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Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/23 02:10 am Title: [1] Bill

I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/17 03:43 am Title: Chapter 36

this is a good story!
i wish you could fins it

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/12 04:47 pm Title: [5] Mr. Shipment Man

yay Tomi :D

Reviewer: kikobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/12 08:55 pm Title: [2] Kayen

It was pretty good. Just a little bit of grammar issues, and I believe you either meant 3 months or 16 weeks.
It was relatively enjoyable though!

Reviewer: muggle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/11 03:16 am Title: [35] I Love You

Ah, god. I loved this story XD.

Reviewer: Random324 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/10 01:16 am Title: [35] I Love You

Awesome!!! I love this. And I totes agree with the whole 'hiding the twincest on my itouch' thing. If my parentals evr found out I'd get sent off to...umm....probably, hell. This is so great. I love love love it loveeeee ittt!!!

Reviewer: Janeyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/10 11:24 am Title: [35] I Love You

:D

Reviewer: Made_in_Mexico Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/28/10 12:30 pm Title: [21]

wow.

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 10:29 pm Title: [22]

Why be so mean towards the woman
If Kay didn't telel the truth or naything about her relationship with Bill to her, how is she supposed to know ??

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 09:39 pm Title: [35] I Love You

Great story! I love twilight, too, btw. and you're right, sucky place to end, but that's ok! The entire fic was awesome. ^_^

Reviewer: Sassy_Kassey Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/09 11:32 am Title: [35] I Love You

AWWWWWW..... NO MORE? I'Z SO SAD!
GOOD...NO....GREAT STORY!

Reviewer: diddlemouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/09 01:57 am Title: [6] Bitch!

ok, Im enjoying the storyline so far, but i have a few things im wondering about, is the dreadlock boy that helped him with his car last chapter, is Tom the delivery boy supposed to be the same guy? if so, wouldnt they have recognized each other?

and why would his boss expect him to pay for store stuff with his own money?

also you keep calling Bill a vocalist..does he turn into a singer later on in the story?

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 10:52 pm Title: [35] I Love You

That was an amazing story! I hated that it ended, but then, it was a great ending XD

Totally off topic, I know, but I noticed you mentioned Twilight a couple times. What team are you on?

Reviewer: phoenixZrhage Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 10:06 pm Title: [35] I Love You

I really liked this story very sweet and cool. And well written too.

Reviewer: xerikax Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/08 01:10 am Title: [35] I Love You

um yeah that was totally awesome
;DDDDD

Reviewer: Mikaiyawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/08 04:07 pm Title: [35] I Love You

guh...

talk about temptations and deliverance..

Reviewer: AdventPhantom Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/08 04:03 pm Title: [35] I Love You

I hate that I didn't get to read this sooner! It was so awesome! Now that Bill's got love, what more do u want. This was a great read! Make more awesome stories!

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/15/08 06:13 pm Title: [35] I Love You

That was HOT! & sexy!

I really loved this story, I like the build-up, how you described everything, lovely story line.
Nice work!
I added it to my favorites ;)

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/15/08 06:06 pm Title: [34]

Sexy chapter! That's all I can say :)
And it's going to be even sexier :D

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/15/08 06:03 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer

*Haha, nice one Bill :P
*It's so sweet! Tom waiting for Bill, being patient and all :) Lovely!

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