Date: 10/04/08 05:46 pm Title: [14]
Great story :D I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: :) Thank you, thank you. ^^
Date: 10/04/08 04:43 pm Title: [14]
I'm making you a banner. Just cause I love you THAT MUCH lol
Author's Response: Awwwwe. :) Realli? Thank you so much.
Date: 10/04/08 01:35 am Title: [14]
It's really good, babe. I'm rather excited for a new update soon, I hope?
The only thing I wish is that you explained a little more on what Kayen is doing and whatnot. I get the jist of it, but still.
I love it, a lot. ♥ Great job!
Author's Response: Thank You.
Date: 10/03/08 02:17 pm Title: [14]
Now, that's better. I'm soo happy that the relationship between Bill and Kayen is starting to have big cracks. I believe Kayen cheated on him when they were at the restaurant, and Tom seems so much nicer ;D
COOKIES FOR YOU :D
Author's Response: YAY COOKIES!! :3 Thank You
Date: 10/02/08 08:56 pm Title: [14]
lol Love Bill's 'new' attitude. I think he should just up and leave Kayen now. Or is he looking for a good excuse/time to do it?
Date: 10/02/08 07:08 pm Title: [14]
Oh damn, are things about to happen? ;)
I loved it when Bill told Kayen he was lying, just like "Yeah? Bullshit!" LOL!
Good chapter, can't wait for more!
Date: 10/02/08 06:12 pm Title: [14]
He couldn't. Bill has a way to get what he wants :P
Date: 10/02/08 04:47 pm Title: [14]
UH, I got completely lost with this one. One second Bill's with Kayen, next second he's talking to Tom. Care to explain?
Author's Response: Oops. I guess the space between the scenes didn't show up. Thanks for pointing that out. I'll fix it.
Date: 10/01/08 03:20 pm Title: [5] Mr. Shipment Man
:P 2 thumbs up!!
Date: 10/01/08 03:39 am Title: [13] He's Talented
*steals Lorena's Beaty Stick O' Evil*
*beats Kayen*
Date: 09/30/08 09:20 pm Title: [1] Bill
if I made cookies I'd probably burn them, but if we hold hands we can get through this. =]
Author's Response: :) Thank you muchly hunn. *holds hand* I hope to get through this.
Date: 09/30/08 08:41 pm Title: [13] He's Talented
Its good, its good. I'm really wanting Kayen and Bill's relationship to end now lol but if you do that then the story might seemed rushed and it'll screw everything up.
Author's Response: Lol. Everyone does. ^^ It'll end, when it ends.
Date: 09/30/08 08:40 pm Title: [13] He's Talented
I'll make cookies if you need them! Just ask! =( Feel better!!
Author's Response: C-cc-cookies? Really? Yes please.
Date: 09/30/08 07:26 am Title: [13] He's Talented
HeeHee though technically, there not goona be 'friends' for long right??!!! *kicks Kay* I HATE cheaters!!!
Author's Response: Technically 'no' lol. It will gradually move from friends, to friends w/ benefits, to LOVERS, BABY!!
Date: 09/30/08 07:08 am Title: [13] He's Talented
Yeah, they're friends like I'm the Queen of England :P They should totally go at it, all bets are off now that Kayen has cheated on Bill.
Good chapter, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Haha. You're the Queen of England? When did that happen. :P Yup, all bets are off. ^^ Thanks.
Date: 09/30/08 06:54 am Title: [13] He's Talented
you need to stop friendship and make them lovers...
Author's Response: In good time. :P It's coming, I promise. ^^ Thanks for the review.
Date: 09/30/08 04:42 am Title: [13] He's Talented
I'm sorry tht youi feel sad. Get better! Think of NAKED BILL!!! I always get better after that!
Their relationship is really slow oO
Author's Response: Hmm .. Naked Bill huh? Interesting concept. *salivates* *dies* O_O
Date: 09/30/08 03:49 am Title: [13] He's Talented
aww Tom's so sweet^^
i just loved his thought
"mommy liked it" :D
so adorable!
Author's Response: He is isn't he. He should show that side more often. ^^ Thanks for your review.
Date: 09/30/08 02:34 am Title: [13] He's Talented
that was so sweet. i love how thieir relationship is developing.
im sorry you feel so depressed, but hopefully youll smile when you see how many people love your writing and imagination through their reviews :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. XD
Date: 09/30/08 01:08 am Title: [13] He's Talented
Yes I like it, the Tom/Bill interactions were very sweet... your OMC is starting to give me the willies though. Hope you start feeling a bit better in the morning.
Author's Response: Danke, danke. :) Yea, I've been told that alot, no one is liking Mr. OMC. ^^ Thank you hunn, I am hoping to feel better soon, but it won't be this morning, especially with school within the next hour.