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Reviewer: Mikaiyawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/08 12:07 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer

hurm.... Kayen isn't out of the picture all the way yet is he? and maybe have Tom introduce Bill around, maybe go clubbing? I can see all sorts of options there for several directions.

Reviewer: SaraInes Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/08 11:51 am Title: [33] A Little Longer

I don't know.
Maybe Cathy should make an appearence. Like "YOU ASSHOLE, I HAD TO GO TO THE ER WITH A DILDO STUCK IN MY VAGINA!!"

Fun!!!

About Tom and Bill, hummmmm I don't know :/

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/08 11:35 am Title: [1] Bill

okay, this is annoying me! tried to get all of this with... But I try to listen to my fav. songs or read what I like. Sometimes I sit down and wait until I come up with something... you could try that... Maybe?

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/08 11:34 am Title: [33] A Little Longer

Awwwww, that was so sweet and fluffy and funny! I think I'm in love

Reviewer: VengefulSparrow Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/08 11:32 am Title: [33] A Little Longer

Now? Sex.

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/08 11:20 am Title: [1] Bill

just make up some different things and try to get back into it :) more advice
i can't give I guess ;)

Author's Response: lol. ok. thanks. :)

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/08 11:16 am Title: [33] A Little Longer

Great chapter :D Euhm...what to do...Me iz not sure. Think about how you want to end it and write a few things down, it could help :) I still hope you continue soon though xP
xx Chi ^^

Author's Response: I've no idea how i want it to end. When I wrote this I was just messing around. I never expected anyone would read it so I really had no plans for it. :P

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/08 07:05 pm Title: [32]

lmao T you proud of the research you did?

Reviewer: miss pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/08 12:14 pm Title: [32]

I writeing this review on my iPod :) and this is great but who's the chick?

Author's Response: :) Thanks. ^^ You'll have to wait for the next chappie and find out.

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/08 08:54 am Title: [32]

SNORTCHUCKLESNORT.....i love that bill is calling tomi baby, and i LOVE the fact that, that bitch is there waiting for bill HAHAHAHA

Author's Response: Lol. Cute pet names are always great. :P

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/08 12:10 am Title: [32]

yess!! more drama! i like it! :D lol wow you even put a link to the site O.O hmmm haha were you almost caught writing the story? jeez that would really suck

Author's Response: Yay. :) Yes I did. When I research, I gotta' state my source. Haha

Reviewer: zimmer_4_8_3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/08 12:08 am Title: [32]

so i made sure to check out the ohmibo because, you know, proper facts are always a must have for good writers. and i wouldn't want to have to take away your credibility. so anyways, it's uh very nice...er good facts.
so anyways i was just wondering, i think i have like 2 questions but knowing me there are probably like 8579 more. but if you're lucky itll only be 2. lol okay so first off, just checking, but that girl is the one that cheated with kayen? if so yay for her, kayen is a nasty fat hairy ball sack bastard. and then second, tom and bill havent had sex right? or did i miss something? i thought that they hadnt because bill had said he wasnt ready just yet(that time in the car) but maybe i overlooked something? anways, can't wait for an update! so do it soooonnnn!!!

Author's Response: Yes, it is that girl that was w/ Kayen. ^^ Now they haven't 'done it' yet. :P

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/08 12:04 am Title: [31]

awww >.

Author's Response: :P

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/08 11:56 pm Title: [29] Rockin' the Bus .. er .. Car

lmao

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/08 11:42 pm Title: [32]

OMG that's a burn...Keep up the great story please...

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: RyuKokoro Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/08 06:24 pm Title: [32]

Woo...this is getting good. I'm just guesing here...Um, Kayen's little piece of ass??

Author's Response: You guess right. :D

Reviewer: Mikaiyawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/08 03:11 pm Title: [32]

O.O

part squee for Bill/Tom cuteness and part uh-oh for the girl asking for him... my spidey sense is going girl ex cheated on him with really loudly...

Author's Response: wow, you have a strong spidey sense there. :P

Reviewer: queenmadness Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/08 03:00 pm Title: [32]

wtf??? is she there for... grr!
btw the chappy rocks; seriously badass :)

Author's Response: hee-hee. thanks

Reviewer: ImUrGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/08 02:57 pm Title: [32]

who's the chick? i really wanna know!!!

Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough.

Reviewer: Ascuba Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/08 01:49 pm Title: [32]

Hahaha nice research. And who's the hoe that wants to talk to Bill? The one with Kayen? >> shall I shank her ass hole with a knife?

Author's Response: :P You'll dsee. ^^ Haha, be my guest.

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