Date: 12/04/08 07:11 pm Title: [34]
You can't just stop there O_O That's not fair at all XD
This chapter is brilliant, but so are all the others ^_^
Date: 12/04/08 06:56 pm Title: [34]
Ack. more more more. that is all. XD
Date: 12/04/08 06:45 pm Title: [34]
TEAAAAAAAAAAAAASE!
Ohgod, I'm sure Tom thought he was in the middle of good dream when he woke. Hahahaha.
Date: 12/04/08 06:34 pm Title: [34]
oh gawd you horrible horrible tease!!!!!! lol..this was friggen awesome, per usual.
Date: 12/04/08 06:33 pm Title: [34]
low whistle... boy.. bet Tomi is enjoying the hell out of That view... I know I would
Date: 12/03/08 10:18 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
O.O ehh? it grows???
oh jeez..you mean authors block? oooo that sucks....*brain fries* X.X i cant think of anything....
Date: 12/03/08 08:42 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
awww kawaiii............. LET THEM HAVE REVENGE!
Date: 12/02/08 11:41 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
Sex! That's what.
Date: 12/02/08 11:39 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
damn; I get you... I'm stuck too I can't make a good guess on what should/could happen next...
hum- waiting could lead to more smut I guess ;}
Date: 12/02/08 09:37 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
i honestly couldnt tell you how to go on with the story. a good way i always got ideas when i was writing somehting was to go and read through the story or like the last half of it and see if you get any that way. oo and an idea would be for the girl to bring kayen to the store and there be a fight between all of them. just an idea (i like to see Tom fight), o and another, you could have them have sex, but just have Tom bottom instead of Bill (i have a really big thing with Tom bottoming, like i think it is possibly THE HOTTEST thing i have ever heard in my life)...loved this chapter, cant wait to read the next!!!!
Date: 12/02/08 06:28 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
Oh..My what is it your possibly stuck on..Its good don't stop there...please...
Date: 12/02/08 06:24 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
Nein! They need sex! I need them to have sex... >.>
Date: 12/02/08 05:40 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
God, have them do it already! If I were Tom I'd have got Bill to do it already ;P But, that would be rape, and rape is illegal, so I don't know, have Tom prove somehow that he will always be loyal. Like at a bar or something... Update soon!
Date: 12/02/08 05:18 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
oh god, poor tom. his penis must hate him a lot...its so lonely and unloved. but i don understand bill's hesitation. he's been ripped to shreds put back together and then torn into tinier pieces. i honestly don't really know where you could go from here. maybe have tom and bill go out on a date where they run into kayen and cathy(those hoe bag ass holes)and then i don't know. go from there. whatever you do, im excited for another update! much love,
Date: 12/02/08 03:37 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
I went to Twlight twise :) great chappy but as for what comes next I'm at a loss
Date: 12/02/08 03:25 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
hmmm, I really have no idea to help you dear I"m sorry:/.
OMG a dildo that doesn't stop growing 0_o poor woman? xD
Date: 12/02/08 02:47 pm Title: [32]
lol, just before I was gonna read this chapter I was thinking "I really don't like reading downstairs on the computer. If my mom or sis ever find out what I'm reading I'm dead!" and then I saw what you wrote xD lol. My laptop crashed down:(
lol funny chapter xD
I guess it's his EX's mother?
Date: 12/02/08 01:57 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
WHY NOT HOT SEX? D:
*izsad*
Date: 12/02/08 01:50 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
Make them have fun already, man, poor Tom's dick is going to fall off some day or another because he never uses it. Just...Oh god, I'm suffering Tom's blue balls as if it was me who didn't get any. And the poor kid is sooo damn cute and so in love...Bill should trust him and give him some fun already.
Date: 12/02/08 12:14 pm Title: [33] A Little Longer
oh bill, that little tease.
that last line was cute.
(: