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Reviewer: BillxTomKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/08 01:55 am Title: Bitte, Spring Nicht

Aww that was so sad. I noticed that u called Bill Lukas just so u know.

Reviewer: Twilight-Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/08 03:22 pm Title: Bitte, Spring Nicht

Very good,I really liked it! Just 1 thing though, there is Lukas written instead of bill a couple of times in the story.

Reviewer: Tashiwa101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/08 10:43 am Title: Bitte, Spring Nicht

it was good but you kept on getting the wrong names. Apart from just calling Bill lukas, you also called Tom Bill a couple of times.

Reviewer: Tashiwa101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/08 10:43 am Title: Bitte, Spring Nicht

it was good but you kept on getting the wrong names. Apart from just calling Bill lukas, you also called Tom Bill a couple of times.

Reviewer: hanne_bolan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/07 03:17 pm Title: Bitte, Spring Nicht

A really great story, a shame, tough, that you mixed up the names a little bit. Maybe you should've done it a little more close when you changed the names.

But besides that, it was a beautiful story, and it was really sad.

Please, write more..

Reviewer: Love means to say Spring Nicht Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 02:46 pm Title: Bitte, Spring Nicht

thats so sweet and just genrally well written, if anyone who was thinking of commiting suicide would proberly think again at that. The only thing is is that you didn't change lukas to Bill, but thats all.
xoxo

Reviewer: Evenni Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/07 12:56 am Title: Bitte, Spring Nicht

"He wouldn't let Lukas slip away from him.
How could Lukas even say that?!"

Someone forgot to edit it out XD

That was a sad story though :'( Very well written.

(I freaked out a little when I saw that his original name was Lukas, because I have identical twins in a story I'm writing called Lukas and Lachlan :p)

Reviewer: BlackShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/07 07:22 am Title: Bitte, Spring Nicht

i just have to say i really liked this,,

Reviewer: Rikke Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/07 12:46 pm Title: Bitte, Spring Nicht

It was really sad, but really confusing that you hadn't changed the names everywhere, so Lukas suddenly popped up O.O
But really emotional and well written.

Reviewer: lixi05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/07 08:01 am Title: Bitte, Spring Nicht

aww! that was so sad! i really wanna cry now! love the story

Author's Response: aww don't cry! thanks for your review :)

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