Date: 05/27/09 11:22 am Title: Chapter 7
I seriously love this freaking story. It would be awesome when you have the time, to maybe write more? xx
Date: 04/29/09 03:24 am Title: Chapter 7
GASP
Well, I just read this whole story and it was pretty good. I definitely wasn't expecting that ending to this chapter. I really really wanna know what's gonna happen now!
Date: 02/26/09 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
this is very good
update soon
x
Date: 02/25/09 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
finally an update/ what did you die and just come back to life. more about baby and baby daddy please
Author's Response: Seems like it doesn't it? I'll try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for reading XD
Date: 01/03/09 09:13 am Title: Chapter 5
ok i came across this story just looking for a read. r u having WB if so so ideas to ponder over is 1. u need to bring tom back into the story (even if they just bump into each other on the street) 2. or u could u bill in the story to help bring tom back into the story. 3. u need to keep the baby (i personaly think she should keep it. i hate when people kill babies in stories. 4.maybe jump up a mouth or two 5. bring in a problem not to big butmake it have a meaning(maybe an ex that isnt over her finds out she preg and hurts her putting her in the hospital tom finds out rushes to her and he realizes how much he cares for the baby and her) i really hope i helped.
Date: 10/16/08 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yes you should update koda, and yeah we still need to write that story together and also you need to finish typing up my story, and betaing it....still love you! continue writing.
Author's Response: Whatever! Lol! Naw, I'm kidding, I'll TRY to remember writing your stories, so yeah. Sorries!
Date: 10/14/08 04:51 am Title: Chapter 5
it's great and i can't wait until Tomgets back and what happens later..please update more often!!^^,
Date: 09/30/08 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol
i don't know what i would consider my lips :/
ahah
probably kinda big?
i don't know. lol
and yer!
loser_kids_rabbit@hotmail.com
:D
x
Date: 09/28/08 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
:)
yay!!!
well let me know when you get it and maybe a picture if it isn't gangy?
i don't know if i'd suit it but W.E.!!!
:D
Author's Response: Of course of course.rnrnMy lips are big so a regular piercing probably wouldn't look right in the middle. On the side however... It might work! lol!rnrndo you have messenger or anything like that?
Date: 09/26/08 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
i love the piercing thing. i've wanted it for about 4 years but i swear college and my mum would both kick the shit outta me.
i love your writing btw. sorry :)
Author's Response: Me too! Lol I can get one next year or probably over the summer if my mom is still okay with it. Thank you =D It's so old and I think my writing has changed somewhat. I'm gunna try to update by atleast next week. *crosses fingers*
Date: 08/05/08 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
when is it coming more???? please let it be soon:)
Date: 07/22/08 02:06 am Title: Chapter 4
aw i like how the stories unfolding.
Date: 04/10/08 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
very nice. do you still need a beta reader? i've probably got as much homework as you do, but i'm willing to make time for it. let me know what i can do!
Author's Response: Actually that would be very lovely. Lol Although I haven't been writing much lately. We're supposed to be preparing for tests and whatnot and I haven't really has the time. It would be nice to have a beta for when I do decide to post something. I'd REALLY really appreciate the help. ^^
Date: 02/25/08 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
update update update plz plz plz x
Date: 01/25/08 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
IDK Is this story abou the dog?
Date: 01/24/08 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ooh! Update soon please I wanna know what happens :D
Date: 01/11/08 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
i like it well done hun