Date: 11/16/08 01:44 pm Title: [24]
Haha nice T.
Author's Response: :P yay 300 reviews. :D lol thnx
Date: 11/16/08 01:38 pm Title: [24]
MUAHAHAHA! LOVED IT! >:3 Bitch deserved that! Okay, I have so many images of what could happen, like Kayen could get up and fight, and him and Tom totally duke it out. Or he could try to fight and fail miserably. OR-now this one is for laughs-have Kayen pass out from that hit and perhaps have Tom and/or Bill dress him up and drag and what not just to embarress him more. >:3 They could dress him up like a Drag Queen! :D But, seriously, what an ass! I can't believe he hurt Bill like that! That fucker! ya know what, I hope he gets like an STD from that chick, that would teach him to cheat of poor Bill! ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter, whatever ideas you decide to go with, I know it's going to be awesome!! ^^v
Author's Response: haha. thanks for those interesting ideas. ^^ :P it'd be funny if he got an STD.
Date: 11/16/08 12:57 pm Title: [24]
Go Tom!
but I think they need to get Bill out of there, maybe some snuggly smut at Tom's place?
Author's Response: woooot. tom tom tom tom . *continues chanting* ^^ smut sounds good. :)
Date: 11/15/08 07:10 pm Title: [23]
nah- it's just someone else on the other side right?!? not Kay... eeekk *hopefully
I love this story
Author's Response: hee-hee. you'll see :P
Date: 11/15/08 12:41 am Title: [23]
i get so excited when this story is updated! and i bet you it's Kayen on the other side, the only other person i can think of would be Bill's Boss. but anyway, i loved this chapter!
Author's Response: aww, thank you. :) you'll probably b right with that bet. haha
Date: 11/14/08 09:58 pm Title: [23]
YAY! FIGHT!
Author's Response: WOOT!! :)
Date: 11/14/08 09:26 pm Title: [23]
Ah!
Is it Kayen??? xO
Ah I'll kill'em!!!
Great Update!
More soon? :3
Author's Response: Well ... who else could it possibly be. Haha ^^ Looks like Kayen won't just get a beating from Tomi - Cause every one of us here wants a piece of the action to.
Date: 11/14/08 06:27 pm Title: [23]
Dum, Dum DUMMMMMMMM
*grins madly*
I can't wait to see the fists flying around :D
Author's Response: :P :) and so it'll come.
Date: 11/14/08 05:57 pm Title: [23]
O__________O
FIGHTFITGHTFIGHT!
Author's Response: and so they will. :)
Date: 11/14/08 05:27 pm Title: [23]
dude omfg !!
cliff hangers suck soooo much! D:
more more more more! pleaseeeeee:)
p.s. i voted for this story too! =]
Author's Response: hee-hee. I know, I know, I'm the devil. ^^ Thanks for the review, && thank you soo much for your vote.
Date: 11/14/08 04:01 pm Title: [23]
I think that I love this fic. Problem is that I don't love getting left in suspense like this. Anyway, freaking adorable. Nice work.
Author's Response: hee, thank you soo much. ^^ haha, i hate that too, and hate i do it all the time when i am writing. Ooopsies. lol. thanks for the review.
Date: 11/14/08 03:58 pm Title: [23]
Oh I voted already, trust me babe :D
This is awesome, but I hate yo for the cliffy! Update soon, and maybe put the fight into the next chapter... Just saying LOL!
Author's Response: danke. :) ^^ hee-hee, me likees cliffys.
Date: 11/14/08 03:52 pm Title: [23]
O_O It's him. Tom's gonna kick his butt and it'll be awesome.
Author's Response: Hellz ya!! :)
Date: 11/14/08 02:44 pm Title: [23]
Great chapter O_O Is Kayen back? Are you finaly writing the fightscene? *hits you for inspiration* Lolz xD *you okay though?* ;-) I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Yupp. Finally writing the fight scene. :) It'll be in the next chappie.
Date: 11/14/08 02:36 pm Title: [23]
fuck you. *body slams* hahahah just kidding again i could be really mad here but im actually not. i really liked this chapter and now im even more pumped than before about the fight. just because i can almost taste it. it's right there and im super excited. i cannot wait for the next update. with the fight in it and all. lol btw i love bill when he's vulnerable he's so cute.
Author's Response: Oww. That hurt. But thanks, I needed that. ^^ I guarantee you there will be a fight in th next one. I know I've said that before, but I mean it this time. :P Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/14/08 01:46 pm Title: [23]
great chappie once again!!! x3
Author's Response: thank you so much. :D
Date: 11/14/08 01:40 pm Title: [23]
Ogoddd, that's not good
WRITE MORE NOW!
I'm seriously addicted to this story
Author's Response: lol. i should write more. i wrote all this during my spare so it proves i have the ability if i set my mind to it. i might try again to write another chapter tonight.
Date: 11/14/08 01:34 pm Title: [23]
oh god.... Damdamdamdaaaaaaaaaaaa! Oh oh....
Author's Response: ooo oo oo ooo i hope that's a good thing. haha lol
Date: 11/14/08 01:30 pm Title: [23]
eek... oh boy trouble...
Author's Response: uh oh passghettiozzz
Date: 11/14/08 01:19 pm Title: [22]
Love it :D
xx Chi (shortest review ever xD)
Author's Response: lol. :) thnx all the same