Date: 08/19/08 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 13
damnit, girlie, you have me hooked. =]
i love this story:
its intenseee!!
please upadte soon
Author's Response: i have about 18 chapters done, so i am adding one every time they accept one. waiting on 14 right now. :)
Date: 08/19/08 06:53 am Title: Chapter 12
Definitely good! But honestly I wouldn't like her to cheat on poor Bill, not even for his twin. Not after they've been through together, and not considering his feelings.
Date: 08/18/08 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
*bangs head against wall*
she can't leave billllllllll
oh man. you're killing me
lol
Date: 08/18/08 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
D=
*bursts into tears*
YOU CANT STOP THEREEEEE
UPDATE UPDATE UDPATTEEE
Date: 08/18/08 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
no! drama :( you are a great writer, but i want her and bill to stay together :(
Date: 08/18/08 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG you killed her!
eek!
Date: 08/18/08 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 8
It's sad, ok, I got it. Maybe TOO sad? Come on, DO SOMETHING! You know, the computer can take any changes...
Author's Response: umm,....?rnrnlol I'm not going to chnage anything but wait for chapter 9.
Date: 08/18/08 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
....wow...sad i felt tears in my tears and goosebump :(.....it was great tho.....great
Author's Response: thanks everyone. and i don't really realize how sad the stuff is till i go back and read what i have written from the beginning so i can take it all in.
Date: 08/18/08 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
that was so sad :( good job though :)
Author's Response: i know. :( very sad. and I am posting chapter 9 now. :)
Date: 08/18/08 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
sorry i meant good* i'm retarded :P
Author's Response: haha I understood, no worries. And I just posted chapter 8, it just needs to be approved.
Date: 08/18/08 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
:D this is really dood :) update please
Date: 08/18/08 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
awww i love the way you wrote that love scene =]]
it was pure and sweet and lovely
Author's Response: danke!rnrnand when i read it back after reading it i had an "AWWWW" moment. lol I just wrote how I picture Bill would probably be in real life.rnrnediting chapter 7 as we speak guys. back in a few.rnrn
Date: 08/18/08 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
ace beginning :)
Date: 08/18/08 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
Bad or not, please come on, write! I'm hooked.
Date: 08/18/08 06:32 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow. This just keeps getting better and better, I'm loving every minute of your fanfic its absolutely awesome ^.^
Can't wait for the next chapter.
x
Date: 08/17/08 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
just so you know, i practically screamed when i saw it was a cliffhanger. lol. this is really good, and i really want to know what happened! more please!!