Date: 09/24/08 10:59 pm Title: [11] Taken
Aw I loved it! haha but one thing....do you mean to keep putting things like 'the vocalistsinger' or 'Bill put on a sad face, like he would a fake smile for the paparazzi' I dunno it jusy gets confusing sometimes.
Thank you for updating!
Author's Response: Yes I mean to put vocalist/singer and such. You'll see when I get to it. He is a singer in this, just not famous. The paparazzi thing is just a metaphor I suppose.
Date: 09/24/08 09:54 pm Title: [11] Taken
Hee Hee, I love this story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, sweet-heart. :3
Date: 09/24/08 06:55 pm Title: [1] Bill
lol
the girl was so funny^^
Author's Response: lol. :) Thanx.
Date: 09/24/08 06:51 pm Title: [10] Apologies
that wasnt shitty!!!
more please!...
Author's Response: Thank You ^^ It's coming.
Date: 09/23/08 10:55 pm Title: [10] Apologies
lmao well that was an easy apology.
Author's Response: Yupp. :D
Date: 09/23/08 05:43 pm Title: [10] Apologies
*doesnt like OMC*
Author's Response: Don't worry, things are going to get better. :P
Date: 09/23/08 05:41 pm Title: [10] Apologies
Aw I was hoping he'd apologize to Tom.....or somethin'.
But thats okay! even if it was short it wasnt shitty! =]
Author's Response: Poor Tomi. ^^ thank you
Date: 09/23/08 03:45 pm Title: [10] Apologies
Bill and Kayen's relationship seems so boring. Ya know, no fire :/
Author's Response: I know eh. But Tom and Bill have fire *wink,wink. nudge,nudge*
Date: 09/22/08 11:36 pm Title: [10] Apologies
mehhh I wish he would have ran away with Tom
Author's Response: Me too, me too. :P
Date: 09/22/08 11:05 pm Title: [1] Bill
Good chapter, i can't wait to read more keep up the great work.
Author's Response: thanks so much bumpkin. :D
Date: 09/22/08 10:30 pm Title: [10] Apologies
That was cute. I liked how simple the apology was between Kayen and Bill, but Tom is still so pissed :D Update soon!
Author's Response: Danke. :) I started the next chapter, if I can stop writing so badly I'll finish it and update it soon.
Date: 09/21/08 12:39 am Title: [9] Just Walk Away
Can't wait for more, hurry and update please!
Author's Response: Yup, yup.
Date: 09/21/08 12:38 am Title: [8]
Good for you Bill, resist temptation LOL! I think Bill looks sexy always, so...
Author's Response: Dang Skippy!! *drool*
Date: 09/21/08 12:17 am Title: [7]
Oh no, Bill knows what it's like to be cheated on, he better break up with Kayan before he even thinks about going at it with Tom. Good chapter!
Author's Response: indeedy he does.
Date: 09/20/08 11:17 pm Title: [6] Bitch!
Wow T, you actually reserched? You are so far into the darkside you don't even remember what the gutter looks like, let alone where normal people live LOL! Great chapter, I just hope that Kayen isn't too over possesive.
Author's Response: Yes, I researched. It's the only research I have ever done tha I can say I thoroughly enjoyed. :P
Date: 09/20/08 10:36 pm Title: [5] Mr. Shipment Man
Oh man! That is the funniest thing ever :D
Date: 09/20/08 08:34 pm Title: [4] Tom
I love it!
Ahh, Tom's dreads. Words can not describe how freaking sexy they are LOL
Author's Response: *drool* Mmm .. Hellz yea!!
Date: 09/20/08 07:53 pm Title: [3] Bethain
Wow, so far, it's really good! I like this chapter the best, it shows a deeper... thingy LOL I don't know how to explain it, but definately good.
Date: 09/20/08 02:59 pm Title: [9] Just Walk Away
Was that Tom???
Author's Response: What do you think? :P ^^ lol
Date: 09/19/08 07:25 pm Title: [9] Just Walk Away
Ah man how could Kayen be so rude! Does he have some trust issues with Bill or just thought that Tom would actually try to do something with Bill? Anyway love how Tom's character got really sensitive when shot down.
Author's Response: Yea that was pretty mean of Kayen to do that. He should trust Bill and just leave him be. He thought Tom would try something. Well .. and who could blame him, I mean .. just LOOK at Bill. - GORGEOUS!! Yes, very sweet of Tom to offer Bill a ride home even after that.