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Reviewer: ShootingStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 10:35 am Title: "It really over, Tom."

sequel!

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 07:37 pm Title: "It really over, Tom."

Okay... :-/. This truly was sad, depressing, sick and twisted. I don't know... Of course I was prepared to read, what I read, but still.. So, so sad. Torturing was well-written and you definitely used a lot of imagination on that. The saddest part was to know from the very beginning that it's not going to stop. I stil wish that Bill would have listened... Maybe torturing was little too intense for me and every now and then I kind of lost the touch to the feelings of the twins. Mostly it was great though.

For my opinion and how I experienced this story, the climax and the most saddest part was actually on quite early on this fic. It was touching till the end, but my heart broke when Bill was cutting "In die nacht" on Tom's skin. It was amazing image, so devastating. It gave so deep emotional crash that I can say, that you really managed to get your effect. Truly great job.

So yes, this was as sick as you warned us about. I'm now quite sad and just want to... I don't know... just be sure, that everything is just fine with our beloved twins. Does it sound weird?

Reviewer: xXXBills_LuvrXXz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/09 01:05 am Title: "It really over, Tom."

*bawlin my eyes out*

ohmeingott i love tom so much why did you have to do that to sweet tomi?

ohmygosh...idk if i should be mad at bill or not...

cause ilove him too!!!

this is so not cool at all mahn *bawlin even harder*

OHMYGOD!!! :*(

Reviewer: Emery Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 04:21 pm Title: "It really over, Tom."

:|

u made me cry u asshole:|

sorry:D

Author's Response: Sorry. >_<

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/09 04:35 am Title: "It really over, Tom."

Shiit.... Omg... Dude... Were you depress when you wrote this or something?

Author's Response: Uhm, no not depressed. Heavily intoxicated possibly. Don't remember. It was written over a year ago, but just posted recently.

Reviewer: FamousPsyco Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/09 06:31 pm Title: "It really over, Tom."

This might be twisted as fuck, but freaking love it. i understand it! it's freakishly amazing, srsly.
so what if it's twisted? we need room for twisted fics and not just love-dovey-fucking, y'know?
i really liked this, i shed a few tears - your writin' took me to another world - and i REALLY want a sequel.
please? *puppy eyes*

amazing, srsly.

twisted fics for the win : D

- famouspsyco.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Sequel (part1) is already posted if your interested. Look for "Deformed"

Reviewer: JumbieLuv Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/09 06:15 pm Title: "It really over, Tom."

im gonna go watch barny now so i don't commit suicide

really depressing!!!!

Author's Response: LoL Barney. Thanks?

Reviewer: JumbieLuv Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/09 06:13 pm Title: "It really over, Tom."

im gonna go watch barny now so i don't commit suicide

really depressing!!!!

Author's Response: =D

Reviewer: Akasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 08:39 pm Title: "It really over, Tom."

I know I already reviewed this but I just had to read it again and now I'm laughing my ass off 'cause this story is so sick but so awesome at the same time and I have Exams tomorrow and it's like 9:30 at night right now and I should be asleep right now but I'm not gonna be able to sleep and this is a really long review and I'm so sorry and I used to be Akuji Seyyuki and I'm just gonna end it now. ^-^

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: LYNgo85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 12:45 am Title: "It really over, Tom."

I read the the notes before I started reading the chapter so I knew that Tom would be the one dying so I got myself ready since he's my favorite, usually when I know something bad is about to happen in a story I'm good but for this story I was pretty much a wreck. I was crying because Tom was dying but at the same time because of the pain it was causing Bill. I loved the story though.

Author's Response: LoL, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: anjaeb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/09 01:53 pm Title: "It really over, Tom."

I'm crying! You're a good writer.

Author's Response: Thank You for the review.

Reviewer: Billcest Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/08 01:46 am Title: "It really over, Tom."

This was intense but AMAZINGLY written!!!!!
I sure do want another sequel!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Part one of the sequel is already posted! Check out the series.

Reviewer: L0UDISLIFE Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/08 11:53 am Title: "It really over, Tom."

Omg.
That was like...
So fucking amazing.
Oh. My. Fucking. God.

I don't like it, I LOVE it.
It's not the wat Bill treats his brother, absolutely not, but the way that you describe it. You can FEEL Tom's love for Bill and his pain.

Damn.
That was like...
*speachless*

Omgosh...

Author's Response: LoL, thank you so much. I really appreciate it. Don't forget to check out the sequel!!! =D

Reviewer: freak Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/08 11:29 am Title: "It really over, Tom."

Wow... Just amazing.
I kinda don't like that Bill tortured Tom and so, but the idea and how you wrote it.. Good Job!!
It was kinda disturbing... :P
But I liked it... ;)

Author's Response: LoL, Thanks for the Review. Don't forget to check out the sequel ;)

Reviewer: alex_go Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/08 06:12 am Title: "It really over, Tom."

OMG.. this is sooo wonderful... not the fact that tom got tortured.. but how it was written... reminds me of one of my stories lol. very well written! Good work.:D

Author's Response: LoL, Thanks for the Review. Don't forget to check out the sequel ;) Tom doesn't get tortured in that one. Dont fret.

Reviewer: WhiteTiger9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/08 05:49 am Title: "It really over, Tom."

Awesome story! I'm crying right now! Really heart-breaking and moving!

Author's Response: LoL, Thanks for the Review. Don't forget to check out the sequel ;)

Reviewer: mrsshorty Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/08 02:54 am Title: "It really over, Tom."

Looking for something different than Tom topping Bill I found your story. And different it was! So I want to compliment you. However I must admit I only made it halfway. It was so cruel. But even that I'm not a kid, I just couldn't take it any more. Guess I'm a pussy than:-) Still, you don't have to like it to recognize a good story. So, thanks!

Author's Response: Oh boy. Was it really that horrible? I have sick mind. I am aware. XD

Reviewer: Devine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/08 11:48 am Title: "It really over, Tom."

wow tomgasm... you did it again. You DID IT AGAIN. You wrote something so devastating and enjoyable, I am just in awe. I'm so glad i read this. It was perfect, it hurt, broke my heart, made me warm again, left me cold, hot... speechless. The emotions were so real and raw and just fucking... left me breathless.

You rock girl!!!! Keep on writing... I love all your fics. My favourite are "Laid to rest" and this one "Deranged".

Great job!!

Author's Response: LoL, Thank you so much! I am glad i was able to write this so well. Don't forget to check out the sequel ;)

Reviewer: TKlvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/08 06:53 pm Title: "It really over, Tom."

YESSSS! I WANT A SEQUEL! ...and now im crying.

Author's Response: LoL, Thanks for the Review. Don't forget to check out the sequel that is now posted ;)

Reviewer: Meep Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/08 06:31 pm Title: "It really over, Tom."

Love it

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. XD

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