Date: 08/22/08 06:43 pm Title: [5] Mr. Shipment Man
hehe "Hey gorgeous." It was a good chapter lol Cant wait to read more. Have fun in LA. Maybe it'll help inspire you?
Author's Response: :) Thank you. Since I thankfully don't have to leave to see my Aunt until Monday I think I might be able to get one more chapter posted. Hm .. maybe two. I've been writing these pretty easily. For Biss Mich it takes me like a few days to write one chapter. This one it generally only takes me the day.
Date: 08/22/08 05:43 pm Title: [5] Mr. Shipment Man
I really like this story and the fact you update so fast! =] Thank you! Oh and sorry you feel so sad =[ `
Author's Response: :) thanks sweetie. you are very welcome. I won't be updating for a week while I'm away. ^^ It's okay .... I'll get over it. I hope. :/
Date: 08/22/08 05:42 pm Title: [5] Mr. Shipment Man
Something tells me that guy is Tom :)
Author's Response: You think so? Hmm ... you might be right.
Date: 08/21/08 05:18 pm Title: [4] Tom
Tadaaa! And there's Tom :D
Nice chappy !
Author's Response: Yupp yupp. Enter the sex machine. :) ^^ Thanks.
Date: 08/21/08 08:35 am Title: [4] Tom
hehe...lol...i really shouldnt read fanfics while watching TH's dvd....lol
loved it as usual...more please!!
Author's Response: lol ya, get's distracting. ^^ Thanks. I hopefully will be blessed with a writing streak before I leave. :)
Date: 08/21/08 07:15 am Title: [1] Bill
yeah, i was wondering about that - anyway; i love the story. its got an original setting (which i miss in others!) that i enjoy immensely!
Author's Response: Awe, realli?? Awww ... Thank you so much. ^^
Date: 08/21/08 04:16 am Title: [4] Tom
does bill sing in a band as well as working in the sex shop?
Author's Response: He wants to be a singer. But he's not in a band, and if you haven guessed aready - Tom and Bill dont know eachother. I didn't get around to explaining the 'vocalist' part in this chapter. I'll try in 5. ^^ :)
Date: 08/20/08 09:38 pm Title: [4] Tom
awwwwwwwwwww. go tomi boy...... and yes, bill is georgues. : )
Author's Response: :) Indeed.
Date: 08/20/08 09:00 pm Title: [4] Tom
Weird. I'm pretty sure I had already reviewed this.
Author's Response: You probably did, but I accidentally deleted it so I wouldn't have gotten it. :/ I'm a dummy sometimes.
Date: 08/20/08 07:16 pm Title: [3] Bethain
4 please ;D
Author's Response: posted! :)
Date: 08/20/08 07:06 pm Title: [2] Kayen
so far it's good bt I know when tomget in the picture it will be deadly good ;D
Author's Response: hell ya. i mean ... its Tom. he makes everything good.
Date: 08/20/08 05:30 pm Title: [3] Bethain
AH yes you called me Taz! lol usually you call me Tayz. Anyways no problem man. Anything for you. :D
Author's Response: lol, yupp. :) thanks
Date: 08/19/08 09:16 pm Title: [3] Bethain
First off i have to say great story, second bill's ex girlfriend is a bi**h for doing that to him. I think tom should enter in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. ^^ Yea she is a bitch. A big, fat-arsch, BITCH!! Tomi's coming. :D
Date: 08/18/08 07:36 pm Title: [3] Bethain
This is so sad :( Poor Bill!
This is so well-written!
Nice chapter!
Author's Response: Yea. Our poor little baby. *hugs Bill* ^^ Thank you. :D
Date: 08/18/08 08:23 am Title: [3] Bethain
It's kinda cute in a way. :)
Just one thing though, you refer to Bill as a vocalist, which is kinda wierd, because he isn't one in this story, is he?
And to me, it doesn't matter when Tom enters, he should enter when you think he should. ;)
Author's Response: thank u, i think. :/ Yes, Bill is a vocalist. More of a solo thing in this I guess. ^^ I'll explain more in the next chapter.
Date: 08/18/08 03:25 am Title: [3] Bethain
I think tom should enter in chapter 5.
I'm not sure why, really.
But i feel picking 5.
Update again soon.
Please. :]
Author's Response: Mkay; ^^ I am going to write tonight.
Date: 08/17/08 11:58 pm Title: [3] Bethain
Aw this chapter was sweet, well the end part. My fave line is the last one. Great way to end a chapter T. Um I dont know when Tom should appear but I'm looking forward to when he does! You're coming right a long with this idea, you seem to update everday. Thats good!
Author's Response: :) Danke schön! :) Hopefully I can hold off bringing him in until five, but maybe I might towards the end of four.
Date: 08/17/08 06:31 pm Title: [3] Bethain
awww poor bill!!! more please!!!!
Author's Response: yea, poor baby.
Date: 08/17/08 04:09 pm Title: [3] Bethain
As soon as possible. So...4!
Bill is so hurt, isn't he? Oh dear.
He's not a singer in this fic, right? Maybe you shouldn't write "vocalist's arms" cause, he works at a sexshop, not a record company xD
Author's Response: Okay. :) Yea Bethain hurt him really bad. Well he does sing in this fic, but it's more of a solo thing and he hasn't really made it big yet. I haven't get gone into it - that he wants to be a singer, but I will be.
Date: 08/17/08 02:04 pm Title: [2] Kayen
You're really good at writing.
Hm... You can introduce Tom soon, but not to soon... ;)
Author's Response: Aww. Thank you. ^^ I might intro him in the 4th as someone has suggested already. Not sure though. We'll see.