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Reviewer: VampSenn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/08 06:34 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

*kills OMC*

Author's Response: *brings him back to life and kills him again*

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/08 12:51 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

Definately snails pace but its good because Bill's still in a relationship which he should definately end. Come on how could he miss all those signs of Kayen cheating at the restraurant? So obvious.

Author's Response: I guess Bill just doesn't want to believe it's true so he didn't quite see the signs as clearly as someone else would have. *shrugs* He'll find out soon enough.

Reviewer: zombie_maggot Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/08 12:46 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

i loved it.
haha, im glad you put the note in at the start, i had no idea you could do that...thank you (i feel silly).

oooh...that Kayen is really getting on my nerves...although i do like the name.

Author's Response: lol. ^^ I think Kayen is getting on everyone's nerves.

Reviewer: abcd1234 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/08 02:23 am Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

LOL IT IS! but i like it that way, its more realistic, i mean people dont fall in love in one day! some of the fics are like that..I cant stand it! :) yours is great!

Author's Response: Wow. Uhm.. Thank you. Thank you so much. Yea, it annoys me in some fics (oneshots don't count) just dive immediately into the 'head-over-heels' thing. I figured it would be better if I try slower. :) I'm so happy with this fic. Makes me giddy to get new reviews and to see it doing so well. Now the question really is: Do you like my writing? OR The idea of Bill in a sex shop was a big part in drawing you to read? LOL. Thanks for your review. Gunna' work on 13 right now actually. :D *hugs*

Reviewer: Mikaiyawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 08:45 pm Title: [1] Bill

In my opinion yeah... they'll be friends when Bill Needs one. then they can do other fun stuff...

Author's Response: *drool* Heh,heh, ya baby. :P Friends with Benefits.

Reviewer: theworldfascinatesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 08:23 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

But sometimes isnt snails pace good.. its just makes a good lead up lol

Author's Response: Hmm ... yea you're right, now that I think about it ... :)

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 07:47 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

Being a rather androgynous boy, there had been many a time his entrance in a public washroom had created an embarrassing situation.

xD funny i was discussing this same situation with my lil sister xD lol!

lovely ending continue when you can^^

Author's Response: Haha lol. I think that did happen to him once before. I wish I had the article or the interview or something. I bet the person who stopped him felt really foolish afterwards. Hmm .. I wonder how he proved his 'manliness' :P *dirty thoughts* ^^ Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: xxcore Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 07:32 pm Title: [1] Bill

haha its okay! =]

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 06:39 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

is kayen cheeting on bill?!?!?!?! Pleze let them break up!!!

Author's Response: Looks that way doesn't it. :( Poor Billa.

Reviewer: Mariesen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 04:59 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

Loved it so much! it's absolutely brilliant ^_^

Author's Response: Hee-Hee. Thank you.

Reviewer: MinxyKatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 02:46 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

i luv hw u ask dat qeustion in ur end note...yet it is ur story

Author's Response: lol. hee-hee. well maybe I dont even know the answer either. lol. what can I say, I like asking the readers questions. so if my writing doesn't get them, then maybe I can catch their eye with my wittyness. haha

Reviewer: Mikaiyawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 02:42 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

it may be a snails pace, but they are becoming friends before doing anything else... so it's fairly realistic to read.

Author's Response: ok. so I'm doing good at the pace i am going now?

Reviewer: xxcore Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 02:19 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

lol its not necessarily moving too slow, but its not moving that fast either. but I'm still reading cause I love this story so far ! =]

Author's Response: ok good. just thought I'd ask. Phew

Reviewer: Kisara Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 01:36 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

OMG i can't believe Kayen cheated on bill especially on his birthday, well that is what it seems like to me. Great stuff i get really happy when you update.

Author's Response: Hmm ... things will get better. I promise you that. Don't kill me *cringes* ^^ Thank you hunni. I plan on at least starting 13 tonight. If I can get things moving from there then I might even manage to finish it.

Reviewer: bloomsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 01:30 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

KAYEN CHEATED ON BILL?!?!?!?!?! I hate you... :P

Really good, but yeah, it would be nicer if Tom and Bill would like, do something. Anything. Well, one specific thing, but yeah, anything will work LOL! Update soon please!

Author's Response: Well that is what it seems like isn't it. I'll explain better as the fic continues - if you don't hate me too much to keep reading. ^^ Well nothing is certain yet, you never know, Kayen could be "sick" ;p

Reviewer: Pandora Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 12:43 pm Title: [12] A Walk In The Park

i read your fic :D

but most of the time i'm alurker xD sorry about that, but sometimes i just don't know what to say so i prefer to be silent instead of saying something stupid or meaningless  X)

can't wait for the next chapter :D

oh, and by the way... i hate kayen :3



Author's Response: Heyy. ;) well I'm glad you reviewed this time. I love getting a new review. Its exciting. Remember, meaningless is better than nothing. Thanks for the review. ^^ lol I dont like Kayen either.

Reviewer: Raine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/08 07:43 pm Title: [11] Taken

*squeaks*

YAY!

You should have seen my face when i saw you'd updated!! XP

oh, and i'm still greedy for more. MORE!!! *spazzes*

This story is a wonderful romantic comedy! I will wait with my penguin army on call unitl you update again!

Oh, and please feel better! Being sick is no fun! *offers a huge bowl of chicken soup*

Author's Response: Perhaps I should have seen your face. :D I updated 12 just now. I think it might be one of my favorites that I have written. I am soo happy with your comment and that you like it so much. ^^ Thanks for the `get well`wishes too. The soup was delicious.

Reviewer: bloomsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/08 07:20 pm Title: [11] Taken

Sweet chapter. And I pointed out his over-bite to you in the library LOL! Can't wait for the next chapter.

And Bill better not cheat on Kayen, no matter how 'attached' he can be :P

Author's Response: lol. yes you did. it gave me something to put in there. i was seriously for the most part just pulling scheisse out of the air. :P ^^ Well ... You`ll have to read on to see if he does or not.

Reviewer: Aaliyah_Babygurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/08 05:23 am Title: [11] Taken

Kayen should lieave Bill the fuck alone... Tomi will take care of him awww..

Author's Response: Yes, I suppose he should, shouldn't he. ^^ We'll see what happens.

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/08 11:03 pm Title: [11] Taken

:)

Author's Response: XD

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