Date: 08/16/08 11:22 pm Title: [2] Kayen
lmao love the title of the sex shop. Very creative T. Man this fic is so hot. Just the thought of Bill working in a sex shop drives me crazy. Love it.
Author's Response: Danke. ^^ The thought sends me packin' and over the edge too. Lol. Just had to write it. Even if Biss Mich isn't done yet I need something fun to do when I'm not all frustrated w/ writing that.
Date: 08/16/08 10:08 pm Title: [2] Kayen
fuckk........ahhhhhhhhh..plzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol. :P If I get on the computer tonite I will try and get to work on Chapter 3.
Date: 08/16/08 07:41 pm Title: [2] Kayen
I think you should wait a few chapters maybe bring him in during chapter 4 but really it's your choice so yeah. I really like this story so far.^-^
Author's Response: Yea, that's what I was thinking to do too. ^^ Thank you. ^^
Date: 08/16/08 06:21 pm Title: [2] Kayen
You've never been to a sexshop before? You should go, it's fun! I did and bought handcuffs :P Oh yeah, I got a fetish o_O'
About Tom...I don't know. To be honest, Kay is annoying but that's because I like twincest. Bill with another guy is only temporary. So I don't know if my opinion coints :S
But hey, I like how it's going so far :D
Author's Response: Nope, never been in one. Lol. I'd bee too embarassed too. Lol. I'll just stick w/ ordering online. Lol, yea, Kay won't be there for long. Just wait til he meets Tomi. *drool* Thanks for the nice comments.
Date: 08/16/08 05:03 pm Title: [2] Kayen
minor mistake but isnt 4 months 16 weeks? but i love it!
Author's Response: I was going by approx. 3 weeks a month. But yea, 16 weeks is probably more acurate. Thanks.rnGlad you like it.
Date: 08/16/08 04:43 pm Title: [2] Kayen
Just pull Tom right into the story.
Author's Response: :) Hmm .. i just might. But how, that is the question.
Date: 08/16/08 03:22 pm Title: [2] Kayen
That's getting hot!
Author's Response: Hee, hee :) yupp
Date: 08/16/08 03:19 pm Title: [2] Kayen
I't is lovely *okay I'm speachless, my mind is numb and i can't find the perfect word to describe your story I just lost it, it was so fun!*
u can bring Tom this or the next chapter anything u'll do i bet it will be perfect! *grin* ^,^ loved it
Author's Response: Awe thank you, that's so sweet. :)
Date: 08/16/08 03:17 pm Title: [1] Bill
I'll read on! I'm curious about how this story will go.
Nice chapter!
Author's Response: thank you thank you. :)
Date: 08/16/08 10:04 am Title: [1] Bill
Oh, this is interesting. I love Bill's job xD Update soon :)
Author's Response: :) danke schön. i'm writing chapter 2 now.
Date: 08/15/08 11:54 pm Title: [1] Bill
ooo bill in a sex shop, sounds approving ;D please go on
Author's Response: alrighty. :) i will.
Date: 08/15/08 10:16 pm Title: [1] Bill
Oh yeah. Tom is so going to buy something at the store. I've been to a sexshop before. I would love to work in one *dreams*
Good plot =D
Author's Response: Damn, wish I had the guts to go into one if I came across one. I'd be the girl buying the 'knobby' one. LOL :P Thanks for the review. :D *hugs*
Date: 08/15/08 08:38 pm Title: [1] Bill
Haha love the beginning makes me sooo curious. Few mistakes too actually I think just one "Their teasing him" should be They're. Not that you care though.
Author's Response: Thanks. lol. Okay, I'll fix that.
Date: 08/15/08 08:34 pm Title: [1] Bill
ooh ooh ooh, i want to know the surprise!
*favourites*
Author's Response: ;) you'll see. :P
Date: 08/15/08 08:05 pm Title: [1] Bill
Woop Woop I am the first reviewer (Y)
I like this story it seems really original. Which is a key factor to an amazing story.
The girl that walked in teh shop made me laugh - not that one the bumpy one haha. I have a random sense of humour and i do apologise.
LoveIt
Broken-Glass
xx
Author's Response: Yupp. First reviewer. My favorite. :) hee hee. Thanks for the sweet review. Lol. I'd be nervous too. That's why I'd do my sex toys shopping online. Lol. I prefer the bumpy ones too. More fun *wink,wink*