Date: 11/11/08 03:42 pm Title: [21]
I don't know, but Kayen should definatly throw the first punch. Maybe at Bill and then Tom stops it? That could be how it starts... Anyways, I liked this chapter, especially the image of Tom *drool* *convulses* *goes into sexy-overload coma* LOL!
Author's Response: Yea, that's what I was thinkin'. Tom will stop him before he hits Bill. ^^ Lol, it was so warm outside, so of course Tom would be shirtless.
Date: 11/11/08 03:09 pm Title: [21]
great chap again! x3
Author's Response: Thanks!! :)
Date: 11/11/08 02:41 pm Title: [21]
yay! a fight, im so excited. i really fucking hate kayen, he pisses the shit out of me. and i really hope that tom beats the shit out of him. i think maybe it should start in the two's bedroom. like kayen isnt home yet and bill and tom are upstairs trying to pack everything. and then it all begins. yay whatever you do though, im super excited and i really hope you update soon! i'll love you even more if you do!
Author's Response: kayen is a bastard, isn't he. :P things are going to get rough between him and Tom.
Date: 11/11/08 02:41 pm Title: [21]
cant wait for the fight!! i honestly cant think of a way to say that it starts sorry...-) cant wait for the next chapter!! loved this one
Author's Response: lol. i'll try and get writing soon. :) thnx
Date: 11/11/08 02:00 pm Title: [21]
I can see it starting with tom accusing Kayen of not valuing Bill and Kayen calling Tom a home wrecker..
Author's Response: Good, good, Thanks. ^^ Im getting lots of ideas.
Date: 11/11/08 01:58 pm Title: [21]
Hihi, Great chapter :D I was right 'bout the hickey ^^ lolz xD Tom acts normal, Kayen freaks out xP Or better...*grin*...Tom and Bill enter the house...kissing/making out :) Me be very nasty *frolices to the twin's room* I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Yes, yes, you were right. :) Mmmm. Make-out sessions are always good. :P thanks.
Date: 11/11/08 01:49 pm Title: [21]
Sexy, shirtless Tom :P
I'm curious about the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yumm Yumm, shirtless Tomi. :3 ^^ Thnx for the review.
Date: 11/11/08 01:38 pm Title: [21]
Je-sus, you update fastxD I've enjoyed this chappie, my cat enjoyed this chappie (so much so that he tried to make it last longer by sitting on the keyboard) Great job. Keep it up
Author's Response: Well normally I don't write fast, but surprisingly enough I managed to write this whole thing this morning. Normally I'm an über SLOW writer. Glad you liked it. :) And your kitty too. :P
Date: 11/11/08 01:04 pm Title: [21]
So, Kayen is sleeping in Bill's bed when Tom and Bill come in to get Bill's belongings. Then Kayen starts to beg Bill to take him back and that's when Tom's is getting angry because he is afraid Bill is gonna go back to him. Kayen tells Tom to fuck off and then Tom hits him in the face and starts screaming his hand hurts.
So much for my imagination x'D
Update soon again
Author's Response: Hmmm. That could work. I'll Definitly think about combining that into it somehow.
Date: 11/11/08 12:36 pm Title: [1] Bill
Oh, sorry, forgot to say that i voted for this!!!! It deserves it!
Date: 11/11/08 12:30 pm Title: [21]
Yay!!! I'm so glad that this story is here! I like it!
Author's Response: Awwe. Thnk you. :D
Date: 11/11/08 12:26 pm Title: [21]
Gawd I can't wait for the fight *_*
Author's Response: Hee-Hee. It's Gunna' be good. :P
Date: 11/11/08 09:06 am Title: [20]
I just had to vote right away ;P
I really love this fic, and it's finally getting more Bill-Tom-action xD
*hearts*
Author's Response: Thanks, and thanks for voting too. :)
Date: 11/11/08 08:52 am Title: [20]
Great chapter!! I love it :D Bill's gonna get a nice hickey xD lolz xD I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Yuppers, he is. ^^ thnx for the review.
Date: 11/11/08 04:37 am Title: [20]
wow, this chapter *.* love it
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 11/10/08 10:45 pm Title: [20]
Yummy.
Author's Response: :)
Date: 11/10/08 09:27 pm Title: [20]
freaking gosh!! such a tease!! DAMN it Lol!!! ^.~
Author's Response: lol. ^^ don't worry, they'll get down and dirty soon enough. :) I've got an idea for that scene and I'm quite looking forward to writing it.
Date: 11/10/08 06:31 pm Title: [20]
d:)LOVE!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: :) Yay! ^^ Thanks
Date: 11/10/08 05:30 pm Title: [20]
Ah! I Like it. :)
Great Update!
that butthead! How could he cheat on Bill?
Sorry it took me forever to read this story! It got lost in all my favorites. Dx
So I guess Tom knows Bill is single right?
more soon right?
Author's Response: Thank youzz ^^ Lol, it's ok. I get lost in my fave sometimes too. Now I have all updates emailed to me, because otherwise I wouldn't notice if my favorite stories were updated.
Date: 11/10/08 05:18 pm Title: [20]
Dang T that was hot.
Author's Response: Thank you. :D