Date: 11/17/08 02:49 pm Title: [25]
yeah!! I get my wish :)
Date: 11/17/08 02:37 pm Title: [25]
Loved it :D I recognise the situation with the teachers xD They suck -___-' I hope you continue soon :D And Bill better stay with Tom or I'll...!@^!@%^#@~@%!#!#!@$##@%$%&?!@#?$!!!
*coughs* Anyway Loved it Love you ^^
xx Chi ^^
Date: 11/17/08 01:58 pm Title: [25]
Yeah, you updated..This is soon becoming one of my favorite stories. I wish you the best of luck on your nomination and hope you win.
Date: 11/17/08 01:50 pm Title: [25]
oooh, is he going to say yes??? =D x3
Date: 11/17/08 01:01 pm Title: [25]
You repeated something there, you should fix it :P
I liked this chapter, I really hope Bill will say yes :] (something I think he will if not I do not think you would have made Tom ask xD)
Update fast :]
Author's Response: I did? Oh.. thanks for pointing that out. :) ^^ Thanks.
Date: 11/17/08 12:44 pm Title: [25]
Oooooooh! we're getting somewhere! Let them have sex so they really fall in love... Awwww. Sorry sugar and my brain doesn't work so I get a really twisted mind.... But anything with Tom so he can forget Kayen! Yay!
Author's Response: :) thank you.
Date: 11/17/08 03:43 am Title: [24]
HOLY CRAP It's 3am and I have school tomorrow. But I just couldn't stop reading! I read all 24 chapters tonight and I have to say that I LOVE THIS STORY. Keep it up~! You're doing a fantastic job.
As for story ideas..hm I'm not sure :S
Which proves to you I'm definitely no writer. Just a reader :P
Date: 11/16/08 10:32 pm Title: [24]
eeeeek! i nearly jumped off my seat when i saw this was updated! Atleast it wasn't a bloody fist fight, i was happy that only Kayen got knocked out. and i don't know what should happen next, its your story...^_^
Date: 11/16/08 09:27 pm Title: [24]
tom should invite bill to live with him:)
Date: 11/16/08 08:53 pm Title: [24]
i havent reviewed you in a while (was going to last update but something happened after i typed it and it disappeared).
oh shit, this is getting even better, although i do like the parts that are set in the shop better (they give me hope of some pretty kinky shit later on).
sooo when you do write the smut, be sure to add a little spice for me ;).
anyway, im still addicted to this, so keep it up!
Date: 11/16/08 05:53 pm Title: [24]
Well, Kayen should his back. And then Tom and Kayen will fight like the bitches they are, and then Kayen will pull out his knife again, and Bill will be all super scared and Tom will be stabbed in the guts before Bill takes a baseball bat and hits Kayen in the head with it so that he faints.
Lol :D
Date: 11/16/08 04:40 pm Title: [24]
...hmmm I ponder to myself...Bill should get all protective for a second to get Kayen to the hospital the Tom should be his rock and right when Kayen is released he sees Bill and Tom making out in the hospital waiting room. Then Kayen should be really bitter for a bit while Bill and Tom grow closer and feel insulted cause Kayen didn't appreciate them getting him to the hospital when he was drunk. If not that then I have no idea lol. But amazing so far nonetheless!!!
Author's Response: oooh. that gave me a good idea. :) thanks. ^^
Date: 11/16/08 04:35 pm Title: [24]
I'm glad Tom bunched that asshole. I was afraid for a little bit he wouldn't
Date: 11/16/08 04:34 pm Title: [24]
Welllll, Bill has no place to go right? So I suppose he must stay with Tom. Then they make a sexy time. ;) However, Bill obviously doesn't want to have a serious relationship right away after his previous experiences, which will complicate things, of course. Anyhow, I'm sure that you'll come up with something fantastic. :)
Date: 11/16/08 04:28 pm Title: [24]
hmmmmmm. definitely not how i expected it to play out. im slightly confused at bills lack of anything really and disappointed that he would let kayen do anything to him. scratch that, im mad at how bill handled that. what the fuck, but props to tom for taking it into his own hands. though i have a feeling bill may not share my or tom's enthusiasm. though he definitely should. anyways i hope you update soon. really soon. you know i love this story and im really antsy to see what happens next.
Date: 11/16/08 02:35 pm Title: [24]
Hmmmmmm.......Bill freaking out *obligatory thingy* Tom smirking/smiling of course ^^ Bill ranting to Tom and then crying his heart out to Tom and then kissing him and saying that he loves Tomi ^^ So boring xD Anyway, loved the chappie :D I hope you continue soon though ^^
xx Chi
Date: 11/16/08 02:01 pm Title: [24]
HAHA!!! Kayen got what he deserved! Yeah!
Date: 11/16/08 01:57 pm Title: [24]
This chapter was great. My favorite part being when Tom punched Kayen. Muahahahah! But yes, I' not really sure where you should go with this on a long term thing but if you're interested in an idea for the next chapter or something then... hmm... I'd say Tom would take Bill back to his place and granted Bill would be pretty shaken up. I imagine he'd be pretty dishevelled and smell because of Kayen... so I'd have something like Tom has Bill go shower and then he just kinda leaves Bill alone 'cause he thinks he needs space and then... hmm... Bill doesn't really want to be alone and so he goes to Tom for comfort. Whatever "comfort" entails would be whatever, but yeah. Kinda a crappy idea but hey, that's all I've got.