Date: 03/30/10 04:23 pm Title: You jump, I jump
The end??lol well are u going to go on?
Date: 09/14/09 03:50 pm Title: You jump, I jump
tom was a little too bipolar, but not too much. i think bill's decision wasn't too hasty, but personally i'd have let him fall and then had tom regret it forever, or jump after him...but that's just me, i'm very morbid sometimes ;) great story :)
Date: 09/21/08 03:11 am Title: You jump, I jump
I loved the emotion in this and would love to see more!
Date: 09/11/08 04:00 pm Title: You jump, I jump
You write Bill and his emotions really well. i would be interested in seeing what happened after this. nice piece. :)
Date: 09/07/08 05:54 am Title: You jump, I jump
OMG OMG please write more to this! It was sooooooo good!
i think you portrayed this bloody brilliantly
Date: 09/02/08 09:39 pm Title: You jump, I jump
Aw..so cuute.
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Date: 08/18/08 09:19 pm Title: You jump, I jump
Everything was fine up until the last paragraph. More than fine actually. It was well written (I think) and I liked the story line and how well you describe Bill's feelings. I felt like the ending was a little too impersonal or something though. Like it needed another couple of paragraphs, of them just together, and then later too, weeks, w/ everything ok.
Author's Response: thank you for your input. looking back i do realize it was a bit rushed in the end. but in all honesty it was meant to be pre-slash, so i dont think i would change it too much. thanks again for reviewing. all feedback is appreciated. ^_^
Date: 08/18/08 12:55 pm Title: You jump, I jump
awwwwwwwwww
i LOVE the ending!!! ^-^
you really do need to make a sequel!!!
Date: 08/18/08 11:40 am Title: You jump, I jump
I loved this whole thing so much. Both of their personalities were played perfectly...not over the top at all. I hope the "???" after "The End" means your considering writing a sequel? Cause that would be awesome!
Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you liked it. as for the "???" its a maybe as far as sequels go. not really sure where i would take this... thanks again for the review. ^_^
Date: 08/18/08 02:59 am Title: You jump, I jump
i loved it. and i think that everything was just perfect. but...............but...............nut.......................... a sequel would make it even more perfect.