Date: 11/14/08 08:23 am Title: [22]
Oh Mein GOTT!!! That was sooooo fantastic for a chapter and I'm not just saying that because... well something.. This one was a very likable chappie!!!
Author's Response: awww .. thank you. i wasn't too found of that. ^^ thnx for this, it made me smile.
Date: 11/13/08 04:48 pm Title: [22]
*Gasp*!!!
That ass had two phones??? xO
I'll beat him myself!
htsuotrabyrhtiuh!!! Dx
Great Update!
More Soon? :3
Author's Response: He's such an asshole. ^^ thnx
Date: 11/13/08 09:00 am Title: [22]
So, they did it in Bills bed and Kayen left his phone? That sonofabitch! :P I just really don't like Kayen, why would you hurt sweet little Bill? :D
Author's Response: *hits Kay*
Date: 11/13/08 06:44 am Title: [22]
I like the update :)
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 11/13/08 05:27 am Title: [22]
Hahaha, do they have the same phone or something?
That's weird
Im curious about what's gonna happen next
xx
Author's Response: yes they do, and bill hardly uses his so I guess he didn't notice til now. ^^ so am i .:s
Date: 11/13/08 04:18 am Title: [22]
why do you hate the chap so much? I think it's great :D x3
Author's Response: its badly written. ^^thnx
Date: 11/13/08 03:10 am Title: [22]
Well, now that's out of the way... why don't Tomi and Billa have wild and hot sex? =D
Author's Response: omg, i'm itching for hat to happen too. it will, soon enuff. :P
Date: 11/13/08 01:59 am Title: [22]
omg, so goood, more please!
Author's Response: i'll try .:D
Date: 11/12/08 11:54 pm Title: [22]
lol.. you updated nontheless. It was good, really. Can't wait until the next (though you always seems to update while im studying *huffs* lol) Fantalinsk
Author's Response: thanks for reading. :) sorry for my bad timing
Date: 11/12/08 11:16 pm Title: [22]
Dude, I'd be pissed if someone took my phone.
Author's Response: i would if i had one
Date: 11/12/08 10:24 pm Title: [22]
it was wonderful though!!!! a bit confusing, but still awsome! update soon!!!
Author's Response: yea, i even confuse myself sometimes. ^^
Date: 11/12/08 10:10 pm Title: [22]
O.O oh my...
Author's Response: :)
Date: 11/12/08 09:44 pm Title: [22]
hahahahahaha, aww i love bill. he's so cute i just want to hug him. and once again fuck kayen, he is the definition of douche bag. i hope someone shoves a huge elephant...no whale dick up his nasty ugly retarded ass. though i am grateful to that ass, as now there is room for bill and tom to develop. and btw, this isnt a bad chapter though it would have been awesome to have the fight scene today this is definitely a good transition to that and im like 893986748784979 times more pumped for it to happen now. so update soon!!!
Author's Response: haha, whale dick. lmao. this review made my day. ^^ thank you soo much.
Date: 11/12/08 09:16 pm Title: [22]
xD lol bill's cursing on the phone ^^
lol @ the boxer part, hehehe
Author's Response: lmao. :P :)
Date: 11/12/08 09:07 pm Title: [22]
pffftt. Kay is an asshole.. player!!
I hope HE rots in hell. ;)
but aside from that I looooveee this chappy even if your not satisfyed with it
Author's Response: yes he is!! ^^ thnx
Date: 11/12/08 12:22 pm Title: [21]
Aw.
Author's Response: glad you think so , cause the next chapter is scheisse!
Date: 11/12/08 10:01 am Title: [21]
i would love to see the rest of the story
i cant wait
xD
Author's Response: coming up. The next chapter is really bad though. I just posted it now. (I'm still in school though so shhhh. :P)
Date: 11/11/08 10:46 pm Title: [21]
d:)
Author's Response: :D
Date: 11/11/08 05:06 pm Title: [21]
aww that's so sweet of Bill asking Tom to go with him^^
hmm, i dunno, be creative? You'll figure something out ne?
*here are some cookies :D*
Author's Response: Woot - Cookies!!!! *shoves them in face* Yummi
Date: 11/11/08 03:58 pm Title: [21]
Okay well I think Kayen should be the one to throw the first punch at Tom and Tom stay mellow about it but then Kayen might get mad at Bill and thats when Tom looses it and defends both Bill and himself. lmao thats soo not going to happen but hey whatever. This chap was good and loved the inquiry about the PB&J lol I just had banana in my cheerious. Might sound gross to you but damn does it taste good.
Author's Response: Ok. Thank-You ^^ I liked writing that part. I guess I was trying to fill space, that's why I wrote about PB&J lol. :P