10:07 am Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
Woahh, I just found this story, and I have to say I love it!
I really hope Bill & Tom get to be together properly :)
Can't wait for more,
Laurie xox
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I'm hoping so too. :3 Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 10/09/08 02:08 pm Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
Awww! This story is so cute!!
Can't wait for the next update!
*goes to email you* xD
Author's Response: Aww, thanks.
Date: 10/09/08 01:40 pm Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
Oh darling, thanks for the lovley dedication and the whole chapter was so sweet, espesh when they were kissing at the end!
Cant wait for another update!!!
Author's Response: You're welcome. :3 I'm hoping to get it up soon, but I'm moving next week. >.<
Date: 10/09/08 01:35 pm Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
I love this story, I'm happy that you updated.
I'm wondering if I want to be in the story or not...
XD
Author's Response: Hehe, just email me if you do. I can always find a place for anyone.
Date: 10/09/08 12:48 pm Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
Author's Response: Thanks. :3
Date: 10/09/08 12:35 pm Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
I love this story so much! Update soon? xx
Author's Response: Thanks. :3 I'll try! :D
Date: 10/09/08 11:42 am Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
very nice=]
Author's Response: Danke.
Date: 10/09/08 07:00 am Title: Arabic; Ana behibak (to male)
Sooo sweet. :3 It's sad Tom has to go.
I love this story. Its so cute. :)
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. :3